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Hi guyz!!!!
Hope u guyz r awesome . I was free so i thought of writing another OS . Hope u guyz will like it *fingers crossed* so here u go......


A girl was standing near the window of her room. She was completly lost in her own world of thoughts. A cute bt strange smile was playing on her lips. Her almond shaped beautiful eyes were twinkling like stars. She was blushing. Her dark brown long hair was nw tied in a high bun,sum strands of hair were playing wid her pink cheeks. She was wearing a white top nd light blue pyjamas. Her right arm was arround her stomach and she was playing wid her necklace wid her left hand.
Dat girl is Heer Juneja daughte of Balraaj nd Teji Juneja. She is a very sweet nd kindheartd bt becoz of her temper she is known as LADY HITLER of Juneja House....


Ash enterd Heer's room. She saw Heer,completly lost. She came near Heer nd wavd her hand in front of her face bt NO REPLY

"Lag a hai IS ROUTE KI SABHI LINES WAIAST HAIN " Ash thought

She brought her lips close 2 Heer's ear
"BOOO" Ash screamd
Heer came on earth nd jumpd a lil. Her left hand was nw on her heart. She slappd Ash on her shoulder nd yelld "Oh my god Ash are u mad or what han???? Meri aadhi jaan hi nikal gai thi ....tera dimaag to jaga par hai k nai" Ash was laughng she said "Sorry....Sorry sorry... Bt luk at you man..."Ash said

Heer:- What???
Ash:- Your face???
Heer:- what...what happnd 2 ma face???
Ash :-You are blushing man....
Heer slappd her again nd said "Ash tera dimag sach mein jaga par nahin hai"
Ash :-Mera dimag to apni jaga par hai par lagta hai tera dil saath valay room mein hai
Heer:-Matlab????
Ash :-Matlab Prem kay room mein....Prem kay paas.....
Heer:-Ash tu sach mein pagal ho gai hai....
Ash:- Pagal mein nahin gagal to tu ho gai hai...Prem k Pyaar mein...bol na Heer...tu abhi usi k baaray mein soch rai thi na....bol na...soch rai thi na usi k baray mein...bol na Heer
Heer:- Haan baba...Haan Bas
Ash:- to tu us say pyaar karti hai RIGHT!!!!
Heer:- Nahin....i mean pata nahin????
Ash:- pata nahin ka koi matlab nahin hota heer Haan ya Naa???
Heer:- Chor na Ash....tu bata tu yahan kuen ai thi....
Ash:- Aray haan ... Mein to bhol hi gai....vo mein tujhay bulany ai thi....chal na
Heer:- Par kahan???
Ash:-Vo hum log neechay movie dekh rahay hain...Prem aur Preet ny mujhay bheeja tha tujhay bulany k liye...Chal na...
Heer:- nai Ash mera mood nai hai...tu ja
Ash:-chal na Heer....
Heer:- nai Ash mera mood nai hai....tum log dekh lo....
Ash:-Okay

Ash startd walking towards da door singing

Prem Meri Aankhon mein hai
Prem meri saansoon mein hai
Bani Bani Bani re Bani Prem Diwani Bani

Heer quickly grabbed a pillow nd threw it 2wards Ash
Ash ran out of da room closing da door behind her
Heer let out a laugh just dn Ash opend da door again nd said


Ab Kya karay Dil Diwana


"Ash ki bachi...."Heer said nd Ash ran 4m there

"I m in love????? Mein Prem ki diwani hoon????" Heer questiond herself "Yes i m in love....I am in love wid Prem....I love him"



Living Room

Here Prem was sitting on da sofa anxiously w8ing 4 her Lady love HEER his HEER. He was in love wid her 4m 3 weeks when dy came India 4m Canada at their father's cousin nd best frend's Home. He was in love wid her at 1st sight. He love her bt he never expressd his feelings. He love to spent time wid her, fight wid her, irritate her. And dat was his idea 2 watch da movie becoz he knw dat being KUMBKARANs Ash nd Preet will soon asleep nd he will get a chance 2 spent time wid Heer he had sent Ash 2 call Heer nd its bn 15min nd there was no sign of Ash nd Heer. Prem got up 4m da sofa in frustration nd said
"Enough is Enough yaar....yeh Ash Heer ko bulany gai hai ya nai Heer banany...."
Preet who was going thru da CD's 2 decide a movie 2 watch said
"Chill Bro....aa jae gi...."
Prem:- kb aye gi yaar....
Preet:- aa gai.....
As he saw Ash coming dwnstairs
Prem:- Um....Heer kahan hai....
Ash:-vo nai ai....
Prem:- KYUN??????
Prem was lyk he will cry any momnt
Ash:- madam ka mood nai hai....choro na....Preet kya hoa koi movie mili k nai????
Preet:- Haan yeh wali deekhain????
he said giving da CD 2 Ash
Ash:- DDLJ
Prem:- What DDLJ???? Its psumthng lyk...Dil....waalay....dhul...dhulhaniyan lay jaengay...
He said taking da CD 4m Ash nd reading da title a new hope rise inside Prem nd He smild
Ash:- Same thng....nd dnt tell me ky tum ny yeh movie nai dekhi
Prem-Preet:-   NAI DEEKHI.,..
Ash:- Holy Cow man!!!! Tum logon ny DDLJ nai deekhi
Prem:- Ash ab tu yeh apni bakwaas ko STOP kar aur movie PLAY kar....
Ash:- acha baba...

And they startd watching da movie


After an hour or so
Prem got up 4m da sofa nd said "Itr so boring yaar...."

"WHHAATT????"Preet nd Ash said at da same time

"Anarth....ghoor Anarth.....Agar Heer ko pata chala na k tu is movie ky baaray mein kya keh raha tha to vo tera murder kar dy gi" Ash said

Prem:- kya matlab?????
Ash:- kuen kay yeh us ki fav. Movie hai aur vo is k khilaaf ek shabd bardaasht nai karti

"fav. Movie....tbhi nai ai" Prem thought nd said "Tum sb log pagal ho....mein soony ja raha hoon"

Ash:- Hum pagal...teri to...
Preet:-Ash....chor na.....hum movie....deekhtay hain...
Prem left 4m there

Heer's Room


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Hi guyz!!!!
Hope u guyz r fine . I am so sorry 4 updating late. Here is da complete part . Hope u guyz will like it *fingers crossed* so here u go......


A girl was standing near the window of her room. She was completly lost in her own world of thoughts. A cute bt strange smile was playing on her lips. Her almond shaped beautiful eyes were twinkling like stars. She was blushing. Her dark brown long hair was nw tied in a high bun,sum strands of hair were playing wid her pink cheeks. She was wearing a white top nd light blue pyjamas. Her right arm was arround her stomach and she was playing wid her necklace wid her left hand.
Dat girl is Heer Juneja daughte of Balraaj nd Teji Juneja. She is a very sweet nd kindheartd bt becoz of her temper she is known as LADY HITLER of Juneja House....


Ash enterd Heer's room. She saw Heer,completly lost. She came near Heer nd wavd her hand in front of her face bt NO REPLY

"Lag a hai IS ROUTE KI SABHI LINES WAIAST HAIN " Ash thought

She brought her lips close 2 Heer's ear
"BOOO" Ash screamd
Heer came on earth nd jumpd a lil. Her left hand was nw on her heart. She slappd Ash on her shoulder nd yelld "Oh my god Ash are u mad or what han???? Meri aadhi jaan hi nikal gai thi ....tera dimaag to jaga par hai k nai" Ash was laughng she said "Sorry....Sorry sorry... Bt luk at you man..."Ash said

Heer:- What???
Ash:- Your face???
Heer:- what...what happnd 2 ma face???
Ash :-You are blushing man....
Heer slappd her again nd said "Ash tera dimag sach mein jaga par nahin hai"
Ash :-Mera dimag to apni jaga par hai par lagta hai tera dil saath valay room mein hai
Heer:-Matlab????
Ash :-Matlab Prem kay room mein....Prem kay paas.....
Heer:-Ash tu sach mein pagal ho gai hai....
Ash:- Pagal mein nahin gagal to tu ho gai hai...Prem k Pyaar mein...bol na Heer...tu abhi usi k baaray mein soch rai thi na....bol na...soch rai thi na usi k baray mein...bol na Heer
Heer:- Haan baba...Haan Bas
Ash:- to tu us say pyaar karti hai RIGHT!!!!
Heer:- Nahin....i mean pata nahin????
Ash:- pata nahin ka koi matlab nahin hota heer Haan ya Naa???
Heer:- Chor na Ash....tu bata tu yahan kuen ai thi....
Ash:- Aray haan ... Mein to bhol hi gai....vo mein tujhay bulany ai thi....chal na
Heer:- Par kahan???
Ash:-Vo hum log neechay movie dekh rahay hain...Prem aur Preet ny mujhay bheeja tha tujhay bulany k liye...Chal na...
Heer:- nai Ash mera mood nai hai...tu ja
Ash:-chal na Heer....
Heer:- nai Ash mera mood nai hai....tum log dekh lo....
Ash:-Okay

Ash startd walking towards da door singing

Prem Meri Aankhon mein hai
Prem meri saansoon mein hai
Bani Bani Bani re Bani Prem Diwani Bani

Heer quickly grabbed a pillow nd threw it 2wards Ash
Ash ran out of da room closing da door behind her
Heer let out a laugh just dn Ash opend da door again nd said


Ab Kya karay Dil Diwana


"Ash ki bachi...."Heer said nd Ash ran 4m there

"I m in love????? Mein Prem ki diwani hoon????" Heer questiond herself "Yes i m in love....I am in love wid Prem....I love him"



Living Room

Here Prem was sitting on da sofa anxiously w8ing 4 her Lady love HEER his HEER. He was in love wid her 4m 3 weeks when dy came India 4m Canada at their father's cousin nd best frend's Home. He was in love wid her at 1st sight. He love her bt he never expressd his feelings. He love to spent time wid her, fight wid her, irritate her. And dat was his idea 2 watch da movie becoz he knw dat being KUMBKARANs Ash nd Preet will soon asleep nd he will get a chance 2 spent time wid Heer he had sent Ash 2 call Heer nd its bn 15min nd there was no sign of Ash nd Heer. Prem got up 4m da sofa in frustration nd said
"Enough is Enough yaar....yeh Ash Heer ko bulany gai hai ya nai Heer banany...."
Preet who was going thru da CD's 2 decide a movie 2 watch said
"Chill Bro....aa jae gi...."
Prem:- kb aye gi yaar....
Preet:- aa gai.....
As he saw Ash coming dwnstairs
Prem:- Um....Heer kahan hai....
Ash:-vo nai ai....
Prem:- KYUN??????
Prem was lyk he will cry any momnt
Ash:- madam ka mood nai hai....choro na....Preet kya hoa koi movie mili k nai????
Preet:- Haan yeh wali deekhain????
he said giving da CD 2 Ash
Ash:- DDLJ
Prem:- What DDLJ???? Its psumthng lyk...Dil....waalay....dhul...dhulhaniyan lay jaengay...
He said taking da CD 4m Ash nd reading da title a new hope rise inside Prem nd He smild
Ash:- Same thng....nd dnt tell me ky tum ny yeh movie nai dekhi
Prem-Preet:-   NAI DEEKHI.,..
Ash:- Holy Cow man!!!! Tum logon ny DDLJ nai deekhi
Prem:- Ash ab tu yeh apni bakwaas ko STOP kar aur movie PLAY kar....
Ash:- acha baba...

And they startd watching da movie


After an hour or so
Prem got up 4m da sofa nd said "Itr so boring yaar...."

"WHHAATT????"Preet nd Ash said at da same time

"Anarth....ghoor Anarth.....Agar Heer ko pata chala na k tu is movie ky baaray mein kya keh raha tha to vo tera murder kar dy gi" Ash said

Prem:- kya matlab?????
Ash:- kuen kay yeh us ki fav. Movie hai aur vo is k khilaaf ek shabd bardaasht nai karti

"fav. Movie....tbhi nai ai" Prem thought nd said "Tum sb log pagal ho....mein soony ja raha hoon"

Ash:- Hum pagal...teri to...
Preet:-Ash....chor na.....hum movie....deekhtay hain...
Prem left 4m there

Heer's Room

Here Heer was still standing near da window nd was smiling....Her thoughts were disturbd by tune of 'tujhay dekha to yeh jana sanam' tana..nana..nana..naaa..naaa...nana
"Yeh log DDLJ dekh rahe hain????" Heer said



Here Prem
As his room is next 2 heer. He was walking 2wards his room doing sumthng on his iphone...Suddenly he bumped into sumone....he lukd up 2 c da person...He saw heer staring at him angrily...sum packets of chips were on floor....He bend down 2 gather those packets.....After picking up all those packets...He gave those packets to Heer who was still in da same position..staring at him...
Prem :- WHAT!
Heer :- Andhay ho????
She askd softly
Prem :- nahin to...
"TO DEKH K NAI CHAL SAKTY KYA..ANKHAIN HAIN K BUTTONS....." Heer yelld She lovd him bt her temper is lyk.......

Prem :- I m sorry vo mein ny dekha nahin....
Prem apologizd becoz he knew dat it was his fault

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY DEKHA NAI???? BHAGWAN NAY YEH ANKHAIN DEKHNY K LIYE DI HAIN....INKO USE NAHIN KARO GAY TO SARR JAEN GI...IS LIYE APNI IN CHOTI CHOTI ANKHON KO KHOL K CHALA KARO..." Heer yelld again

"Hey..listen..." Prem said bt Preet cut him nd said "Stop it guyz....kya bachon ki tarha lar rahe ho...."
Prem :- Mein...Mein nai yeh lar rai hai ....mein ny isko sorry bola....
Heer was about 2 say sumthng just Then Ash screamd "CHHIIPPSS!!!!"
Ash :- How cheap Heer??? Mein ny pora ghar chaan mara in chips k liye aur tu in par sanp bn kar bethi hai....day na...
Heer :- Jis ghar mein tum jaisay Bhukar hoon...wahan cheezon ko chupana parta hai...aur Ash tu to mujh say bat hi mat kar....tu ny bataya kuen nai k tm log DDLJ dekh rahe ho...
Ash just smild nd came near Prem "Hum pagal naa....ab tu dekh" ash whisperd
Ash :- Heer chor na tujhay pata hai Prem DDLJ k baray mein kia bol raha tha....vo bol raha tha k..
Prem put his hand on Ash's mouth nd said "Mein bol raha tha kay Heer ki fav movie hai....to us ko bula lena chahiye...mein...mein to tumhain bulany hi aa raha tha....Chalo na...."
Prem's hand was still on Ash's mouth nd he went downstairs draging Ash nd Preet followd them... "How sweet!!!" Heer smild nd went downstairs


Living Room
Prem nd Heer were sittin on sofa nd Preet Ash were sitting on da floor

"Ash chal...start say play kar"Heer said in excitment nd Ash did as Heer said
"Heer tujhay pata hai Prem kya bol raha tha..." Ash said Prem gav her a 'SHUT-UP'look
"Ash just shut ur mouth nw...chup chap movie dekh nai to apne room mein ja..."Heer said Her eyes were fixd on da tv screen
"haan Ash chup chap movie dekh nai to apne room mein ja..."Prem said Heer gav hm an angry luk "Okay....Sorry"Prem said puting hs finger on his lips like a five year old child

MOVIE STARTED


interval
At interval day PAUSD da movie
Ash was making coffee Preet nd Heer were sharing chips nd Prem was lost in hs thoughts "itni deer ho gai hai aur yeh Ash aur Preet soony ka naam nai lay rahe....waisay to har waqt sotay rehtay hain...ab kya karon"
Heer nd Preet noticd that heer wavd her hand in front of his face. He came on earth "Movie itni bhi complictd nai hai k samaj na aye....." Heer said nd
Both of dm (Preet nd Heer) laughd nd shard high fives Prem was staring at dm as dy were laughing on dat stupid PJ
Prem :- Yeh kya tha????
Heer :-Joke!!!!
Prem :- I hate jokes...
Heer :-Nd i hate you....

Ash came wid da coffee nd they plyd da movie again


END
Movie ended Prem yawnd. Heer filld his mouth wid chips
Both of dm startd throwing Chips on each other
"tujhay pata hai Heer...Prem kya bol raha tha..."Ash said again

Heer slappd Ash on her head nd said "Shut up" nd went upstairs 2wrds her Room
Prem also slappd her nd went upstairs


Hw Prem nd heer will confess their love 2 eachother??? W8 4 da next part....


I know it is nt as gud as othds bt still
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Edited by anoushay_kdmhmd - 14 years ago
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it was awesome
even i like ddlj a lot...
poor ash..😆
continue soooooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeee oneshot..............⭐️
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Originally posted by: premeer4rever

it was awesome
even i like ddlj a lot...
poor ash..😆
continue soooooooooooooon
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Thankx dear
Will surely PM you when i will continue