Originally posted by: myownarea
oh aru...🤗...this is just perfect :D
u r a fab fab fab writer.........:)
I m glad u started the ff...:)
awesome 🤗
Originally posted by: ridhima_sukirti
Aru awesome FF 👍🏼
Mayank is a football player !! 😳
very well written !! .........continue soon !! 🤗
@Maria..:))
Thanks hun..gald you liked it..Will do that when I update!
@Sindy..:))..*hugs*
I am soo happy you liked it!
@Tapoor..
thanks!
Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
i really love this ff! Gee thanks Mahi..I am soo happy!😳
wow yaar!
u wrote it sooooooooooooooooooo perfectly.......thanks once again!😃
especially these lines
"She did things , abnormally her way
He did things, the normal way
So unique, different and world's apart,
And Yet they connected on a common ground
Neither believed in the existence of true love"
and i loved them to the core.......Thanks thanks thanks!!😆
then i loved how u described things.....
Woh baat jo hotho se kaha nahi jatha
Jise Nighahoon main chupa jaata
Jo Khawboon main hothi hain
Jise dekh kar bhi dekha nahi jaatha
Jise sunke bhi, suna nahi jaatha
Woh -
wow!
and mayank a player?
wow!
and he seemed so nice with her.......
that's grt!
loved it hun!
do update soon and do pm me....Yeah sure..will do that sweets!Thanks once again for teh comment!😳
love,
Mahakthanks a lot Mahak!😳
Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver
gr8 start dear...👍🏼.
luvd d 1st part....👏
especially Mayur's 1st convo..☺️
pls continue soon...🤗
-supriya
awww it was so cute aru!!!!
me wants to read more!!
The strt was jus fab
Loved itLiked the way Nups was defining Mayu wen he was playing footballLiked their meetingMayu's helping nature n Peeping also😆Liked their intro part a lotMayu is he football cahampLoved allUpdate soon plzzzzzzzzzzz
Hey Aru awesum start dear Thanks Rabi..:))😳
i am in love with this. I know what you mean I am in love with them too..😃
n the starting lines
"She did things , abnormally her way
He did things, the normal way
So unique, different and world's apart,
And Yet they connected on a common ground
Neither believed in the existence of true love
He was the Rockstar
She was the ultimate Drama Queen
When Mr. Nerd meets Miss Popular,
There starts the roller-coaster ride
Of many fuzzy events!
One meeting lead to another and another
Entwining them to step up together "
these lines are awesum.....amazing i mean
n then finally 1st part........that was too good......Mayank si basket ball player that sounds good...UMMM no Rabi Mayank is a football player😳. I mean its different na not like basket ball everywhere waise i myself love playing basketball.😆 N loved the Mayur meeting, a genuine one n realistic also, not bumping n all which happens everywhere in my ff also....😆 look i am making fun of me.......😆 that poetry lyrics were just too good........👏👏
n what u have written u were inspired by Rabi, Sanu, n Divz di........Sanu and Divya are awesum writer.......but Rabi, who? Actually my name is also Rabi na so i was confused.......i know i know its not me...... actually i can't be that as i know how much good am i.....opps sorry worst.....😆😆Hehe tahts where you are wrong..I am and was talking about you only Rabi!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆U write really well..Iam learning from the three of you!😳
Well Aru it was amzing start......i loved it
do cont soon.........i am anxious to read further.......😉😊Will do that..as soon as possible!😳
Originally posted by: aish_punk
hey aru..nice part..
nupur n gunjan were new in the college..nice..while goin around the college nupur sees mayank n sorta likes him..nice..she sits next to him in history..n starys writing lyrics since she's bored..he looks over her shoulder..n she's pissed..but he gives her the answer..n they become friends..well sorta!..so they're totally opposite..but still they attract.thnx 4 d PMupdate soon-aish
@Doyel, tehzeeb, Shru, Mayur.forever, Afshanafreen..
Guys tahnks a lott
I am really happy you all liked it!
Will add u to the PM list!
Love
~Aranya
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