~Dedicated to Someone Special-MayurSS Pg 4

            Hey everyone, so here is a cute fan fic, I was thinking of. But firstly, please don't expect me to write a lot, because I will only update on Wednesday, and it will be short. Please don't tell me to make it longer, because this is a mini fan fic.

Ok now lets start the character stretch

 

Mayank Sharma- Has no family, lives alone in his apartment, has a lot of friends, every girl loves him, he is very nice, handsome, dashing, hot. He has a great voice, but he doesn't think that. He talks to everyone nicely. Goes to collage. But wants a part-time job, since he needs it badly.

 

Nupur Bhushan- She is a total behen ji types. Wears thick glasses, funny clothes, and no make-up. (Just like in Nupur's dream.lol) She thinks everyone hates her, that she is ugly. That no one will ever like her. And she goes to collage. She has a mother, lives in an apartment with her.

 

Later on will add more characters.

 

Part 1- Same page.

Part 2- Pg 4

Edited by rkmnkp - 14 years ago

Part 1            

 I want to sit and read in peace. So I go to  my blacony, and read there. Outside there was a guy jogging. He kept looking at me. I concertrate on my book.

I got hungry, and went to the kitchen

to make some paakores and tea.

After it was done, I decide to sit back down outside in my balcony.

The guy was still jogging there.

I was about to sit down and read

when all of the sudden it starts raining.

Nupur-Ufffffffff, by god abhi hi rain honi thi?

I start murmering to myself, looking al angry

and stomping my feet.

The guy looks at me and starts laughing on my bad luck.

I smile, he is so cute.

He walks home, still laughing.

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Many days passes, every single day, in the morning, I went to my balcony, and find him there jogging.

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Couple of days passes, I don't see him coming there anymore to jog.

So I decide to go to his house.

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I ring his bell.

He opens the door, and is shocked to see me.

Mayank-Tum yahan?

Nupur-Woh mein pooch ne aayi thi agar app theek hai, itne dinno se dekh nahi rahe hai morning mein.

He looks around to see if anyone is looking.

Mayank-Ummmmm, dekhiye mein bilkul theek hoon, bas thora busy hoon, issliye, par abhi app please yahan se jaayi ye, agar appko yahan kissi ne dekh liya toh problem creat ho jae gi.

I fix my glasses and smile.

He fake smiles back, and I go home.

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I wonder if I am that ugly that no one wants to be seen around me.

That guy was nice, but still I still think he doesn't like me.

Why can't I be like other girl?

Beautiful like them?

I think I like that guy,

but he wont like me

ever

infact no one will.

Hey lina
That's a really nice starting
Nupur a behenji
Plzzzz continue soon

wow linu. tune to kamal kardiya. nupur bhushan ko behenji banadiya. teri himmat ki to daat deni padegi. but nupur ka make over to hoga na? warna mayank pasand keise karega

hey lina....
u dint pm me.....😭😭😭
ok...comming back 2 the ff....
it was really nice dear.....
poor nups....she cant be that ugly....
it was quite rude of mayank to say that 'agar kisi ne dekh liya to problem ho jayegi'
otherwise, loved it....
plzzz pm me the next time u upd8....
loads of love,
jigi.

hey linu,
at first i thought u want to dedicate it someone special. but now i found its the title of ur ff.lol😆😆
wow lina nice start sweety.
really loved it.
u r awesome dear.
keep updating.

OMG Lina wat a start

nice start lina!
loved it!
pehli mulakat mein hi nupur ko mayank s pyaar ho gaya......
and nupur is behengi types?????
baap re bap!
and why did mayank asked her to go?
let's see........
continue soon..........

heyo Lina!!!
awesum intro...
hey...how r u gonna manage ol ur FFs nd Os gallery???
uff...well...i kno u wil!!!
now...ts a gud idea yaar!!!
lpls do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm!!

Hiii....nice concept....
Pls pm when you update.....