A Mistake Worthmaking Pg38

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Posted: 14 years ago
Heer-PJz employee is reading a short story on the web


Premz cousin sister told her from downstairs
Heer Prem is waiting Come on out

She begins to read out loudly as she feels like sum1 is cuming upstairs


Cute Love story ...........

Two butterflies were in love.........
One day, they decided to play Hide n Seek.......

During the play.....
Boy Butterfly - "A small game within us"
Girl Butterfly - "OK"
Boy Butterfly - "The one who sits in this flower tomorrow early in
the morning.....that one loves the other one more....."
Girl Butterfly - "OK"

Next morning, the boy butterfly waits for the flower to open so that
he can sit before the girl butterfly does......

Finally, the flower opened.....
What did he see.....?????........

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The girl butterfly had died inside the flower.....

She stayed there all night......so that early in the morning......as
soon as she sees him.......she can fly to him and tell him how much she
loved him........

This is true LOVE....
Life is LOVE.......


LIVING MIGHT MEAN TAKING CHANCES, BUT THEY ARE WORTH TAKING......
LOVING MIGHT BE A MISTAKE, BUT ITS WORTH MAKING........



That person lightly puts the hand on the girl's shoulder

Heer: Sir please ABHI MEHER YAHAN AA GAYI TO......


Meher laughs

Meher:Wo becharey chalay gayye as he got sick of waiting Now u can go out.


Heer:He's gone

Meher:Yupp


Heer opened the door n ran downstairs n then out to the lounge. As soon as she was about to sit on the swing sumbody grabbed her up n lightly blowed up on her neck n then kissed her neck wetting it up




Heer:Sir--- gayye nahin.




Prem:Noh.



Prem turned around n moving her face Closer to his he smiled slyly. Heer got a bit shocked



Heer: Meher...............



Prem:U know Preet is also with her u know



He pushed her to the wall. As soon as his lips met Hers. Prem surely knew how to make it out he slowly drew more and more of his tongue into her mouth. His this action sent butterflies to Heer's stomach then started sucking really hard, but in a sort of rhythmic pulsing way, so that his n her tongue slid in and out of her mouth. He rubbed her bare thighs by n by with his legs Finally heer began to love it when he bite the tip of her tongue.  he varied the strength depending on how much pain she liked.Heer had got hot. Finally Meher and Preet after shooting the whole scene in their camcorders came out with a bucket full of water to make love birds realise that they were being watched they threw it on them and then they both parted n Heer ran upstairs in her room whereas Prem began to yell at them in order to calm down his fast heartbeat.

CHAPTER ONE
PAGE THREE
PAGE FOUR
 
Chapter TWO
PAGE SEVEN
PAGE EIGHT
 
Chapter Three
PAGE ELEVEN
Page FOURTEEN
 
 
 
Precap of CHAPTER FOUR:
Page eighteeen
Chapter Four:
Page Twenty Two
Page Twenty Six
 
 
Chapter five:
PAGE TWENTY EIGHT
PAGE THIRTY THREE
Chapter Six
Page Thirty Five
Pge Thirty Eight
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omg this is really intresting lol i luv heers character keep on writing! :)
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absloutely wonderfull i really like prem and heer s character and especially heer becaue she is not shy and traditional which sounds great.

and i cant wait for the next update please do continue soon thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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really nice
i lyk how u dint make heer all traditional nd stuff, it luks gd
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