Ek Ajeeb Lovestory! one shot by Kaninika!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey friends,
 
ths is a short story written by Kaninika Basuray my shweet krazzien, who we call kanu, as u all knw she's damn talnted and love all her FFs... Just posting this in behalf of her😊 Im sure u'll love itπŸ˜ƒ oh one more important thing, Its a GyaaNeeta LovestoryπŸ˜‰ so be prepared to laugh alot before u go aheadπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
Ek Ajeeb Love Story

Once upon a time there was a little boy whose name was Gyan Verma. His father was a school teacher whose hobby was giving gyan to everybody.πŸ˜† That's why when he got a son he named him "Gyan".

 

Gyan perfectly fitted with his name. No he was not good in studies but he has all other "Gyans".πŸ˜† He was interested in many things which are not important to others. He liked abnormal things. He was very naughty. Actually he was similar to "Ishaan Avasti" of "Tare Zameen Par".πŸ˜›

 

One day, it was his first day of class five; a new girl was admitted in his class. She was beautiful, proud and arrogant. It never seemed that it was her first day in school. Nobody could rag her; instead she behaved with others in a way that she was the best. It seemed that she was the Miss India. Her name was Radhika.

 

Gyan was never interested in girls but this girl was different. Gyan liked "ajeeb" things and this girl was really ajeeb.πŸ˜† He wanted to make friendship with her. But all his efforts were in vain. He promised to himself that one day this girl should be his friend.

 

But unfortunately Gyan's father died.😭 His mother took him to another city to his maternal uncle's house. He had to leave the school without fulfilling his promise.😭

 

BEES SAAL BAD

(kitni filmy line hai na? abh to serials mein bhi common ho gayi hai, 20yr leapπŸ˜†)

 

 

Gyan is in Mumbai. He is working as associate chief editor in Men's Universe. He still does ajeeb things, but he is grown up now, so everyday his boss Amarjeet almost kills him.🀣

 

He hates his colleague Vinita, who is the public relation officer in Men's Universe. She is proud and arrogant and she is very irritating. She is the ex Miss India. She is always pokes her nose to everything Gyan does.πŸ˜†

 

In this 20 years, Gyan was really changed. When he was a child he was as innocent as Ishaan (TZP). But now he is not that good. His friends Bhaskar and Raichura are real "Badmash", they are spoiling his innocence. He doesn't like "ajeeb" girls now. He likes beautiful sexy girls.πŸ˜‰

 

Gyan hates Vinita but she reminds him of Radhika. It makes him laugh when he thinks about Radhika. He was so idiot at that time. He wonders why he liked such a devilish girl?πŸ˜†

 

One day he was checking the files of his office colleagues and he saw that Vinita was in the same school in which he studied. He didn't know why but one thing came into his mind


"Vinita bhi St. Thomas mein parti thi, aur mere hi batch mein? Lekin mere class me to koi Vinita nahi thi. Kya Vinita hi Radhika hai?"

 

He really didn't know why but thinking of Vinita being Radhika created some tingles in his heart.πŸ˜‰

 

He went to Vinita's cabin and said,

 

"Radhika, tum is month ki issue ke bare mein kuchh batane wali thi na? to batao"

 

Vinita: ha main keh rahi thi ki'.then she stopped. Tumne kis naam se bulaya mujhe?"

 

Gyan: kyon? "Vinita"

 

Vinita started talking again. Gyan felt something. He thought "ye Radhika hi hai, shayad Miss India ban ne ke liye naam change kii hogi".

 

Days passed by. Everytime Gyan tried to know whether Vinita is Radhika or not. He was almost confirmed. He doesn't know why but day by day he was attracted to her. He remembered his promise, he knows it was a silly promise but he cannot stop thinking about her.πŸ˜‰

 

On the other hand Vinita indeed is Radhika. She changed her name when she participated in Miss India contest. To her "Radhika" is very old fashioned.πŸ˜†  She met Gyan again in Men's Universe but she couldn't identify him.

 

Surprisingly she likes Gyan because he is not a normal good boy, he is different. He always does garbar in his work and she loves to help him.πŸ˜›

 

One day, Gyan was trying to explain Amarjeet his work, and Amarjeet was getting more and more furious, thinking "aj to isse mar na hi parega", just then Bhaskar came into the room.

 

Bhaskar: Gyan, tune mujhe bataya nahi ke tu next Sunday shaadi kar raha hai aur wo bhi Vinita ke saath!!🀣

 

Gyan was totally perplexed😲. Amarjeet was delighted.πŸ˜›

 

Amarjeet: Gyan, itni achchi khabar! Tune mujhe bataya nahi?

 

Actually it was Bhaskar's plan.πŸ˜‰ Bhaskar is a very naughty boy, he just wanted to tease his friend. He knew that Gyan doesn't like Vinita. Bhaskar was carrying an invitation card in his hand where it was written that Gyan is marrying Vinita on 30th December, Sunday.

 

Gyan doesn't know what to do, but his mail ego was not ready to break. He tried to control his nervousness and said.


Gyan: Ha yaar, achanak humne decide kar li, tum logo ko invite karne hi wala tha main.

 

Amarjeet: tune Bhaskar ko pehle card de di, main boss hun mujhe pehle dena chahiye tha. Yeh bilkul "illicit (his WOD)" hai.😑

 

Bhaskar started smiling. He wandered what Gyan will do now.🀣

 

After 15 minutes everybody in the office came to know about Gyan-Vinita's wedding. When Vinita came to office everyone was congratulating her. She was surprised. Exactly 10 years back she won the Miss India title on this day. She wandered how everybody knows about this.πŸ˜†

 

Vinita came to Sonali to inquire about her work, when she heard that all the ladies in the office + Sunny are discussing about what dress Vinita will wear in her wedding.πŸ˜†

 

Vinita: yeh kya ho raha hai yahan? Kam nahi hai kyat um logo ke paas? Aur meri shaadi ko leke baat kyun ho raha hai?

 

Sunny: Vinny darling kya bol rahi ho, is Sunday tumhari shaadi hai, aur 6 din hi to baki hai

 

Vinita: what?!!!!!!!!!!!😲

 

 Ketki: Madam batiye na apke aur Gyan sir ke beech mein pyar kaise hua? Aplog achanak shaadi bhi kuon kar rahe hai?πŸ˜†

 

Everyone together "ha batayie na, please batiye".

 

Vinita: meri aur Gyan ki shaadi? Kab?😲

 

Sunny: aise bol rahi ho jaise tumhe kuchh pata hi nahi, kathor kahin ki.πŸ˜†

 

Jenny: Gyan sir ne hum logo ko sab bata chuke hai madam.

 

Vinita understood something is wrong. She left the place and went to Gyan's room.

 

Hirabai: aj Gyan Sir to gaya🀣

 

 

In Gyan's room, Gyan was sitting on his chair. He was shocked when Bhaskar told him about the marriage. But now he is delighted. Earlier he was confused about his feelings for Vinita. He knew that he was attracted towards her but he never understood that it was love. But now when he is thinking about marrying her, his heart is beating loudly.❀️ He understood that he actually loves her. He started dreaming about her ("the tofa song").😍


Vinita entered the room. Gyan thought it was his dream. He said "tum aj mere sapno mein mein bar bar kyuon a rahi ho?"

 

Vinita: "GYAN"😑

 

Gyan suddenly came out his dream and was thrilled to see Vinita there.πŸ˜ƒ

 

Vinita: Gyan darling, yeh main kya sun rahi hun? Tumhari aur meri shaadi, office mein log kya keh rahe hai? Vinita was really angry.

 

Gyan said nothing, he kept looking at her. He thought, "itni khubsurat hai meri Radhika, bilkul Radha ki tarah, make up bohut zada lagati hai lekin, is make up ke pichhe chhupa hua roop mujhe aj dikh raha hai."🀣 He started dreaming again.😍

 

Vinita felt awkward. She stopped scolding him. She was mesmerized with Gyan's romantic eyes. There was an eye lock situation. They kept looking at each other.☺️

 

Just then Gyan's mobile started ringing. The ring tone was

 

"aajkal tere mere pyar ke charche har zubaan par

sab ko maloom hai aur sabko khabar ho gayi"

 

 

Both of them came back to their senses. Gyan took the call, Vinita was totally embarrassed. 😳

 

Gyan: Hello

 

Raichura: kya sun raha hun Gyan? Tu Vinita se shaadi karraha hai? tujhe pata nahi main usse pasand karta hu?🀣

 

Gyan: Nahi yaar, Vinny darling ab sirf meri hai, BTW, humari shaadi attend karne zaroor ana. He hang up the phone.

 

Vinita was shocked.😲 Gyan came near her, she thought that he was going to kiss her, she was very nervous, she felt butterfly fluttering in her stomach. Vinita was a very confident woman but this time she lost all her confidence, she knew she cannot stop him.☺️

 

Gyan came very close to her, Vinita closed her eyes.☺️

 

Gyan: apni aankhein kholo Radhika, dekho aur pehchano mujhe. Main wahi larka hun jo tumhe school mein bar bar pareshan karta tha, tumhara dost ban na chahta tha. Main wahi Gyan hun.

 

Vinita opened her eyes and tried to remember what Gyan was saying. She was able to identify him. Yes, Gyan is that boy whom she hated so much when she was in school. But now she knows she doesn't hate him. Does she loves him?☺️

 

Gyan: Mujhe usi din pata chal gaya tha ke tum hi Radhika ho, jisdin "Radhika" bulane se tumne response kii thi. I love you Radhika. Kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi?

 

Just then Vinita's phone started ringing, the ring tone was

 

"ehsaan tera hoga mujh par

dil chahta hai woh kehne do

mujhe tumse mohabbat ho gayi hai

mujhe palko ki chaav mein rehne do"

 

Vinita broke off from Gyan and took the call.

 

Some lady: Madam, main "Femina" se bol rahi hu. is Sunday former Miss India's ki ek Party hai, aap ayengi na?

 

Vinita: sorry, main nahi a sakti, is Sunday neri shaadi hai. and she hang up the phone.

 

Gyan was delighted. Apni bahen phailake usne kahan

 

"mein hoon yahan

tu hai yahan

meri bahon mein aa

aa bhi ja

o jaan-e-jaan

dono jahan

meri bahon mein aa

bhool ja aa

 

o jaan-e-jaan

dono jahan

meri bahon mein aa

bhool ja aa"

 

And they hugged each other. Exactly after one week, they were a happily married couple.


And they lived happily ever after.

Written by Kaninika Basuray!

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Posted: 14 years ago
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kanu awsum story omg and nads jaan thanx for postin xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Awwwwww such an awesome story Kaninika and  thank you Nadz for posting this...
 
Simply lurved it yaar...Keep writing such gr8 FF...ITz reallie addictive!!!
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Thanks a lot Nadz for posting it.πŸ€—
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kanu awsum story omg and nads jaan thanx for postin xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx



Dear Noori,

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Originally posted by: jassie_17

Awwwwww such an awesome story Kaninika and  thank you Nadz for posting this...

 
Simply lurved it yaar...Keep writing such gr8 FF...ITz reallie addictive!!!



Jassie,

Thanks a lot dear😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey kanu its simplly amazin will give u detailed comments wen i have my lappy gt visitors at the mo lolzzz but for now too good yaar
*thousands of claps for u* u truly desrve it and i had to post it wanted everyone to read it cnt wait til shabz reads it im sure shell luv it

luv u
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Originally posted by: nadz_J

hey kanu its simplly amazin will give u detailed comments wen i have my lappy gt visitors at the mo lolzzz but for now too good yaar
*thousands of claps for u* u truly desrve it and i had to post it wanted everyone to read it cnt wait til shabz reads it im sure shell luv it

luv u
nadz



Thank you dearπŸ€—
I am glad you liked it 😳

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