V-day night (AK) one-shot

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey!

here's another one-shot and this is on Angad-Kripa. This is my first one on the couple, so i'd really like to know how it was!

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V-Day night
 

Kripa dressed up in a red saree, with slight make-up and went to the party. Some of the men's gaze turned to her when she entered. She got conscious and walked upto some of her friends who were present there.

 

" Kripa! Thank god u came.." Muskaan grinned hugging her.

 

" muski if u call me..i'll definitely come na.." she said smiling.

 

" hi kripa" rahul welcomed her after noticing she had come.

 

" hi rahul" she hugged him. Muskaan gave her a warning glance.

 

" oops sorry!" she winked.

 

Muskaan smiled at her naughtiness.

 

" waise kripa..angad nahi aaya kya?" Prithvi, her annoying friend asked.

 

" voh aata hi hoga…waise bhi tumhe isse kya matlab?" she shot at him.

 

" nahi agar voh hamesha ki tarah nahi aane waala hai..to tum mere saat dance kar sakti ho.." he flirted.

 

" prithvi! Valentines day par hamesha apne valentine ke saat dance karna chahiye.." Muskaan interrupted

 

" jo tum nahi ho.." Kripa completed with a fake smile.

 

" whatever..main to sirf tumhe help karni ki koshish kar raha tha..waise bhi I'll get 100 other girls.." he said proudly and walked away.

 

" loser!" Rahul commented.

 

All 3 of them sat down on the table they had reserved waiting for Angad and Mishti to come.

 

The music started playing and the DJ invited everyone to the dance floor. Rahul looked at Muskaan expectantly and she in turn, looked apologetically at Kripa. Kripa smiled a forgiving smile.

 

Rahul  held Muskaan's hand and took her to the dance floor. Kripa sat there bored, and irritated with Angad.

 

She saw Rahul-Muskaan grooving to the number " Uff Teri Ada" . She smiled looking at them, they made such a cute couple. Intially the way they used to fight, noone ever thought that they would fall in love! This world is really unpredictable, she thought.

 

She shut her eyes out of frustration, Angad is a sore loser! She picked up her phone and dialed his number.

 

" hi jaan.." he said sweetly.

 

" angad..tum ho kaha!" she muttered gritting her teeth.

 

" abhi raaste main hoon..10 min main aa jaunga.." he said.

 

" jaldi aana..ya phir kisi ko aur ke saat valentines manane ka chakkar to nahi hai na?" she asked suspicious.

 

" nahi jaan..tumhare bina voh else can tolerate me!" he smiled.

 

" okay..come soon.." she said melting.

 

" yah bye.." he kissed the phone.

 

Kripa looked around again. Everyone seemed to be dancing, she was the only one sitting alone. Even Prithvi had found a girl, with a little black dress to dance with.

 

She sighed and waited.

 

 

Finally Angad arrived, he saw Kripa sitting on the table lonely and felt bad. He sneaked up to her chair and whispered in her ear " main aa gaya" .

 

Kripa turned back to look at him but he had gotten the flower bouquet her had got for her, in front of his face. She smiled looking at it and took it from him. Then she noticed his apologetic face. She pinched his cheeks hard in a 'sorry'.

 

" ab chale?" he asked putting his hand forward.

 

" sure!" she said taking his hand.

 

As soon as they reached the dance floor , the song changed to Bakhuda Tumhi Ho. Kripa blushed while Angad smirked.

 

tumhi ehsaason mein…
tumhi jazbaaton mein…
tumhi lamhaaton mein…
tumhi din raaton mein…

 

Angad pulled Kripa into his arms n they did a slow dance.

 

Bakhuda… tumhi ho,
Har jagah, tumhi ho…
haan main dekhun jahaan jab…
uss jagah… tumhi ho…

 

She came out of his embrace and ran away from him.

 

ye jahaan… tumhi ho,
wo jahaan… tumhi ho…
iss zameen se falak ke…
darmiyaan… tumhi ho…

 

He held the end of her saree and pulled her back so hard, that she hit his chest.

 

 

Tum hi ho, beshumaar,
Tum hi ho..
Tum hi ho, mujh mein haan,
Tum hi ho..Tum hi ho..
Hooo….

He kissed her lightly on the cheek and she kissed him on his. Both of them blushed hard.

Kaise bataye tumhe,
Aur kis tarah yeh,
Kitna tumhe hum chahte hai,
Saaya bhi tera dikhe,
To paas jaake,
Usmein simat hum jaate hai,

He kissed her nape, and shivers went down her spine. She tried hard not to lose yourself but she could'nt help it. She closed her eyes due to the intoxication.

 

Raasta tum hi ho,
Rehnuman tum hi ho,
Jiski khwahish hai humko,
Wo panah tum hi ho,
Tum hi ho, beshumaar,
Tum hi ho..
Tum hi ho, mujh mein haan,
Tum hi ho..

He pointed at her, moving far apart from her. She smiled sweetly at him.

Tu hi ehsason mein,
Tu hi jazbaton mein,
Tu hi lamhaton mein,
Tu hi din raaton mein..

She went really close to him and made their noses meet. Both of them closed their eyes happily.

Kaise bataye tumhe,
shab mein tumhare,
Khwaab haseen jo aate hai,
Kaise bataye tumhe,
Lamz wo saare,
Jism ko jo mehkate hai

He held her shoulders and turned her around and nuzzled his face in her hair .

Iftida tum hi ho
Intehaan tum hi to
Tum ho jeene ka maksad
Aur wajah tum hi ho..

He kissed her passionately on her nape which made her gasp.

Bakhuda tumhi ho,
Har jagah tumhi ho,
Haan mein dekhua jahan jab,
Uss jagah tumhi ho,
Yeh jahan tumhi ho,
Wo jahan tumhi ho,
Iss zameen se falak ke,
Darmiyaann..tumhi ho,
Tum hi ho, beshumaar,
Tum hi ho..
Tum hi ho, mujh mein haan,
Tum hi ho..Tum hi ho..
Hooo….
Ho ho ho..
Hoo…

 

She turned around to face him, and made their lips meet. The song ended but they were'nt done kissing.

 

After the song ended, all the couples got off the stage but saw Angad-Kripa still lost in their kiss.

 

Muskaan started clapping enthusiastically and everyone else joined in. They both heard the noise and looked around. They just realized what had happened, and blushed hard.

 

They got off the stage, and went to join the others on the table.They sat down and ordered for some drinks. Muskaan opened the champagne and sang " aaj ka shaam angad aur kripa ka dance ke naam" .

 

" aur kiss ke naam bhi " Rahul teased.

 

" shutup rahul..hum dekh rahe the tu kya kar raha tha vahan.." Angad smiled naughtily.

 

" main to bas dance kar raha tha!" Rahul said innocently.

 

" aur muskaan ke shirt ke andar haat kaun daal raha tha?" Angad winked.

 

Muskaan turned red and Rahul tried to cover it up, " tu bhi na..kya kya bolta rehta hai!"

 

Kripa smiled at the cute banter between the two friends. Later, Mishti and uninvited Prithvi joint them too and they had a blast.

 
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i know it was pretty long, but eh, hope u did'nt get bored!
 
leave ur comments and tell me how to improve too...
 
-aish

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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏Awesome , Awesome Dear So Sweet Thank You For Pm Contiii Writing .👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey aish !!  
that was a very very cute one hun !! :)
a nice read :) :)
 
thanks for the pm :D
Fab !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was sooooo sweeet.

Kripa annoyance quickly faded when she saw Angad

And the kiss!! soooo hot and sweet

Thanks for writing on AK

You did a great job
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
nadz - edit soon!
 
monika - aww thanks..np.
 
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NYPunjabi - lol yeah..she cant stay angry with him on that night atleast! ;)..lol thanks..
 
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nice short story.................
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Such a cute shot..great job hun
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lovely one.