Hum dil de chuke sanam 4 Garv-kumud - Page 5

Part-23.....Tho garv was fully drunk,he was conscious. G:I & kumud got separated.kumud became another man's wife.that does'nt mean thT kumud cheated me. Kashish:then how did kashish become another man's wife?garv,u r too nice. G:the faukt is mine.only mine.that's a TRAGIC STORY.u DON'T KNOW THAT. Kashish kept silent.She goes out.G & K look at each other. Song:hum dil de chuke sanam….kumud cries.she holds his hands:is it bcoz of me u r drinking ?why r u like this?plz don't drink anymore.won't u obey me? G:I can't kumud.no rescue from this.that's my fate.its not bcoz of u.u shud'nt worry thinking about me. K;plz don't drink garv.i can't see u getting destroyed due 2 overdrinking. G:I no that u & others r worried about me.even kashish whom I scold everyday gets worried.but I'm helpless. K:plz cum with me garv/I'l giv u gud treatment. G:then what about ur husband?how wil he react? K:I'm not thinking about it.now in my mind only this thot is there. G:I'l cum kumud.but not now.but I'l cum b4 my death. K:garv! G:now u go kumud.i told u noi'l cum 2 u. K:but garv…G:don't tell anything.i can't cum now. K removes her bead necklace & puts it around G's neck:this is 2 remind u 2 cum 2 me. K cries a lot holding his hands.then she goes out.kashish was standing there. K:plz look after garv well.its my request. Ka:yes.i respect him a lot.do u no why?bcoz eventho I luv him a lot,kumud is his breath.that stong his luv is.he is even sacrificing his life 4 luv.i don't hav the rite 2 hinder it.eventho I'm near him,he is seeing & knowing only u.who can't luv such a nice luver?if I was in kumud's place I wud've thrown everything 2 reach garv.i'm jealous of u kumud. K controls her tears .

Part-24.....Kashish,garv & nakul dance:chalak{Devdas}.Garv faints vomiting blood. Kashish brings a Dr. Dr:I'm sorry,garv's condition is serious. K was upset.she looks after him well. G:kashish,why r u doing this? K:why,u can't tolerate my presense? G:ur effort will b waste.that's why I'm upset.i no that I won't liv long. K:garv!I no that u r talking like this due 2 ur hatred 4 me.i'm bad no. G:I don't think u r bad. K was surprised:then? G:I feel that u r nice. K:ur hatred 4 me has gone? G smiles:yes. K:now what's ur feelings 2wards me? G:I feel a liking 2wards u. K was very happy. G:if I did'nt no kumud,I wud've luved only u.but kumud is my everything.so plz don't expect anything from me kashish. K cries. G thinks:the hearts of both kumud & kashish r paining due 2 me. Garv dreams both kumud & kashish dancing 2 the song Dolare…. &nbs p; G:kashish,I want 2 go 2 kumud. K:no garv.now it's the time 2 rest. G:why shud I rest?whats the use?bcoz my death is near. K:plz don't tell like that. G:but that's the truth.let me go.i promised her.if I don't keep my word,again I'l b a cheater 4 her. K weeps. G gives a letter 2 her:giv this 2 nakul. Garv goes. Nakul cumes 2 kashish's house. N:call garv.i've brought licker 4 him. K:garv is too weak 2 hav even a drop.if he drink again,he'l die.do u want 2 see his horrible death? N was speechless. K:garv went away. She gives that letter.N reads it. K:whas written? N:that he's going 2 see kashish.he has written that its kumud's bead necklace that's giving him the strength 2 liv.i'm getting tensed thinking about him.i only destroyed garv by giving poison. He breaks the glass bottle of licker & wounds his hand. K:r u mad?garv wil become sad if he cumes 2 no that u did this. K puts medicine on his wound. Garv looks at the bead necklace given by kumud.the beads fall down.G takes all the beads 2gether & puts it in the pocket.   ;

Part-25....Garv was really tired.he gets tensed:oh god,wil I b able 2 reach kumud? He reached near kumud's house .he faints. Kshitij;s mom Saakshi cums 2 kumud& kshitij:1 guy has fallen b4 our house.he's almost dead I feel.he was drunk. K was shocked.she thinks:wil he b garv? K:who is he?whats his name? S:no idea. K:had he worn a bead necklace? S:no.had worn a small gold chain & a ring.i think he's rich. K thinks:if he has'nt worn the bead necklace,then he won't b garv. She was relieved. S:but ppl found sum beads from his pocket. K was shattered.tears cum from her eyes:that's given by me.he's garv. Ks was shocked. 1 servant cums:that person is not dead.we made sure.he is breathing. K was relieved:let me go & see him. S:why ?no need. K:kshitij,plz let me go.garv is my life. Saakshi was shocked. S becomes angry:no u can't go 2 see ur lover. K:plz mummiji..S:u r married.but still u want 2 b with ur lover? K:plz…its 4 me garv traveled such a long distance eventho he's sick. S:no u can't go. K was determined:no,I've 2 go. K runs. S:kshitij,catch ur wife.she is mad. Ks did'nt move. S:what kind of husband u r? Saakshi tells the servant:catch kumud.don't allow her 2 go. Ks:no,don't b an obstacle.let kumud go.otherwise she'l die. S was stunned. Garv moves his lips:kumud…K reaches near garv.she weeps:garv! Kumud keeps his head on her lap:garv…G:kumud,I came 4 u.i've 2go soon. K cries:don't go garv. Song:kabhi alvida na kehna……. K's tears fall on his face. Ks cumes & snatches kumud's mangalsuthra.K was shocked. Ks wipes her sindoor.K was stunned. Ks:these were the obstackles of ur luv.that r detached from u.u r needed most 4 garv.not 4 my son.kumud,garv is like this bcoz of me.bcoz of my relationship with u.now that's over.go with garv. K was surprised:Kshitij! Ks:yes.i'll help u 2 giv him the best treatment.i'm sure that garv wil cum back 2 life.bcoz u both r made 4 each other. K:thanks a lot kshitij.i'vent seen such a gr8 person in my life.u used 2 call me Parvathi Devi.but the real God is urself. Ks smiles:funny. K:I promise that tho our relationship is over,I'l b ur subham's mom's 4ver. Ks smiles:thanku kumud.but our relationship is not over.i'l remain as ur best friend. K smiles. After sum months:Kumud in the pooja room is praying:kabhi khushi kabhi gham…..Sindoor is seen on her 4head.Garv comes near her with a smiling face & prays.K puts the prasad into his mouth. The bell rang.K goes & opens the door.they were surprised 2 see kashish there. K:kashish! G:what a gr8 surprise! Kashish smiles:I came 2 see u both.u both rock 2gether. G –K smile. Ka:it's a gr8 pleasure that God made u both 1. K:cum,hav prasad. They giv Kashish a gud treat. B4 going kashish:Best wishes 4 ur happy married life. G:thanks a lot kashish. K:u've 2 cum again. Ka smiles & goes. Garv-kumud look at each other & smile. G:I want 2 liv seeing u always. K smiles:finally god heard our prayers. G smiles & hugs kumud. THE END

its really wicked im so glad u didnt kill garv!!!!!!!
garv and kumud live happily ever after!!!!!
awesome fanfic quite creative!!!

i finally caught up that was a great story better than real devdas 👏 👏 👏