FF: Tu JaNaY nA- rt 4 updte onpg 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
So im going to start of form where the epi ended on thrus....
 
K: Karishma
KM: kuanl Mehra
S: shamz
V: Veeru
KAN: kanchan
L: Lehka
VM: veerus mom
 I'll add more abbirvations as my ff goes on....
 
K: TUMMMM ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ wot r u doing here??? KM wot is all this you wore goin to get married to L bt u married our maid... disgusting how could you...???
KM: Shut-up K this is the new owner of this house, so show sum respect
K: likan--
KM:  K i dont want the hear anything
 
Ever1 cums down
 
L: Kuanl plz tell me that ur leing and this is a prank or sumthing.... plz tell me that
KM: look L im sori i broke ur heart bt i guess it is fair.... u broke my heart and now i break urs
L: bt i love you
KM: no you dont u love my money and my status ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
K: bt KM wot will the people say that u married a maid?
KM: i dont care abou them... and form now on i dont want to hear shamoli being called a maid, i told u she is the owner of this house and form nw on things will b as S would say so๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
shift sences to poor driver g๐Ÿ˜†
 
Veeru's Mom: V plz cm out of the fire tujha meri kasam
V: ma kasam dey kar tuna acha nahi kiya
VM: then plz come out
KAN: V g plz tell me where my sis is
V: i told go to KM's house and you ll no where she is
VM: wot do u mean
V: ma shamz got married to bhaiiyaa
KAN: noo veeru g this cant be true
V: it is kan i saw her getting married with my veri own eyes
Kan: bt how could she do that to you??
V: for moneyyyy $$$ wot else can she done that for?
Kan: oh goddd
VM: lets go inside the house as ever1 is watching and it doesnt look nice
V: bt ma it is nt thier fault they alll came to see me getting married.... AND THEY WILL SEE ME GETTING MARRIED
VM: wot do u mean๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Kan: bt shamoli----
V: dont even use her name infornt of me
VM: bt who will u marry??
Veeru looks around
V: KANCHAN... im going to marry Kan
Kan: me bt....
V: bt wt u also want to marry sum1 rich???
VM: no no veeru beta Kan will marry you dont worry
V: wot will u?
Kan: ummm.... yes ๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
 
and epi ends plz do comment weahter u like it or nt.... plz do tell... .and plz sum1 suggest a name for the ff...plz and thank you๐Ÿ˜Š
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shumi. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
reserved๐Ÿ˜Š...i will be back soon to comment๐Ÿ˜Š
 
i am back...sorry for the late...
 
dear mina you know what? yours is the first ff of Bayttaab...congrats๐Ÿ˜Š and i am your first reader.
 
heeee...lekha thought it is a prank...poor thing๐Ÿ˜‰
 
KM: look L im sori i broke ur heart bt i guess it is fair.... u broke my heart and now i break urs....hahaha....i love this tit for tat.
 
veeru proposed kanchan!...so sweet.he want to marry her immediately but how?...he burnt the mandap...??? may be in the same temple where shamoli and his bhiya got married?๐Ÿ˜‰
 
excellent writing๐Ÿ‘.waiting for yout next up date๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwww.......good job!!!!  I wish that happens in the episode on monday
Mina H thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks guyzz wish for more comments... will update tomorow
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Posted: 14 years ago
u can b a good writer ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...wait let me call ekta....๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
I think you should be one of the creatives in her show...๐Ÿ˜Š
Awesome writing......
Mina H thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww thanks guyzz....and  @sandeepshr LOLZZ u should call ekta!!!๐Ÿ˜‰
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Part Two
 
 
V: gud lets married rite here rite nw, let me go the pundit and let me fix everthing....

VM: Kan im sori to say bt i had always like u more then ur sister... shamz is juz too mod for my veeru and ur juz perfect

Kan: likan ma i dont understand wot has shamz done like how could she hve married KM wen she was suppose to marry V? I will have to go and meet her

VM: of course u should even go meet her, bt wait juz this nite and till u get married go tommorow morning

Kan: okay ma

V: ma i hve got the pundit and the muglasutra{sori if spelt worng} chal Kan lets get married

V and Kan do the seven rounds together around and fire V puts the sindor and malangstra{necklase} and V starts to leave

Kan: where are u going?

V: i'll be back

VM: but beta u juz gt married how cn u go?

V: ma i said na, i'll be back

Kan gets sad and V gose ๐Ÿ˜ญ
 
sences go bac to shamz and KM sir

KM: Karishma I want u to put together the best party eva, and invite ever1

Kar: yes jatgi

KM: lets go Shamz to our room

KM holds sahmz hand and go up to thier room๐Ÿ˜ณ

Kar: L i cant belive this KM said that she THE MAID is the new owner how can he do that dose he hve no self respect, like froget abou him what about me and sia's marriage wot will they say??? and plus the maid is even younger then KM how can he do that, like he is twice her age? ๐Ÿคข

L: likan w/e happened is my fault if i had neva left KM in the 1st place this would have neva happned

Kar: oh sut up, chalo lets make plans for the party b4 KM gets mad

next part will be up soon and promise will be more longer then this one! plz leave comments on weahter u like it or nt...thanks for all the commentsEdited by Mina H - 14 years ago
Mina H thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

i nw that i said that i will update tomorrw bt i had sum time so i thought that i'll write more... hope u guyz like it!

Part 3

L: kar y did this hve to happen i was sooo happy and now ssoo sad that KM choose me over a maid

KAR: evn im shock

to KM's and Samz room

KM: u nw sumthing dat i knew that u were going to cum dats why i had already got this sari for you for tonite party... i hope u like it

Shamz quite, and dose nt say anything

KM: u dont like it??

Shamz still sleint

KM: wots wrong Shamz? is every thing okay...?

KM puts his hand on Shamz shoulder

Shamz moves her shoulder and KM's hand goes off of her.... KM shocked and sad

KM: shamz say sumthing.... ur sleince is killing me

S: sir... i...{thinking-- should i tell sir abou veeru? should i tell him that i only married him for his money? and to secure my sisters futer and veerus futher so he cn becum a gud lawyer??

KM: Shamoli kuch toh bollo?? wot is the problem?

S: sir woh mein V-- woh sss..iiirrrrr

Alll of a sudden Kar cums in

Kar: KM i was saying that guests are starting to cum and guyz r still nt ready

KM: oh yes v were just abou to get ready... Shamz i'll go change in the next room and u can change our here

Sham: g sir

KM leaves and Kar looks at the sexi sarii!

Kar: hey,,, wot r u doing with this saree??

S: woh sir gave it to me for tonites party

KAR: bt why

S: wot do u mean why?? IM his wife and my name is Shamoli nt hey... bt from nw on u can call me Jatani G got it

Kar: how dare u talk to me like that?

SHamz: lower ur tone and talk with respect or else u'll be out of this house

Kar leaves in angry and thinks to herself: that bloody maid i will nt leave her i'll tell KM everthing and KM will hve to leave and marry L

back to KAN

KAN: ma Veeru g has still nt came yet...

VM: dont wori he will cum soon

KAN: bt its been hours sence he left, im feeling veri scared

VM: oh look thier cums V, I'll go inside and u go and talk to him and give him food

Kan: g ma

V cums hme all drunk

KAN: veeru g r u hungry should i give u food

V: ^(laughs) hungry.... plzzz kanchann i feel triedddd

Kan: V r u drunk kya ap p ka aye hain?

V: yea just a lillte to 4get abou shamzzz, kan y did sham do this

Veeru goes to his room and sleep

Kan: i dont think that Veeru will eva be able to love me the way he has loved shamzz

Veeru sleep talking: shamoli y did u leave me, becuase im poor...cuz im broke???

plz do comment and thanksss you

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Posted: 14 years ago
yapeeee...me first...i will be back soon๐Ÿ˜Š
 
i am back ๐Ÿ˜Š
 
wow kunal gave shamoli a sari for tonight party...so sweet of him๐Ÿ˜›.
 
omg! veeru ne sharaab pee...๐Ÿ˜ฒ
 
very good and entertaining up date dear. if you don't mind i hace a request .please don't use short forma like S,V,KM,L ...I am getting confused.every time i have to go back to first page of u r ff and check what is what...
 
please up date soon.eagerly waiting for it๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago