My Vision-Armaan/KSG entry.Pls Read'3rd-part'pg-11 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

nice part........omg omg that dr is armaan right?im dying for ridhima armaan reunion.....i want them to be together once and for all

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Rikks sachhi batana is this is possible..I m depressed ,broken right now.
dunno why on earth they had created such complications in AR relation??
Why they can't remain together forever...
If this would happen than shyad main khushi se hi mar jaoon.
plz God CVS ko ye track pada do.Plz god help us KSGIANS nd AR fans r in trouble.need u............. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This was an amazing episode.i loved it
if such of type things happen and armaan comes back

awwww that will be the best thing

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey, it is just so brilliant, the way keerthi was refusing to give permission and stuff was very realsitic.. and needless to say the last part was my favorite, because it has to be armaaan, the bond of atul and nikki was kept intact which was nice. and i soo wish that the CVs incorporae your storyline casue we all want him back, and ridhimma with him.
great job, thanks for the pm and will be looking forward to more. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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plz ARMAAN ko waapus lay aao...aur SID ka RIDDHIMA kay saath chaptr khatam karo!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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at first.....i m sorry for commenting late....

this part too was awesome.....👏👏
i wish CVs ko bhi aise ideas aaye!!😉
nd plz continue ur story.....i want to see what happens next!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh GOD wat a sory mindblowin keep it up nd continue plzzzzzzzzz>>>>>>>..........>>>>>>>>>>>
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey i sippose i m dmost late to comment.. sry bt i must compliment... simply outstandin... keep continuing
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sanjeevani

Riddhima's Cabin

She is holding a photo of Armaan and is crying her heart out (BG'score-Dont say Alvida (Sad version from the movie Main Aur Mrs Khanna)

Guys i had made a VM on the same song, but its not purely on KaJen,it has all the three Riddhima's (Shilpa,Sukirti,Jennifer)...along with Rahul,Muskaan,Atul,Anjie and Nikki...and all those who adores him....This VM is my interpretation of what DMG has become after Armaan/KSG left the show.The Masti,Hasi,Mazak,Khushi and the positive vibe which was the speciality of Dill Mill Gayye seems to have lost somewhere....

Link:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=980805&PID=27046365&#27046365

Riddhima: Looking at the photo and then holding it close to her Heart, with tears rolling down "Armaan tum Mujhe is tarah akele chod ke kyu chale gaye?" Kya humara pyaar ithna kamzor tha?" Kya mere pyaar mein koi kami thi?" Maine tumse bahuth ladaayi ki hai...apni bathoon se tumhe bahuth takleef aur dukh di hai par maine kabhi bhi ek pal ke liye bhi yeh nahi chaha ke tum mujhse dhoor chale jaao.....Looking at the photo"Armaan kya maine kabhi bhi tumhe yeh ehsaas diya hai ki agar tum mere zindagi se chale gaye toh hi main khuish reh paoongi???....Then why....Kyu......????... "Nahi toh..." she was stunned by the voice that she heard, she desperately wanted to look for the source of the voice so familiar, a voice which always kept echoing in her ears, a voice which was etched in the inner depths of her heart,which had blended with her soul even before she realized it....but she felt it hard for her to even turn and look around...a sudden numbness had gripped her.....

Standing beside her chair clad in a simple white shirt and blue faded jeans...he looked at her....and then gradually his lips parted into the most enchanting smile ever and his cheeks parted ways for the dimples to set in...Her heart melted on seeing him smile...A smile which could tend even the most severely bruised heart.....his face shone in the almost dark room reflecting its purity & serenity....he turned her chair to face him....and then slowly bending forward towards her face he kissed away the tears rolling down her cheek..She gasped at his action and her lips finally gave away his name...."Armaan"....She touched his face,his forehead,his eyes,cheeks trying hard to convince herself of his presence....and yet again crying uncontrollably she flung herself into his arms...

Riddhima: "Armaan Tum Mujhe chod ke kyu chale gaye??"......she held him closer and closer not wanting to let go of him.....He gently caresses her hair and kisses it..How Riddhima wished time would come to a standstill and she could stay this way forever in his secure and loving embrace....After what seemed like ages Armaan slowly pulls Riddhima away sits on his knees and cups her face....involuntarily she too keeps her hands above his which was now resting on her cheeks.....

Armaan: "Main tumhe kabhi chod ke jaa saktha hoon kya?" Riddhima looks at him all confused and teary eyed.....Armaan takes her right hand in his own and places it over her heart....Her gaze follows the trail made by thier hands towards her heart and then looks back at him..."Main Toh Hamesha se yahan hoon, Tumhare Dil Mein...Mujhe Yahan se Koyi Nikaal Saktha hai kya???? Armaan's question leaves her stunned.....as he continues...."Naraazgi mein hi sahi par jab tumne bhi mujhe yahan se nikaalne ki koshish ki ...Kya tum kabhi kamyab ho paayi ho......????" he raises his eyebrows as if probing her to give a reply......When she says nothing and simply continues to stare at him..... he continues..."Riddhima....I LOVE YOU"....Riddhima closes her eyes, completely satisfied and happy, allowing his each words to sink in her......"Main Tumse Bahuth Pyaar Kartha hoon....."She opens her eyes tears of joy freshly brimming in her eyes....as he continues "Agar koi mujhse pooche ki kithna pyaar.....Toh shayaad iska jawab mein kabhi na de paoon....Kyuki iska koi jawab hi nahi hai"....and then to lighten the mood a bit he says "Aur phir waise bhi duniya mein aaj tak aaisi koi machine ya instrument nahi bani jo mera pyaar ko thol sake....."...saying this he winks at her.....

Riddhima: Breaks into a small laughter on hearing this...seeing her a bit more relaxed and that beautiful smile appear on her lips he too smiles....."Aur Kabhi scientists ne aaisi machine bana di toh???"

Armaan: Looks at Riddhima who is having a small cute muskhurahat on her face and then in tone filled with all the love and passion he has for her says the most beautiful words"....Tab bhi mere dil mein tumhare liye kithna pyaar hai woh machine kabhi nahi thol sakthi"...Riddhima's smile dissappears the moment she hears this and her eyes suddenly is captured by his.....the sight leaves her awestruck.....his eyes sparkled with truth and intensity of the love he has for her...confirming that every single word he said was true and probably the biggest truth of his life....Her trance was broken when she heard him say "Tum Meri Zindagi ho Riddhima....Tumhare Bina Armaan kuch bhi nahin...."Hearing this she hugs him and silent prays (Voice of her Heart)" Please Bhagwaan ji mujhe mere Armaan se kabhi alag math karnma...Kabhi nahi".....suddenly memories of what Sid said to her regarding how he had used his Body Heat to keep her alive gushes into her mind....The smile fades away from her face and she slowly pulls away from the hug.....

Riddhima: "Armaan mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baath karni hai..."He looks at her and urges her to go on....she get up from her chair and walks towards the window....."Armaan...woh ....main.." her heart starts to beat erratically....she finds it hard to breath....Tears starts making their way again rolling down her cheeks...."Why god why????? Why did all this have to happen to me....Few mins ago you gave me the most beautiful moments of my life, the moments which i want to cherish forever.....moments which i would never want to end....and the next moment they are shattered because of the harsh reality of my life...."...Main yeh baath Armaan ko kaise bathaoon.....(She remembers all those moments where she had promised to be his forever....) "Agar maine yeh baath use batha dhi....toh kahin phir se mujhe chod kar chala na jaaye...."..."Nahin Armaan ko sach bathana hi padega"....(Her mind and heart was at battle)....Then making up her mind..." Main Armaan se sachayi nahi chupa sakthi.....Chahe kuch bi ho jaaye....Armaan se mein kabhi kuch nahi chupa sakthi....Kabhi nahi"......"Armaan" calling his name she turns to face him to find that she was all alone in the room...."Armaan"...."Armaan"...."Kahan Chala gaya???"....

Calling his name she walks out of the room....."Shayad cafeteria gaya hoga"....not finding him anywhere she frantically starts searching for him.."Armaan..."Armaan...." A number of heads turn arround....astonishment written all over their face to see the ever so pretty Dr.Riddhima in a dishevelled Appearence........

Riddhima:
"Nurse aapne Armaan ko dekha....." Nurse nods her head saying no......Ridhima walks up to Omar Bhai..."Omar Bhai aapne Armaan ko Dekha"

Omar Bhai: "Riddhima Bitiya....Dr.Armaan... Sanjeevani mein????

Riddhima: Haan Omar Bhai...Armaan mujhse milne aaya tha......Patha nahi kahan chala gaya.....

She leaves an all stunned Omar bhai....and keeps searching.....slowly her legs give away and she starts to feel weak.....still determined to find Armaan she drags her self along the hospital corridor when her body too gives up....she faints and falls, only to land safely into the Hands of Dr.Abhimanyu Modi....Abhi's face looses it color....shock written all over his face on seeing the tiny figure whom he had caught just in time before the person landed on the floor.....He couldn't believe what he saw......one of the best and most promising doctors of Sanjeevani and more over his dear friend Riddhima was the one lying in his arms....and she was as pale as death.....Suddenly jolting out of his senses he calls her name.."Riddhima"..."Aankhen kholo Riddhima"....He pats on her cheeks and when there was no response....he lifts her in his Arms and takes her to the Ward....

In The Room

Abhi: Checking her pulse,First Radial and then Carotid....which was beating at a lower pace.....He goes towards her feet and rubs them to make them Warm....."Common Riddhima ....common"....he then goes on to check her airway and breathing which was a bit shallower....."Sister...Mask lagao Jaldi"......He moves towards the foot of the Bed and rolls the lever to raise the foot of the bed to approx 10-12 inches from its normal inclination,which would make blood flow to the Brain faster and easier......

After Almost 30-40 min

Abhi: Checks her pulse once again which was slower but steadier now....He looks at the thin fragile body lying beneath the white covers.....and his mind wanders back in time...How this one person played the most important role in making him realise his love"Nikki"....How she had stood by their relationship...that now he and Nikki were ven engaged......Comming back to Reality,he looks at Riddhima..."Was she the same person who was once the synonym of Cheerfulness????....or was this a starnger who had taken up her place".....Keeping his hand on her forehead he asked "Yeh kya haalath bana di hai tumne Riddhima?"...."Koi kisise itna pyaar kaise kar saktha hai...?" and then realising the silliness of his question "Dr.Abhimanyu Modi.....we are talking about Armaan-Riddhima here.....and its very mush possible...very much"......

He is inspecting the Drip bottle when Atul and Nikki Barges in....

Nikki: Nikki who is a little shaken walks upto Riddhima and with out moving her gaze, which is fixed on her dear friend asks in a shaky Voice "Kya...Kya hua Riddhima Ko???"

Abhi: Sensing that Nikki is really shocked on seeing Riddhima like this walks up to her..."Relax Nikki....Riddhima ko kuch nahi hua hai.....Woh behosh hogayi thi.....But she is absolutely fine now......"

Atul on seeing his Ridzy in such a state....finds it hard to control the tears welling up in his eyes....he quietly walks away from the Bed towards the window...Abhi on seeing this leaves Nikki after making sure that she has recovered from her initial shock.....and walks upto Atul and places his hand on Aul's shoulder....

Abhi:
Pareshaan math ho Atul, Riddhima ab teek hai...

Atul to Abhi :
Who couldnt take it anymore catches hold of Abhi's hand and drags him towards Riddhima's Bedside...Pointing towards Riddhima..."Yeh teek hai???" finding it hard to speak he still managed to carry on.....Yeh humari Ridzy....dekh iski haalath....kithni kamzor ho gayi hai.....kya se kya ban gayi hai....Iski kya galathi thi yaar.....Isne kisi ka kya bighada tha ki iske saath ithna kuch hogaya.....

Abhi knew all the questions Atul put forward were true but these were questions to which nobody had any answers..Nikki who all this while was silently, sitting near Riddhima holding her hand places it slowly on the bed and walks towards Abhi and Atul....

Nikki: Riddhima humari dost hai....hum sabki sabse achi dost....uski hasi,khushi aur zindagi ab humari zimmedari hai.....Jiske liye....Jis pyaar ke liye woh din raath ithna kuch seh chuki hai.....woh paar adhura nahi reh saktha.....

Atul and Abhi nod their head in agreement....

Nikki: Hum uski mohabbat ko haarna nahi denge...humari aakhon se saamne din bar din woh toothi jaa rahi hai.....Aaisa nahi ho saktha...hum aaise hone nahi denge......aur phir humari dosti bhi toh nahi haar sakthi (Hinting at their friendship towards Riddhima and also Armaan)....

Nikki to Atul: Armaan ko wapis laane ke liye tumhare aur Dr.Siddhnat ke saath main bhi chaloongi....

Atul: Nahi Yaar Nikki iski koi zaroorath nahi hai...Main aur Sid kal Subah Subah hi nikal jaayenge....Aur waise bhi is waqt Ridzy go tumhare sabse zyada zaroorth hai.....

Abhi:
Atul Teek keh raha hai Nikki.....Mujhe bhi lagtha hai tumhe Riddhima ke saath rehna chahiye....

Nikki: Looks at both Abhi and Atul and in a voice very calm yet authoritative says "Maine faisla le chuki hoon"....saying this she turns to face Riddhima....Her heart cries out seeing Riddhima all lifeless.....

Atul: Par Nikki.........(His sentence is cut in b/w)

Abhi: Nahi Atul woh nahi maanegi....Aakhir Riddhima ke baad Armaan pe sabse zyada haq to Nikki ha hi hai.....

Atul nods his head agreeing to every single word Abhi said.....both of them turn to look at the stranger lying on the bed....who had taken the place of their Dearest Friend Riddhima.....

END OF EPISODE 3

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Hi Guys.....I was not sure whether to continue with the writing or not.....everything abt yesterday's episode left me stunned an speechless....But here is Episode-3......Hope all of you will like it and enjoy reading it as the previous two episodes.....Do check on the Dont say Alvida VM as i am sure it will give you a feel of the current situation.....Thank you for all your support and comments......Hoping to see more.....

Request:It would be really nice of all of you if Comments regarding the VM is posted in the specific thread......😊

A question to the readers: Please tell me should i still continue writting......as i am having a hard time making up my mind......😕

Edited by rickks - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: farzanairani

it really beautifull

friendship and dr keerti love for his intren is also beautiful the care and love she had for them
please give this to cv dmg will be back to it position and all fan heart



thankyou sooo....much....really happy ki u liked it

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