~Mayur Paradise #154 - tum bin jiya jaaye kaise - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry for the second post!😛
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Congrats on the new paradise gals........ 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congo on new paradise!!!!!!!!!!!
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congrats on new paradise🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@deepti-Lovely OS...Keep writing!
Why did u say, u can't write?
 
 
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Sbs should cover d MN song segment.....
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Ok my OS again........ its still work in progress........... need to re write.........

Please do let me know if you gals like it........
 

Mayank comes to surprise Nupur, sorts out the babloo thing, he now hads to go back to Bangalore….

 

At the train station ( I hate buses )…..

 

Mayank: To main chlun Nupur…..

Nupur : Haan ……. Kaash mai ntumhe rok paati lekin aunty ko bhi to tumhari zaroorat hai.

Mayank: Haan Nupur… but don't worry….. main jaate hi phone karunga… aur yaad rakhna jab bhi meri zaroorat ho to mujhe phone kar dena main aa jaunga.

Nupur: Hmm…. Main jaanti hun… kit um mujhse bahut pyaar karte ho…….by god… chalo abhi chado train main…

Mayank: Abhi time hai Nupur….

Nupur: Nahi abhi chadho…. Train start hogayi to….

Mayank: To…..

Nupur: To tum gir sakte ho, tumhe chot aa sakti hai…..her expressions keep changing as if shes watching a movie scene……

Mayank thinking Kitni filmy GF mili hau mujhe…….. but kitna pyaar karti hai mujhse…

 

Mayank gives a hug a quick hug and leaves……

 

Nupur comes back home…. She keep thinking about mayank and how similar he is to her dream man ….. and as the night goes on….. shes just lostin her thoughts and sleeps….

 

Next day morning …… College..

 

Benji: nupur mayank kal chala gaya….

Nupur: Haan benji… main station gayi thi chodne….

Samrat: Tum akeli gayi thi… hum bhi chalte na saath…….

Diya: Sammy, please tumne suna nahi kabhi threes a crowd……

 

Suddenly there is an announcement…… sab log assembly hall main aa jaaiye. Principal sir koi announcement karma chahte hain…

 

In the hall…….

Principal: Students, is saal hum logon ne decide kiya hai kit um sab log pehle ek pre final doge aur us pre final ke results decide karenge ki final kon dega. Everyoen shocked….. Uday almost faints at the thought of another exam……

 

Assembly finishes…

Nupur gets worried and calls Mayank…….

Mayank: Hello

Nupur: Mayank…… tumhe pata hai….

Mayank: Nupur pata kaise hoga pehle bolo to sahi…

Nupur: Vo prinicipal na bola ki final exams ke pehle ek pre final hoga aur vo decide  karega ki final kon dega…

Mayank: Hmm…..to isme itna kyun worry kar rahi ho…….. yaad hai tum last time mujhse sirf 2 mark se peeche reh gayi thi…… tum bas vahi determination se padho aur dekho is baar bhi tum top karogi…..

Nupur: Haan mayank….. thanks meri himmat badhane ke liye… main poori koshish karungi…

Mayank: That's my girl…… bas tum koshish karo baaki sab apne aap theekh ho jaayega…. Tumhe kabhi bhi meri zaroorat pade na to mujhe call karna ok…

 

Before Nupur can answer…. Mayank says….. nupur jaana padega… class start hogayi hai…. Ok baad main baad karta hun…..

Nupur……. Bye…..

Mayank… ok bye….

 

Nupur thinking ….. now a little relaxed after talking to Mayank….. suddenly remembers the exams…… Nupur chal lag jaa padhaayi karne….. is baar to tujhe acha karna hi padega varna Maynak kya sochega….

 

Suddenly her phone vibrates and she sees a message from mayank….

 

Nupur… chinta mat karo…. Ye mat sochna ki main kya sochunga..... tum apni taraf se poori koshish karo…. That's more important…… and remember as long as you are happy I am happy…. I love you…..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok......... me in full josh...... ek aur OS likha........

please do tell me ki kaisa hai........ also i would love if you can tell me if its bas also....... i always take criticism positively ( my strength......... dekha interview de de haal mera........)

Mayank comes to surprise Nupur, sorts out the babloo thing, he now hads to go back to Bangalore….

At the train station ( I hate buses )…..

Mayank: To main chlun Nupur…..
Nupur : Haan ……. Kaash mai ntumhe rok paati lekin aunty ko bhi to tumhari zaroorat hai.
Mayank: Haan Nupur… but don't worry….. main jaate hi phone karunga… aur yaad rakhna jab bhi meri zaroorat ho to mujhe phone kar dena main aa jaunga.
Nupur: Hmm…. Main jaanti hun… kit um mujhse bahut pyaar karte ho…….by god… chalo abhi chado train main…
Mayank: Abhi time hai Nupur….
Nupur: Nahi abhi chadho…. Train start hogayi to….
Mayank: To…..
Nupur: To tum gir sakte ho, tumhe chot aa sakti hai…..her expressions keep changing as if shes watching a movie scene……
Mayank thinking Kitni filmy GF mili hau mujhe…….. but kitna pyaar karti hai mujhse…

Mayank gives a hug a quick hug and leaves……

Nupur comes back home…. She keep thinking about mayank and how similar he is to her dream man ….. and as the night goes on….. shes just lostin her thoughts and sleeps….

Next day morning …… College..

Benji: nupur mayank kal chala gaya….
Nupur: Haan benji… main station gayi thi chodne….
Samrat: Tum akeli gayi thi… hum bhi chalte na saath…….
Diya: Sammy, please tumne suna nahi kabhi threes a crowd……

Suddenly there is an announcement…… sab log assembly hall main aa jaaiye. Principal sir koi announcement karma chahte hain…

In the hall…….
Principal: Students, is saal hum logon ne decide kiya hai kit um sab log pehle ek pre final doge aur us pre final ke results decide karenge ki final kon dega. Everyoen shocked….. Uday almost faints at the thought of another exam……

Assembly finishes…
Nupur gets worried and calls Mayank…….
Mayank: Hello
Nupur: Mayank…… tumhe pata hai….
Mayank: Nupur pata kaise hoga pehle bolo to sahi…
Nupur: Vo prinicipal na bola ki final exams ke pehle ek pre final hoga aur vo decide karega ki final kon dega…
Mayank: Hmm…..to isme itna kyun worry kar rahi ho…….. yaad hai tum last time mujhse sirf 2 mark se peeche reh gayi thi…… tum bas vahi determination se padho aur dekho is baar bhi tum top karogi…..
Nupur: Haan mayank….. thanks meri himmat badhane ke liye… main poori koshish karungi…
Mayank: That's my girl…… bas tum koshish karo baaki sab apne aap theekh ho jaayega…. Tumhe kabhi bhi meri zaroorat pade na to mujhe call karna ok…

Before Nupur can answer…. Mayank says….. nupur jaana padega… class start hogayi hai…. Ok baad main baad karta hun…..
Nupur……. Bye…..
Mayank… ok bye….

Nupur thinking ….. now a little relaxed after talking to Mayank….. suddenly remembers the exams…… Nupur chal lag jaa padhaayi karne….. is baar to tujhe acha karna hi padega varna Maynak kya sochega….

Suddenly her phone vibrates and she sees a message from mayank….

Nupur… chinta mat karo…. Ye mat sochna ki main kya sochunga..... tum apni taraf se poori koshish karo…. That's more important…… and remember as long as you are happy I am happy…. I love you…..


aw..........dj...........
superb........ 👏
i expect exams ki time mai M nups ke sath hoga i mean in excell college....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
lol...dj mai bhi post kiya sorry....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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is there sum discussion over song also as its multi starrer