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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi guys
I have updated
If not interested than avoid it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Nami, I hv already given my comments on ur fic in d fc. Bt since u posted ur scene here so thought of sharing my comments here. I lovd ur fic, its awesome. Pls continue soon dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi namy i have comment for ur ff on fc n i pm u also u r doing superb work i liked the way u express the feeling n dailouges r also good plz continue soon
hope u will enjoy over here there r beautiful people over here
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey namy....
glad u posted ur scene here. It ll help people to find it easily

ur scene is taking me back to the golden old days of our beloved AN.. U r superb plz continue.... Wants to know how is abhi gonna make up wid her in 30 days. 😊

Hey sweety Love Doesnt understands Logic is not mine but shales ff (wow123) yes she was fab in showing ANs true love ... through masterpiece of her writing. I was so touched after reading her ff....... lovee her 😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Guys,
I've updated 2nd part. Please let me have ur comments.
Sorry am in arush now, will come back in the evening to chat with u..
Bye n cheers,
Namy
"It's Only You"

Part 2:

"One month advance notice" Nikki stares at Abhimanyu Modi as if deciding whether to cry or shout at him. After couple of minutes she again composes herself and tells him firmly." Look Dr. Abhimanyu, u might be right but I need to go. Can't u waive off the notice period considering it a special case. I don't know how to explain this but I need to go." She lies further "There are some family issues and my Dad needs me. As an incharge of Sanjivani, don't u've that much authority to waive it off?? "

Abhi mutters to himself: here she goes again' She will never back off in any arguments.. Anyways, I know how to deal with this as well.

He sighs and tells her " In that case Dr. Nikita I would like to talk to ur father and also a letter requesting us to consider it as a special case."

"No" Nikki yelps hurriedly. Abhi raises an eyebrow and asks, "What do u mean by 'No'?"

"I mean.... I'..I don't get it. What do u mean by talk to my father and a letter. What do u think what u r? I'm not a kid and u r not my principal.. U can't talk to him. And in any case he is a very busy person. " Nikki completes the sentence hurriedly.

"Look Dr. Nikita,I don't have entire day for you. I've given u an option. Now it's up to u how to deal with it." "So please excuse me, I've a meeting to attend". Abhi starts collecting his papers ignoring Nikki.

Nikki decides to talk to him again in the evening and turns to leave the cabin. Abhi's voice stops her from her track "Dr. Nikita, if you find Dr. Armaan, please tell him to meet me."

Nikki gasps in a shock and turns to face him again. She impulsively mutters out "Armaan?? No'. U can't ask Armaan to talk to my dad. He knows nothing about it. Infact I've not spoken to him anything."

Abhi stares at her for a long moment. After a long silence, he moves forward and stops in front of her. He bends his head a little and sees Nikki swallow hard and struggle for her composure. He looks into her eyes and speaks to her harshly "I'll never do that. Unlike u, I have no interest discussing you with Dr. Mallik."

Nikki shots him a look that covered hurt with anger. She challenges him with her eyes and snaps back " Fine, have it ur way. I give a month advance notice from today. But I want something in return. I don't want anyone knows about my resignation till my last day. As unlike you, I don't like to hurt people who care for me." With that she heads off, leaving fuming Abhi behind.

Nikki finds Armaan in the locker room doing his usual duty i.e. flirting with Ridhima. She tells him to go to Abhi's cabin. Armaan looks all around locker room as if searching for some device. Ridima shots him a questioning glance and he mouths "camera". With an angry look Ridhima pushes him towards exit door and tells him to go. Armaan gives her his sweet smile and says "Don't miss me too much basket; I'll be back in no time." He winks at Nikki and leaves.

Nikki smiles at her friend, however Ridhima notices some restlessness in her smile. Ridhima asks Nikki to seat and tell her what had happened yesterday between her and Dr. Modi. Nikki tells her about yesterday's episode and cries heartily. Nikki sobs and tells Ridhima between her sobs that Abhi hates her from bottom of his heart and he has no regrets for whatever he had said to her. Ridhima consoles her friend and wipes her tears. She hugs Nikki and tells her that everything will be alright. Nikki looks at her pleadingly and says I know u won't but please don't let Armaan know anything about it." Ridhima nods her head in affirmation.

After a long silence, Nikki fondly smiles at Ridhima and tells her" I am really lucky to have you as my friend and I should thank Armaan for that. U know u r right, enough of rona dhona. Now I've decided that I'm not going to cry over that sadu anymore. I'll move ahead and u'll see the old Nikki back in action." Both friends smiles and hugs each other and leaves for their respective duties.

In the night, Abhi and Nikki both think about each other in their respective bed.

Abhi didn't know but he was feeling happy. Somehow he has made Nikki stay back in Sanjivani and he promises himself that he will make sure that she completes her internship in Sanjivani." But what after that?" He chides his mind: "Don't be a moron Abhimanyu, just concentrate on present task." He sighs and tries to surrender himself in a blissful sleep.

Whereas Nikki couldn't sleep, she keeps on tossing and turning in bed. She gets up and tells herself, "Nikki u r strong, u can handle him for 30 days more. It can't be worst than what u've already gone through. And don't forget, u've got world's best friends around u so chill and sleep. She smiles and goes to sleep.

Next day Abhi calls the Interns to inform them that Ms. Suman Lata Dalamia, daughter of one of the biggest investor, is joining sanjivani to assist him in New Sanjivani Project. He further informs that Dr. Aditya Jaiswal, one of the famous Cardiologists surgeon is also joining Sanjivani from tomorrow. He tells the interns to behave themselves and help Ms. Dalamia/ Dr. Jaiswal in settling down in Sanjivani.

Abhi notices that all the interns eyes were focused on someone behind him so he turns to see that someone. He finds an eccentric female looking all of them with a smile. She shoots the same smile to Abhi and informs him that she is looking for Dr. Abhimanyu Modi. Abhi looks at her from head to toe and says, "I am Dr. Modi. How can I help you?"

Suman stares at him without a blink. She blushes hard and offers her hand to shake with his "Oh.. to aap Dr. Abhimanyu Modiji hai. U look much younger and handsome than what I'd expected." Abhi coughs, "Ahem, ummm sorry but do I know you Ms. .?"

All the interns were thoroughly enjoying this conversation.

Suman grabs Abhi's arm from his side and grips it in her both arms. "I am Suman Lata Dalamia and nice to meet u jee." Abhi is taken aback by Suman's behavior. He slowly removes his arm from Suman's grip and turns back to the interns. He notices that all the interns were trying very hard to control their laughter. He also sees amused Nikki trying to hide behind Armaan. His temper was rising by a minute so he counts 1 to 5 in his mind and takes a deep breath before speaking.

"Well Doctors, as you now know she is Ms. Suman Lata Dalamia. As I told you before, she is going to help help us in raising funds for New Sanjivani project." He turns to Suman and tells her "Ms. Dalamia, these are our Doctors." After a formal introduction, everyone runs off for their respective duties except Nikki. Abhi tells Nikki to come to his cabin in 10 minutes with New Sanjivani latest file and he goes back to his cabin with Suman.

In his cabin, Abhi tells Suman to have a seat. He goes to pick up the file lying on his desk before advancing towards his own chair at the other side of his desk. Oblivious to Abhi, completely smitten Suman stands right behind him. When Abhi turns to move, he finds Suman dreamily looking at him. Before he says or reacts, he sees Suman passes out. He immediately puts his arms around her stopping her from falling on the ground.

At the same time, Nikki knocks the door and enters. Nikki is shocked to see the scene in front of her.

She angrily shouts at Abhi," What are you doing with her?"

Abhi snaps back "What do you think what am I doing? Now just stop starring and help me to settle Ms. Dalamia in the chair." Nikki puts file on his desk and helps him in sliding Suman in nearest chair.

Completing the task, she glares at Abhi with a wide eyes and folds her arms in front of her chest. Abhi was massaging his forehead and trying to figure out what has just happened when he hears Nikki's interrogative tone "Well now Dr. Modi, would you please enlighten me what were doing with Ms. Dalamia and why she has fainted in ur arms?"

Abhi rolls his eyes in exasperation. Still he doesn't know how to deal with this 4.11" something who does't think twice before uttering any nonsense. But man, she looks hot when she is furious, wait a minute did I say "Hot". Abhimanyu get a grip.

"Dr. Modi, I'm asking you something? Nikki continues with her interrogation.

Shaking his head Abhi retorts back " Are u out of ur mind Dr. Nikita? Why don't u give ur mind a little shake before u come out with such a ridiculous question." He continuous" By the way u claim to be a good doctor, so why don't u examine her and find out urself. And in any case I don't think I need to answer any of your silly questions." ""

Nikki's temper was on a verge of explosion so she burst out "See that is the problem with u. If I ask u a question, u give me ur standard "Mind ur own business" look. Ya, why would u answer my question?? After all u have to maintain ur super trooper angry young man image." She continuous her ranting " But if I don't answer ur question then either I'm running away or I'm hiding the fact or I'm childish or I'm supporting someone or I'm '..." On impulse, Abhi puts her one arm behind her neck and other on her lips to shut her up from her ranting.

Nikki's eyes widen in shock and she goes still in Abhi's touch. Her sense were reeling so she lets her eyes fill with the sight of a face who was just a breath away from her face, the face who would make any woman's heart skip a bit or two. Lost in her dreamland, she was not listening or comprehending what he was saying to her.

Abhi was also gazing into her eyes and was telling her very tenderly, " I have not said or did anything to Ms. Dalamia. I saw her passing out when I turned. I have no idea she got fainted on me. So there is no need to get jealous, ok sweetheart?

Nikki nods her head in affirmation without noticing or comprehending meaning of his words. She was too lost in his deep chocolate eyes and sensuous touch.

Abhi stops speaking but didn't stop looking at her. For a moment that spun out forever, both couldn't seem to blink or move. Then it realized to Abhi what he was doing and where they were standing. He gently removes his one hand which was holding her neck and sensuously removes other hand from her mouth in such a way that each of his fingers touches those rosy lips in sensuous way. Nikki's eyes get closes on her own accord.

Abhi adoringly smiles at her and speaks to himself, "So Miss"I don't care what u think of me" still reacts the same way to my touch. Abhimanyu, good progress in one day.

Before he tells anything to Nikki, he notices some movement in the chair. He knelt down beside the chair and finds Suman regaining her consciousness. Concernedly he asks Suman, "Ms. Dalamia, are u alright?" Suman nods her head shyly and tells him that she is feeling ok now.

Nikki's eyes pops open hearing those voices and she finds Abhi concernedly looking at Suman. She didn't like it. Though, she also asks Suman "Ms. Dalamia, How are u feeling now? What happened to you? Why did you pass out all of suddenly?" Suman looks at her and tells her "Thank u ji. I'm much better now. I don't know what happened... I saw Dr. Modi.. I mean I was standing behind him and he turned' Its his perfume' and I've this allergy.. and I was feeling hungry' and I've not eaten anything since morning.."

She was not making any sense to Abhi or Nikki. But Nikki didn't like the direction of her babbling.. Why is she babbling on Abhi, his perfume, etc.... So Nikki decides to leave before she creates another scene in front of Abhi. She had enough of drama for one day.

Nikki cuts Suman in middle" Sorry to stop you Suman I mean Ms. Dalamia, but I think u should eat something. It seems u r feeling hungry. Actually, I've forgot my pager in cafeteria so please excuse me."

As she was about to leave Abhi's voice stops her in her track," Dr. Nikita, since u r going to cafeteria, why don't you ask someone to deliver food in my cabin for Ms. Dalamia.

Nikki couldn't believe nerve of this man.. What does he think of himself.. She is not his personal secretary or ward boy.. She controls her urge to backfire infront of Suman, Nikki again compose herself and steps forward. She picks up the cordless phone lying on his desk and dials the cafeteria's number. "Chhotu, this is Dr. Nikita. I'm calling from Dr. Modi's cabin and he wants to place order for his' hmmm... friend, so please help him out." She then offers the phone to Abhi for order.

Abhi couldn't decide whether laugh or argue. Sassy tongue and sharp mind- a dangerous combination and she has both. And altogether too intriguing. He shakes his mind and takes the receiver with a fake smile. He asks Suman what she would like to order. Suman starts another round of babbling " Aloo paratha.. no no' it'll be too oily. Hmmmm' Puri bhaji.. No no I don't have appetite for it ..And she goes on '

Seeing Abhi's frustration, Nikki was trying hard to control her laughter. Abhi had already started massaging his temple with the other free hand. Nikki looks at Suman and thinks: If this is the beginning, I'm dying to watch what will happen when this character starts working with Mr. Perfect.

When Abhi looks at Nikki he sees spark in her eyes and mischief in her grin. He couldn't help his own grin. He desperately wanted to touch her again. Nikki's grin widen listening Suman's non stop babbling on food. She felt pity on Abhi and looks up at him to help him out. But seeing him greening, she changes her mind and mouths him "bye."

As again she turns to leave, same voice again stops her in her track, "Dr. Nikita wait for a minute. I've an idea. Since I've a meeting and u are going to cafeteria, why don't u take Ms. Dalamia with you. U can help her deciding her food, can't u?." He turns his gaze to Suman and tells her "Dr. Nikita is always keen to help others, isn't it Dr. Nikita?"

Nikki looks at him in disbelief and challenges him with her eyes. She brings fake smile on her face and moves her eyes from Suman to Abhi, "Why not Ms. Suman, let's have lunch together today. As I am sure from tomorrow onwards Mr. Modi is going to get all ur attention and enjoy ur company during lunchtime" With that she turns and leaves. Suman colors at her statement and follows her throwing shy smile at Abhi.

Abhi lets out a sigh and speaks to himself, "Phew.... U know u r something Dr. Nikita."

To be Contd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey nammy
I love this update, very interesting and entertaining.
I always enjoyed their sweet nok jhok a lot.Keep it like this but where Armaan n Abhi scene went away in flu when Nikki told him about Abhi is calling him in cabin.
We enjoy Armaan n Abhi as well. Continue...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was really a vry nice update. The story seems to b getting interesting. U reminded me of d whole SLD track. Though I nvr likd her, bt no complaints wen AN r around. Looking forward for ur next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey namy u r going great dear👏i thoroughly enjoyed each and everything in this update i m loving it and once again namy for giving us a ff on our dearest AN plz continue it ASAP😃


Edited by jsdoll - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Nammy... Very nice update and your ff is interesting looking forward for next part . Update soon dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi guys
I have updated
If not interseted than ignore it
Thanks
Shale

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