Okay so I changed the name of this shot from na tum jano na hum to Ahista Ahista because it souits it more. i also made subtle changes in the beginning. So if you read the begininng already i suggest you read again from the start or the story may not make sense. Enjoy!
Ahista Ahista
Meher was excited to come home after half a year but her nerves were getting the best of her. It was her Heer Di's anniversary and godh barai but she would have to see him. Meher had spent the last 6 months working at in Delhi at the Taj hotel. She hadn't seen her family since she had left. They had let her leave because they knew she needed to get away. That fateful night had torn meher apart and her wounds still had not healed.
*12 months ago*
Heer was getting married to a boy she had not seen since Heer was 4...that was twenty years ago. She hadn't seen him since...not even a picture. meher was terrified for heer...she had no memory of the Juneja family( she had been two). What was this guy like? Would he be right for heer Di? Meher had not even been able to talk to Heer alone, so she had no idea how Heer felt.
Yet the terror did not stop there. Apparently, there was another juneja boy that would be perfect for meher.
Her mother and Heer di put her on a diet two months before the arrival of the junejas( the diet paid off- meher looked stunning!) Teji went crazy training the girls in cooking and puja ettiquette. the day of the Juneja's arrival came far before the girls wanted to.
Prem and preet were very handsome. Heer and prem fell in love immediately. Preet and meher on the other hand....had a bumpy road.
Two days after the Juneja's arrived, the parents sent both couples for coffee. Heer-Prem headed for a reclusive place while Preet-Meher headed for Meher's favorite coffee shop.
Preet and Meher were very awkward. Both sat down at a table and ordered coffee. "one black coffee no sugar, a teaspoon honey please."." Meher said. Preet was surprised.
" you drink black coffee?" Preet said smugly.
"Yeah, I do. Why are surprised? Just because I am a traditional Indian girl?" Meher said a little offended.
"Relax. No need to get so hyper!" preet said.
Meher rolled her eyes and then took a deep breath. "Look, Preet right?" Preet nodded. "I am too young to get married and I don't even know you!"
"What makes you think I want to marry you?" preet snarled.
"Okay,so we both don't want to get married! Okay, so you have to tell our parents you don't want to get married. I am the girl- I can't refuse the marriage." Meher said smiling and relieved.
"Are you crazy? My dad will kill me if I say no." preet exasperated.
"So, what do we do?" Meher worried.
"I have got it! Why don't we ask for a longer engagement that PB and heer bhabhi? That way we have more time to deal with this!" Preet said excitedly.
"Are you insane!!!??? That never works! We are going to get into so much trouble!" meher said taking a swig of her coffee.
"Your choice. Either this or you can tell your parents you don't want to get married and face their wrath." Preet said triumphantly.
"Ugh. Fine, as long as you don't irritate me." Meher said.
"Me ? irritate you? Get real!" Preet said stalking off in the direction of the car.
Meher rubbed her temples. This was going to be a long engagement,
The parents happily acquiesced to meher and Preet's request of a long engagement, but preparations for Prem-heer's wedding were started automatically. Yet the parents fawned over Preet-meher.
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"Preet, tum aur Meher bar kyun nahi jaate ho, aaj?" gayatri said while cupping preet's face.
'Umm, aunty ghar pe itne kaam hai, hum baar kaise jaa sakte hai?" meher said hoping to evade an outing with preet.
"that is no excuse. You two have hardly gotten to know each other. Go out and have some fun!" gayathri said.
Meher got ready- she wore a pretty pink churidar with beaded spaghetti straps.
Preet whistled by the stairs while waiting for meher. He turned to look up and was surprised to see her looking so pretty. He had never really noticed how pretty she was.
"Where do you want to go?" meher said breaking preet out of his reverie.
"You live here. You tell me!" preet said trying to act normal and ignore what he had just felt.
"Fine. Let's go!" meher said grabbing his hand.
Meher took Preet to a club, where her friend raj was having a party.
"Meher?" raj said surprised.
"Raj!" meher said giving him a tight hug.
"Tum Yahan?" Raj said raising his eyebrows.
"haan. Woh actually.umm. Meet my friend Preet. He's from Canada. I just wanted to show him around."Meher said uncomfortably. She hated clubs, but she figured preet would like them.
Preet extended his hand to Raj. Just then Ash popped into the circle. She took Preet's hand. "Hi I am Ash, raj's ex-girlfriend .
Preet was startled but smirked when he saw Meher stiffen and roll her eyes.
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Preet laid in his bed, thinking of Meher. She seemed so uncomfortable at the club but she was so happy when talking to her friends, there. She was absolutely oblivious to all the stares and whistles she was getting- she had no idea how wonderful she was. Wait, why was preet noticing all this now? Before that night, she was just this pushy and condescending girl who wanted Prem & Heer's wedding to look like a Disney fairytale. He shook the thoughts out of his head and went to sleep.
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"meher!!!!" balraj's voice echoed through the house.
'Ji, papa!" meher said rushing to the living room.
"Will you go over to the Juneja house to watch kulraaj's kids? We are all going to ,meet beeji for prem-Heer's wedding." Balraj said sweetly.
"Of course Papa! Give me two minutes to get ready." Meher said excited she loved kulraaj's kids.
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"Meher maami!!!!!" vikas, tannu and Ketan yelled in unison.
"Maami?" Meher said skeptically.
"haan. Mamma said that you and heer are our maamis." Tannu said sweetly.
Meher played Hide and seek with the three devils.
"Maami, I am bored." Vikas said.
"I have an idea!" ketan said smugly.
All three ran to their rooms to get markers and rushed up the stairs. Meher ran after them. Tannu quietly opened a bedroom door. All four of them creeped in. Meher gasped- it was preet's room and he was sleeping shirtless. According to the kids he was a heavy sleeper. They drew all over his face. Meher joined them too. They soon left the room and burst into giggles.
Half an hour later -Meher heard a deafening scream from the upstairs. Preet ran down the stairs. "Tum!?" he said suddenly feeling embarrassed with all the writing all over him.
"Tum ne yeh sab kiya!!!???" Preet said coming down the stairs.
Meher ran as Preet chased her while laughing .
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Meher and preet began going out together frequently. At least once every week Preet would take Meher out for a movie, dinner, melha, shopping for the wedding, or something else. They still argued. A lot. But they had become friends.
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Prem and heer's mehndi day finally arrived. As meher got preet's name adorned on her hands, she realized she loved him. But did he love her back? All of these questions were running through her mind. She grabbed the skirt of her pink lengha with her dry hand and went out for fresh air. As meher was walking she heard voices in the garden. SHe inched closer to see who was there. Meher was shocked to see Ash and preet together. She lingered for a few minutes to see what was going on but she wished she had never stayed. She saw ash lean in for a kiss. Meher ran away crying.
She was stoic for the rest of the wedding ceremonies and avoided preet. Immediately after the wedding Meher wrote a letter to her parents explaining that she did not want to get married, and she was sorry to everyone for what she had done but she couldn't keep the pretense up. Before leaving she said bye to Prem-Heer who arrange for her internship at the Taj Hotel.
Her parents had been furious but she had talked to them on the phone and they were eagerly awaiting her arrival. No one ever mentioned preet to meher.
She had no idea what or how he was doing. And now she was going home ...what if he was there?
Meher stopped by the Coffee shop on her way home, she desperately needed caffeine. She sat down when she heard someone order " one black coffee no sugar, a teaspoon honey please."her coffee order by a familiar voice.
Meher turned around to find Preet sitting at a table with little tannu with him. Before meher could do anything, Tannu spotted her.
'Meher maami!" tannu waved excitedly. preet stood up his face had utterly shocked expression.
Meher picked up tannu and gave her hug. She looked at preet. "Hi Preet."
Preet looked angry now. 'Tannu lets go."
He ignored Tannu's protests and left the coffee shop.
Meher felt hot tears stinging her eyes. But why was preet angry with her? She had left for him, so he could be free.
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Meher went home to be smothered by her parents. Heer was in tears as she hugged her and prem who was over as well, ruffled her hair and gave her a hug.
Later when she had a moment alone with Heer she told her the coffeee shop incident. She begged heer for to arrange a meeting with Preet. Heer agreed readily.
Meher arrived at the park and saw preet. He started walking away as he saw her. She caught up to him grabbed his arm, "Please wait Preet! I want to talk to you!"
Preet turned around and crossed his arms. "Fine please talk. please tell me why you left without talking. please tell me why i haven't gotten a single response for any of the roses i have sent you each day. tell me why you broke our engagement. Please tell me why you left before i could say i love you.
Meher looked at him incredulously. "You loveme?" her voice was barely a whisper.
"Loved" preet said lowering his eyes.
"preet! I saw you kiss ash that night...." meher'svoice trailed off.
"Meher, you saw that and you didnt even talk to me about it? Did you also see the part where i pushed her off and told her i love you?" preet said.
He grabbed her and said "i love you and you didnt even trust me."
Meher hugged him and said "I am so sorry! i just didn't know where we stood before. I love you Preet."
Preet melted into her arms. "I love you too! waise meher how come you didn't responded to any of the flowers?
"I never got any flowers. but my neighbor did. and she never knew who they were from." meher laughed.
Done! I know there are lots of mistakes and the story kind of deteriorates but i wanted to finish it! i really hate this shot but hopefully i will have a better one in a few weeks! Let me know what you think? Be honest please!ππ
Edited by tadashi - 14 years ago
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