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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: gk_fan

heyyyy loved ur ff

speciallllllly the hug and prithvi not letting damni go out of his grip
eagerlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy waiting 4 ur next update
plz add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: alu5123

Loved yr update, & all yr writing. Could u add me to yr PM list.

Thanks

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Posted: 15 years ago
bhai it was not insane......it was simply de best
simplicity....well dats de true and beutiful way of telling sum1 dat u r special 4 me.....it nednt b pomp and show or touching each other all de time......its more dan dat......
and u proved urself.....yaah! u did justice 2 true luv

i luv u bhaiya........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aparajhita

bhai it was not insane......it was simply de best
simplicity....well dats de true and beutiful way of telling sum1 dat u r special 4 me.....it nednt b pomp and show or touching each other all de time......its more dan dat......
and u proved urself.....yaah! u did justice 2 true luv

i luv u bhaiya........

thanksss for such a sweet compliment.😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
i luv too didi😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part sid cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

awesome part sid cont soon

thanks for liking it😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 8

"chalo chalo Mumbai aa gaya" the bus conductor shouted as the bus came to a halt and everybody started moving out of the bus. A young but tall and muscular man about twenty seven years of age dressed in a white colored t-shirt and blue jeans came out of the bus with a handbag in his either hand. He carefully observed his surroundings but his serious expression said it clearly that he was not happy to arrive there. It was late night and he started walking, finding no other source of transport nearby. "Ae hero, kahan ja raha hai?" he stopped walking. "haan be, tujhse hi baat kar rahen hain". Prithvi turned around and found that around 7-8 goons were standing there "chal chal zyada shaanpatti mat dikha, jitna bhi saamaan hai, idhar phek aur nikalle" another one with a chain in his hand told him. Prithvi put his back down but behind him "Aa kar leja" he replied in a heavy and grave voice.

It was nearly dawn when Prithvi reached the apartment his friend had told him to stay in until he found a one for himself. Prithvi had denied at first but his friend had urged him to and also said that instead of renting it to a stranger he could rent it to someone whom he knew already. "But I will pay the same amount as someone else would have done" his friend had laughed and nodded in agreement. As Prithvi entered the flat, and put his bags down he noticed that some blood was still trickling down his arm. He remembered that how one of them had sliced it there with the knife and how he had sent them all running back from where they had come from. He washed the wound with cold water and applied a bandage to it. And then began working out in the house. It was nearly 6 O Clock when he got ready and started cooking the breakfast, his friend had told him that where the things had been kept.

Prithvi was very different from other guys of his age, he did not live for himself instead he did everything so that he could bring a smile on his family's face. He had come to Mumbai when there had been no hope left for him in manali. It was a hill station so there were not many opportunities for a software engineer there. And the job he had been previously done had been his childhood passion and he did everything for just a reasonable but less salary. So when debts that were claimed on his father started increasing he had to come to Mumbai so that he could pay back the money in the given time. Today was his first interview and he got ready for it.

He entered the cabin of the person for whom he was supposed to meet for the interview. The man stood up from his chair and held out his hand in friendly manner and Prithvi also shook his hand in the same way. "Hello Sir I am Mr. Prithvi Saxena of whom you were supposed to take the interview for the programming head of your department" he handed his file to him "Oh hello Prithvi I am Nikhil Desai, the V.P. of the programming branch here, please sit down" he said taking a chair himself. He gazed through the C.V. with much interest "Great you have done you master's degree in computer science, but you do not have much experience of bigger jobs though, do you think you will be able to handle the job?" "Yes Sir, under proper guidance and training I will be able to handle any job" his boss had taken a liking to him because of his friendly and honest attitude "you are hired you will work from tomorrow for 1 month on a trial basis" "thank you sir" he said and bid goodbye.

Prithvi remembered the incident and smiled, he had come a very long way from there, not only he had cleared all the debts in time but he had been so attached to his office in Mumbai that now he couldn't think of leaving it. The most accurate reason for it was the friendly and caring attitude of his boss towards him. He had always considered him as a mentor.

"Damini beta utho tumhe school nahi kya?" a woman in her 40's shouted on top of her voice and a girl came out of the bathroom "Maa wahan koi nahi hai, main yahan hoon" the woman turned to face her with her finger still pointing to the messy bed "Kitni baar kaha hai, isse aise mat choda karo lagta hai koi so raha hai abhi tak" she said as she began cleaning the bed but Damini took the blanket from her hands "main kar deti hoon" and began doing it. Her mother smiled and left the room. When Damini was done she looked herself in the mirror and began giving final touches to her appearance. She reached downstairs and ate the breakfast in a hurry. Then she got out of the house and got on her active.

She reached the school and entered her classroom, all children stood up cheered on seeing her "Good Morning Madam" they chirped in happily. Damini was a teacher in the school and taught value education to the children. Just when her class got over and she was coming out the principal met her "Miss Damini Sharma, we have scheduled a meeting with a sports teacher and he will be here any moment, since you are a very good basketball player yourself could please see that if he is fit for the job or not. Damini nodded in agreement.

She was going to the basketball when she bumped into a muscular chest and bounced back. He was a muscular and handsome looking tall man who had caught her by the waist just when she was about to fall. They shared an eye lock but both of them just straightened them too quickly, "Could you please tell me where would I find Miss Damini Sharma" he asked when she looked at him with an interrogative stare. She at once understood who he was and told him "I am Damini Sharma, now follow me"

Prithvi was pleasantly surprised at the nature of the lady walking in front of him, never ever had a girl had talked to him so rudely when he had visited them for the marriage meeting. He followed her to the basketball court, where she came with the basketball and through it on him suddenly, he caught it and she commanded "wahan basket kar ke dikhao" pointing to the basket in the opposite corner "ji" he shouted, "sunai nahi deta basket karo" "dekhiye'" and before he could continue she snatched the ball from him and "accha ab mujhe basket karne se rokkar dikhao" and she started running to the basket, dribbling the ball. "She is insane surely" Prithvi told himself. She made the basket and turned back, he was still standing on the same place "tum apne aap ko samajte kya ho you arrogant man, tumhe yeh job nahi chahiye kya" "kya?" Prithvi repeated "agar basketball khelna nahi aata toh phir yahan aaye kyon, meri shakal dekhne" she taunted him "ji haan aaya to isiliye tha par ab mujhe lagta hai mai hi galat tha jo mom ki baat maankar yahan aagaya"

He turned to leave the court but Damini hit his back with the ball unable to get him properly "you know tum bahut hi arrogant ho, baat to aise kar rahe ho jaise ladki dekhne aaye ho". Prithvi stood for a second trying to calm himself but couldn't "haan, main ladki dekhne hi aaya tha aur tumse milke mujhe pata chal gaya mera kya faisla ho ga" he raged and left the court leaving a shell shocked Damini behind.

She had mistaken him so much then and now she was cuddling lovingly into his arms, the thought struck both of their minds together as they remembered how long they had come from that day. They hated each other then and could have lived for the rest of their lives but now they couldn't live for a day without seeing each other.

P.S. the next few parts will be continued with more of the past memories now.😊
hope you like these.
Edited by -Sid- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum bro ... gr8 job yaar ... hmm ... pehle mulaqaar main takraar ... rem their first meet in the show ... aww man ... miss them like hell ... nyways ... awesum update ... luv it ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hehe ... naicee flashbacks Sid ... very well written !
And both of them now tied in the bond of matrimony is just AWESOME
-- Rach
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Posted: 15 years ago
i lkd d flashbk track...n mulaqat takrrar gud as well.......

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