MayUr FF *Phir Milenge* (Last) Part 19 @ Pg 147 - Page 39

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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry dear..
i'm replyin so late .. had my MBA exams...
& abt d update luvd it dear...
Sanu ke convos wr mindblowin....
pls update soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey, Daksha

Great update dear

Nupur ne to hadd kar di.. Bechara Samrat

Continue asap

Love,
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Posted: 15 years ago
My Part in Green and Nupur's part in Purple

Huff.....bala tali.....arre Samrat jo chala gaya......Party ho jaaye......we twist...we twist.....par meri kahaani mein toh twist hi twist hain.......

"Tune kya kaha Samrat se" Mummy pulled my ears.......

"Zaroor toone hi usse kuch kaha hoga...... tujhe kya poori zindagi ghar mein baithna hai" Mom said

Shuru ho gayi meri mummy......blah blah blaaaaaaaah......

I was listening to her without any interest.....

"Ek baar teri shaadi ho jaaye......bas" Mom said

"Nahin mummy....tum kaho toh main char baar shaadi kar loon......par tum ek dhang ka piece le aao.....ek baar hi bohot hai" I said.

"Ab dhang ka piece hi laaungi......aur usse dekh kar ulte seedhe moonh banaaye na.....toh soch leejiyo....

Actually meri mummy ko na meri shaadi ki aisi jaldi hai......jaise main ek icecream hoon aur meri shaadi nahin huyi toh main melt ho jaaungi......par har maa ko apni ladki ki shaadi ki chinta rehti hai..... par ab zamaana badal gaya hai......aaj mere paas bangla hai....(actually nahin hai....wo mere papa ka hai)......gaadi hai...(gaadi bhi papa ki hai....meri scooty hai).....daulat hai.....paisa hai.....(hai bhale hi thoda ho.....) toh main shaadi kyun karoon kisi aire gaire se........

Hi this side Daksha........Nupur bohot bolti hai......anyone missing Mayank...... I always miss him.....toh chalein usske ghar......arre Mayank ke ghar.......

Mayank's house......only he and his mom are there....usske Dad ki toh death ho gayi thi pehle hi......

Mayank too scored good rank from college....and he is in the same city of Nupur but works in another office.......

You can see a smart, handsome man enters into the house.....steps down from his bike......and goes inside the house......calling his mother.... "Maa"........

"Aa gaya beta office se".......his mom said.....

"Haan maa"....he said....

"Fresh ho jaa......main khana lagati hoon"...mom said

The man enters into the bathroom.......standing beneath the shower......ruffling his hairs.....turns his face......its Mayank (aur kya Mayank ke ghar mein koi aur toh hoga nahin)

He comes back to the dining table......after eating the food.....Mayank was watching cricket match on TV......his mom cames...... "Dekh......kaisi hai ye ladki....."

Without seeing the photo...... "Kya mummy.......phir se nahin"

"Ek baar beta......maine pehle bhi....tujhe sirf do ladkiyon ki photo hi dikhaayi hai....aur toone unhein manaa kar diya......" his mom said

"Par nahin.....mujhe abhi shaadi nahin karni hai....." Mayank said.....

"Photo nahin dekhni toh seedhe milne chalna hai ? Ye bohot acchi hai.......kitni pyaari si hai.....aur shayad ye tere hi college mein thi......ek baar photo dekh le bas....." his mom said

And she shows the photo to Mayank......Mayank sees it and it was of Nupur.......

He reacts "Ye.....ye toh Nupur hai....."

"Tu jaanta hai isse...." his mom said "Kaisi hai....toh kal chalega?"

Mayank said "Nahin"

"Phir nahin......ye photo main tere paas chod jaati hoon......pehle aaraam se sochna......manaa karne se pehle mujhe ye bataana ki issmein kharaabi kya hai......phir hi main teri baat maanungi"

She leaves Mayank with Nupur's photograph........

And here in Nupur's house.....something same same........Nupur too watching cricket match......she too loves cricket......

Then her mom arrives........

She gave the photo to Nupur......but Nupur kept it aside......

"Rakh de abhi side mein......par mujhe kal subah tak jawaab chahiye.....koi bahaana nahin......failure hai......topper hai.....jaisa bhi hai..... manaa karne se pehle das bar sochna......aur kuch kharaabi ho toh aaraam se sochna...... phir hi main sochoongi"

Nupur didn't responded to her......between the ad she picked up the photo and saw that it was Mayank........

Ab main bataati hoon.......main kaun.....main Nupur......

Mayank......mayank ka photo........isse toh bilkul bhi shaadi nahin karni......par Mayank apne liye ladki dhoond raha tha.....main mummy ko manaa kar doongi........par kahoongi kya.......

Aur ye sochte sochte main room mein aa gayi........I lied on my bed.......watching the ceiling......Mayank toh failure bhi nahin hai.....badtameez bhi nahin hai......flirt bhi nahin hai......wo mujhse ladaa bhi nahin aaj tak........

Tabhi mujhe ek aur Nupur dikhaayi deti hai.......wo main hi thi jo apne dil ki bol rahi thi.........

"Balki wo toh wo hai.....jisse tum dhoond rahi thi Nupur.......intelligent, smart, understanding........yahi qualities chahiye thi na......."she said

"Par wo Mayank hai.......how can he be......main usse shaadi kar loon?" I said

"Kyun nahin......agar wo tumhein accha lage toh kya buraai hai.....wo tumhaare caliber ka hai...... tumhein compliment karega.....ek baar milke dekhna chahiye" she said......

"Haan......ek baar milna chahiye......ek baar usse jaan ne ka mauka bhi toh milna chahiye" as I said that......Nupur speaking from my heart disappeared.......

I kept the photo on the side table and went to sleep.........

Mayank's house.......

Mayank was sitting on the couch gazing at the photograph.....

Mayank's POV

Nupur......maine kabhi nahin socha tha ki main Nupur se shaadi ?? College mein kabhi baat nahin ki......aur aaj aise.....haan maa ko wo asand hai par maine usse kabhi theek se nahin jaana.......main kaise usse shadi kar loon.......main ek intelligent, confident life partner chahta tha.....aur Nupur mein wo dono hi qualities hain........maa ko bhi pasand hai......toh main maa ko haan keh doonga milne ke liye........

And he started watching the match again........

Next morning.......

Nupur's House......

Nupur's Mom (NM): Haan bata......tujhe ladka pasand hai.......

N: Haan mummy main usse milne ke liye tayaar hoon......

NM: Ye toh bohot acchi baat hai......main abhi pjone karti hoon.......

NM was going to pick the phone.......when the phone rang......she picked it.......it was Mayank's mom

MM: Ji namaste.....main Mayank ki mummy bol rahi hoon.......

NM: Namste main aapko hi phone karne waali thi......

MM: Humein Nupur bohot pasand hai......ek baar milna chahenge bas.....

NM (smiles): Ji zaroor......toh aap bataaiye......

MM: Shaam ko kaisa rahega......

NM: Bilkul theek......shaam ko milte hain.....

MM: accha ji......

So tight up your seat belts......next update Mayank Nupur will meet officially......
Ye part kaisa laga comment zaroor karna

Edited by .Daksha. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dakshu.............

awesome update dear

arre wah dono ki mom gr8 hai yaar

can wait for nxt update

mayur are gonna meet

im sooooo happy

chalo i hopewth my comment i have encoaged u to write the bnxt part

pls update soon

love pebbzzyy

Edited by ..pebo.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part...looking forward to MayUr's official meeting!
continue soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago

wowwwwwwwwwwww awesome

yipppppppeeeeeeeeee mayur are gonna meet finally..............😳😳
continue sooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.........................😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely daksha....
loved it..
cant wait for the next part..
thanx for the pm and do continue soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
edited dakshu

thank god u updated

me firstt😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
😃 😃 😃 I just loved the part yaar 😃 😃 😃
I loved the way u wrote it...Nupur ke angle se..mayank ke thoughts, Gunjan ke bhi..
very nice n real , the way Mayank n Nupur decide to meet each other, super sweet :)
I m so lookind fwd to their meeting 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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arre waah! MayUr phir milenge & the sparks will fly!😍 can't wait 2 read ur next update Daksha!😃
Edited by bhavana92 - 15 years ago

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