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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: radhika5

Hi Sia

What can I say about your updates...I was speechless before and did not have adequate words to comment. So last time, I used "Devika words in quotes"....

You are absolutely amazing and how you can write so much and it all flows so smoothly--and the emotions you bring out by your descriptions is mindblowing. RaDev chemistry all over again--Romantic parts are well penned. As you had said previously, it is always difficult to find that right balance....but you did it and did that well. I am sure it took a lot of your time for writing the last 4 updates----THANK YOU👏👏

I am not very good using the emoticons and the pictures, but i truly mean it when I say THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR TIME AND EFFORT.

Bringing back Gudiya moment was a beautiful touch.. I hope that the CB2 writers read this stuff and have the childhood storyline similar to the one in your FF. If they did that, it would turn out to be really great.

Sia, you are truly gifted and I know it sometimes pains you not to see many "likes"..But I think, it is because there are many silent readers (I wish they would at least press the like button) who either do not know to press the like button or just forget. i used to be one of those in the beginning, until someone told me--that pressing like button was akin to "thank you"....

There are many of us who love your FF and are always looking forward to it...and we will be there to read it, as long as you are willing to write one..

I can only say, once again, is you are very gifted as a writer--your story is beautiful, romantic , love saga that has touched many of us...


Thank you dear.........Thanks a lot again!! 🤗 for all these loving, inspiring words!! I obviously didnt mind you using Devika's words and even mentioned in my note......that i loved it a lot 😳 But am happy to hear that again......that you'd enjoyed the previous parts very very much 😃

True, its difficult to bring a balance in such parts.....and thats the reason why it took me so long to write and edit it. But in the end......when you all loved it, my efforts felt rewarded 😊 Thanks for this message dear......i really loved reading it and it gave me the boost! 😃

Coming to the updated part......I am glad you loved the Gudiya part again. Since there isnt much interaction between little RaDev, there werent many moments. But since my readers asked for......i tried one more. Am glad that it coincided with the revealing of little Dev and Radhika in the show!! I Hope that CB2 writers bring in an sweet love story as well........😃 like mine?😃 😳 Thanku!

Sometimes it does pain when you dont see enough response from the readers, and that makes you feel low. I didnt want to sound greedy......because there had been many responses from you all people......just wanted to open my mind. Who else can i do that other than my readers 😊 I just respect each and every word of all your comments, the single press of Like button and even the small Thank You. 😃

And........Thanks a lot......a ton again for this sweet message dear. I am very very happy to see every word of your appreciation and compliments 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗!! Truly, it warms my heart 😃 and makes me smile big for my efforts are being appreciated!!



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chalhov

Sia liked the morning after SR😉and then the beautifdul day spent out the mobike ride Radhikas fear the temple gaon visit the Gudiya ballons nature enjoyable carefree day spent out side 😃and the Birju episode the aarti ,the phonecall the devar babhi teasing 😛😉dadi scolding 😆😃and then the newly weds cant keep themselves from each other and find all types of excuses to touch each other.😳😉 The way u narrate is very good and naturally this is the newly wedded DEv and Radhikas HM.😃Loved the updates😃


Hey Dear.......I am so so glad that you loved all the parts so much...........from the morning after SR 😳 to the bike ride........to the roaming around........finally to the ahem.....😳 Thanks a lot for your inspiring and supportive words dear.......that really helps, boosts your confidence and makes you work harder 🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -priyanka-

Sia*hugs*finally I caught up with ur ff. Needless to say I LOVED all the updated parts. The part where radhika goes to her maayka and both miss and yearn for the other's company was beautifully portrayed by you. Loved how dadi made dev understand radhika's dilemma and loved how he did all those things for making it a really special evening for them both *sigh* why can't there be more devs in this world*goes into dreamy mode* I really enjoyed their banter and cute romance in the car. The I Love You card was so romantic and ya the boat ride too.The SR part *blushes hard*,*takes long breathes*,*drinks water*... Ok that was one HAWT and sensous update. No it certainly was NOT blatant or vulgar in any way....glad you brought birju in ur ff and ya really like his bonding dev and the purohits. Dev and his gudiya<3... They are so so adorable...hehe the way little dev stomped his foot and gudiya too did the same following him was so cute*pulls both their cheeks*. Thanks so much for including them. The bike ride, them exploring the graden together, dev becoming nostalgic thinking about his childhood memories and his chachi, their sweet romantic moments... Enjoyed every bit of it. Thank you so much sia for all ur hardwork, effort and time in giving us there lovely and amazing updates. Eagerly waiting for ur next update.


Hey dear........Seeing you after a long time.......but yes did frequently find your Like's!! I am so so happy to see your comment again.......!! 😃 🤗 I am glad you loved the emotional update when they had to be separated from each other for sometime......and Dadima's explanation that made sense to Dev and he agreed to send his wife away!!

And oh yes, the surprises for her........hehe.......i know there should be More Dev's like this! 😳 Every girl's dream husband!! I am joyous that you loved everything from their little teasings to the boat ride!! And the SR part......😳 *blushes hard*,*takes long breathes*,*drinks water*... Hope you calmed down easily.......hehe!! I am glad, very happy that you didnt find it vulgar.....was really scared for that.

Yep Birju's back to add some fun element in the RaDev short trip.....!! Hope you like him!!

And yes.......Dev and Gudiya! I remember you'd once demanded that i bring in more parts of the cute kids........it was around the time when Dev'd realized that Radhika is his Gudiya! So.....i had tried to bring in some parts earlier.....but it didnt work out. It did this time......and am glad you all loved it as well!! So so so so happy that you loved each and every bit of this update......Thanku again for appreciating my efforts and time. That really means a lot!! Thanku 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
❤️Oh MY Oh MY !!!!☺️☺️☺️☺️ SIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OMG!!! Loved Loved Loved the updates!!!!!
OMG!! This FF is filled with Surprises for me ..truly its an FF that i will cherish my whole life ..Im telling you its just beyond my expectations ( in a good way 😃) ....Sia from the pass updates my heart starts beating extremely fast after reading your updates ..I think I should get used to this😆 .Radev morning was beautifully written and the ..ehm ehem ehm in the morning 😉..It easily shows that RAdev are madly in love ☺️☺️..I absolutly loved it !! The morning when Radev woke up and then when Radhika came out the bathroom in a towel ☺️☺️☺️..OMG!!!! OMG!!! It was really getting hot in my room ..or was it me ???😕😆😉..The way dev was teasing RAdhika in the morning was very naughty of him ..Poor RAdhika for a second I thought that he really forgot her clothes 😆.(.Silly me )..The morning scenes were just ☺️☺️☺️..You know what im trying to say ..Right??😉..Yaar your just amazing in describing the romantic parts . I fell extremely happy being once of your readers ..Birju is so funny teasing dev and RAdhika running away at the mandir ...😆..and the part were Dev wants to help change Radhika her clothes 😳😳He really gets what he wants ..Very stuborn guy 😉But I like ...The garden part was very sweet ..Sushma Aunty looked like a very sweet lady ..Very heart touching ...The bike ride looked like so much fun , Im reeally happy that RAdhika tried something new ! The whole outing oart was just so so so enjoyable!!!I could picturize every scene 😃..Dev taking pictures of RAdhika was so natural of him ..Loved the nature they were surrounded by ..Looked so fresh and breath taking !! You made me remember summer time !! I love going for bike rides near the river ..its such a beautiful feel ..thank you so much for brining such moments back ..🤗..I was laughing smiling through out their whole trip ...And thank you so so much for brining their chilhood back ..i was laughing at the way RAdhika said Ballon ..Shes so so cocute ..and when dev made her prtest for a ballon was so cute ..I started laughing seeing such innocence ..I just love these twok ids ..Their very heart warming ❤️..ALways brings a smile on my face 😃..
Ok their whole trips was just brilliant loved the ballon parts ..dev is so so 😍He bought more ballons for her ..😊..And their night was again very very Oh MY Oh MY !!!!☺️☺️Again made me blush like never before ☺️..you know I dont need to put blush on my cheeks ..I just have to read your update and VOILA I have pink cheeks ...Actually I read your update yesterday ..And today wehn i went to school my friends were surprised seeing my cheeks so pink ..They complemented me 😳..but I told them that I wore nothing ....😆..Yarr your FF will do a big job on my cheeks..Next time when I want my chee red I will read your updates 😉..Dont need any blush ..
Thanks you so so much Sia for the amazing updates!!! Your hard work is very appreciated ..🤗
Love you and your FF very much ❤️
Take care !!!
Here is a song 😳 reminded me of your updates
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ZE3kIWTEhI&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by billo77 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sia, thank you very much for another beautiful and romantic update. Loved reading Gudiya and Dev's ballon fight.I hope CB2 will show us this kind of interactions with the kids
Dev always gets what he wants and he knows how to make Gudiya/ Radhika dance tio his tunes. You make me love Dev's character even more.
Looks like Dev and Radhika have one more day (or more😉)for themselves. Can't wait to see what else Dev planned for his wife.
Since I can't pen my thoughts I will borrow Mr.Sukesh Motwani's lines here .The magic of your Dev and Radhika's love will never fail to appeal to us .It's a beautiful feeling and just love reading it.

Thnak you soooooooooooooooo much Sia. Always eager to read your updates
Edited by laxmis - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sia fabulous update ... i m struggling hard to find words to express my feelings ....u r amazing yaar .. the way u write so beautifully & smoothly its awesome , description of their lovely day is out standing ... love each moment of their outing & their childhood memories , birju is nice fun element now , dear i just wonder how gracefully u r able to express each & every emotion going in their minds .
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Posted: 14 years ago
siaaaa lovely update....morning after sr was very sweet... briju teasing omg dev himself could not take that what would poor rads do😆😉 ...Guddia n balloon flash back was awesome ....loved little dev chasing rads n calling her little packet😆😆 just wish n want cb2 child story to be filled with sweet n naughtiness as u describe it in ur ff😃...Thanks sia for the lovely update😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow mind blowing
update awesome
fantastic
loved it to the core
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: billo77

❤️Oh MY Oh MY !!!!☺️ SIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OMG!!! Loved Loved Loved the updates!!!!!

OMG!! This FF is filled with Surprises for me ..truly its an FF that i will cherish my whole life ..Im telling you its just beyond my expectations ( in a good way 😃) ....Sia from the pass updates my heart starts beating extremely fast after reading your updates ..I think I should get used to this😆 .Radev morning was beautifully written and the ..ehm ehem ehm in the morning 😉..It easily shows that RAdev are madly in love ☺️☺️..I absolutly loved it !! The morning when Radev woke up and then when Radhika came out the bathroom in a towel ☺️☺️☺️..OMG!!!! OMG!!! It was really getting hot in my room ..or was it me ???😕😆😉..The way dev was teasing RAdhika in the morning was very naughty of him ..Poor RAdhika for a second I thought that he really forgot her clothes 😆.(.Silly me )..The morning scenes were just ☺️☺️☺️..You know what im trying to say ..Right??😉..Yaar your just amazing in describing the romantic parts . I fell extremely happy being once of your readers ..Birju is so funny teasing dev and RAdhika running away at the mandir ...😆..and the part were Dev wants to help change Radhika her clothes 😳😳He really gets what he wants ..Very stuborn guy 😉But I like ...The garden part was very sweet ..Sushma Aunty looked like a very sweet lady ..Very heart touching ...The bike ride looked like so much fun , Im reeally happy that RAdhika tried something new ! The whole outing oart was just so so so enjoyable!!!I could picturize every scene 😃..Dev taking pictures of RAdhika was so natural of him ..Loved the nature they were surrounded by ..Looked so fresh and breath taking !! You made me remember summer time !! I love going for bike rides near the river ..its such a beautiful feel ..thank you so much for brining such moments back ..🤗..I was laughing smiling through out their whole trip ...And thank you so so much for brining their chilhood back ..i was laughing at the way RAdhika said Ballon ..Shes so so cocute ..and when dev made her prtest for a ballon was so cute ..I started laughing seeing such innocence ..I just love these twok ids ..Their very heart warming ❤️..ALways brings a smile on my face 😃..
Ok their whole trips was just brilliant loved the ballon parts ..dev is so so 😍He bought more ballons for her ..😊..And their night was again very very Oh MY Oh MY !!!!☺️☺️Again made me blush like never before ☺️..you know I dont need to put blush on my cheeks ..I just have to read your update and VOILA I have pink cheeks ...Actually I read your update yesterday ..And today wehn i went to school my friends were surprised seeing my cheeks so pink ..They complemented me 😳..but I told them that I wore nothing ....😆..Yarr your FF will do a big job on my cheeks..Next time when I want my chee red I will read your updates 😉..Dont need any blush ..
Thanks you so so much Sia for the amazing updates!!! Your hard work is very appreciated ..🤗
Love you and your FF very much ❤️
Take care !!!
Here is a song 😳 reminded me of your updates
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ZE3kIWTEhI&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]


Hey dear...........Thanku.......Thanks a lot for such sweet reply 🤗 I am very very happy that you loved the entire part so so so so so so so so much!!

".truly its an FF that i will cherish my whole life"

Those words touched my heart dear.......🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ I am glad that it went beyond your expectations 😳 😃 Hehe......and your heartbeats get fast......okay will try to make them more faster then 😉 ☺️ Yep, the morning ahem ahem...... scene 😉😳 then the bathroom teasing.....😳 😳 all show that how madly, deeply they are in love. So irrationally and irrevocably and maddeningly in love!! 😳 Oops.....you thought he forgot her dresses.....nope just a little teasing from his side 😆 😳 Hmm......i understand what you're saying thru your emoticons ☺️.so i guess its not the room thats getting hotter right?? 😉 I am glad that i could portray their romance well 😃 Hehe......true Birju's teasing made them both literally run away from the spot😆 but Birju would be the necessary fun element in the otherwise......ahem.......romantic RaDev world 😳 Hmmm......Dev's stubborn.....and so lovingly stubborn that makes him more lovable. This was one of the trait that even i loved in Dev so much......remember the May'09 when Dev would everytime be stubborn to make Radhika speak out her feelings😳 I am happy that you loved the garden part too. And then yes the bike ride across the countryside........i enjoyed writing that a lot......because it was fun to feel with the nature. I took reference from my own trip to native places and began writing it up......and am glad you all could connect too 😃 If you were laughing and smiling throughout the trip, so was i......and am smiling wider now 😃 And their childhood days........yep, i remember you all asking me another chapter of their kiddie days but then i couldnt adjust it.....however now i found some place and added it here......Balooos by Radhika 😆 And yes the night.......☺️......I know you liked it!! Hehe.....I am glad that my FF would do a big job on your cheeks. Nice na.,.....if you dont find the blush, you can read my update 😉 and the pleasure is all mine 😃 Thanks again for appreciating my efforts and yes.........another lovely song that's again my favorites.......a beautiful song. This song seems apt for this part.......... when RaDev are enjoying tremendously for their life's revolving around the other!!! 🤗




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: laxmis

Sia, thank you very much for another beautiful and romantic update. Loved reading Gudiya and Dev's ballon fight.I hope CB2 will show us this kind of interactions with the kids
Dev always gets what he wants and he knows how to make Gudiya/ Radhika dance tio his tunes. You make me love Dev's character even more.
Looks like Dev and Radhika have one more day (or more😉)for themselves. Can't wait to see what else Dev planned for his wife.
Since I can't pen my thoughts I will borrow Mr.Sukesh Motwani's lines here .The magic of your Dev and Radhika's love will never fail to appeal to us .It's a beautiful feeling and just love reading it.

Thnak you soooooooooooooooo much Sia. Always eager to read your updates


Hey dear...........Thank you!!!! i am so happy that you loved the kiddie interactions again!😃 I too hope that CB2 uses the talents and gives out a beautiful product to us 👍🏼 😃 Hehe.....True Dev always gets his way......stubborn he is.....and manages to win always!! 😉 Nope, they have 3 more days to go.......and will slowly unravel all the surprises planned for Radhika. There's much more to come.......hope you all like it 😊

"Since I can't pen my thoughts I will borrow Mr.Sukesh Motwani's lines here .The magic of your Dev and Radhika's love will never fail to appeal to us .It's a beautiful feeling and just love reading it."

Thanks a ton.....a million for those words. It touched my heart.....and made me smile 😃 wide, wider.......widest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanku 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ Thanks a lot 😃



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