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Posted: 15 years ago
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first time after many years i felt like divali..wow i prepared divali stuff......now oouch.back is paining.......so as marham i want your comments😉
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kirtiji....where is your comment.........
and payal hubby gave divali and birthday gift like two in one.....kyaa baat hain.......ab tum bhi dinner and lunch two in one main dedo.....😉😉😉........
ok about next part
yudi is upto arrange something that can give time rani to study for her upcoming exams......and CR is upto find out how did BR improve............and rudra did something knowing that tamanna is ecstatic.......doctor has suggest something hearing that yudi is happy and CR is desperate to harm BR more....but will CR's plan be successful or something else will happen ..........?
to know all this keep reading EK THA RAJA EK THI RANI😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
[quote=binasingapury]...and payal hubby gave divali and birthday gift like two in one.....kyaa baat hain.......ab tum bhi dinner and lunch two in one main dedo.....😉😉😉........[/quote]

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Originally posted by: bsingapury

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first time after many years i felt like divali..wow i prepared divali stuff......now oouch.back is paining.......so as marham i want your comments😉
so
kirtiji....where is your comment.........
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😆😆 Maloom tha nazuk kamar bal kha hi jaayegi...aur karo garba...😆😆
bechaare 'diwali stuff' ko kyon dosh deti ho...😆😆

'marham' katore mein bhar ke bhej diya hai, desi lep hai...rani maiyya se banana seekha hai...laga lena, aaram aa jaayega...vaise koi guarantee nahin hai, dard badh jaaye to to samajh lena ... 'dard badh jaaye to dava hota hai'....Miyaan Ghalib ne yahi kaha hai shayad....😆😆

Go back i have updated my post. 😃

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Edited by jibi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jibi



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Very beautiful and emotional part indeed.
Every new episode is better than the earlier. What's the secret? Emotional turmoil in you?

It was really a very very touchy part. Exactly what we feel at times. It is said there is no 'dhramkshetra' or 'kurukshetra' outside you. Its infact inside you. Your own sense of right and wrong make a battle ground inside you and your right has to win over your wrong. Thats the victory in true sense. Rudra's mental condition is echoing the same thing. I am happy that he has taken the right decision. He did not allow his false-ego to overshadow the truth.

Rudra's introspection, quite natural and very emotional. The punishment CR will get by Rudra's this deed will be the best. Some 2-3 episodes back i was thinking what if all the truth revealed to RS or to others. RS will certainly punish CR. But that punishment will be useless for her. It it happens it will make CR worse. The real punishment will be where she suffers by her own deeds. Then only she may realise that she is not gaining anything and she herself is the cause of her own defeat. Jab beta uski lagaayi aag mein jalega tab pata chalega ki dard kya hota hai. Abhi tak to voh dusron ko hi dard deti aaye hai.

Duryodha aur Bharat comparison was very apt. Certainly Rudra is going to gain very high esteem. And this is because he listened to his consciousness and respected his self-esteem.

Its very relieving that Rudra CR ki mrig-maarichika ko pahchaan raha hai, aur chhalaavon ke changul mein aate-aate rah gaya.

Thanks Beena for the lovely update. 😊

secret of my emotional story part......hmmm may be i have seen too much pain........not in my life but people around me........i have seen many different kind of people in my life and i always love listening to people while they talk and i always try to understand what does they mean if somebody is saying something....
and have seen different kind of situation taking part in many people's life including my life is complete 180 ' change......i think that's the benifite of huge family........where everyone's life is one story........😳
very well said by you kirti...........
i truely agree duryodhan, yudhisthir, ram sab humaare andar hote hain.....jiski avaj hum jor se sunte hain bus waise hi hum bante hain......many times something has to provoke our inner voice.......
i really wanted some emotional jatkaa to provoke true emotions in rudra and that's why i used this entire situation..........because as always i have said about rudra that he is not bad but he has been mislead by his mom...........the day he will realise that he is on wrong path he will definitely try to change his path......that's what i am trying to do..................and like me tamanna also has same trust for rudra........
yup about CR's punishment i also felt it is right thing to do let her suffer by his own and let her see her own love onse suffering...........
about duryodhan and bharat story...............i really love to write this thing........
many times my husband used to argue with me and some times my kids also ask me ot of curiosity and many people out of ego argue that what is the profe of exixtence of rama, krishna, pandvaas and kauravas...........i tell them i dont have any proofs..........but many of their story though contradicting but if we obsorbe positive things from those story and try to live our life according to that what is harm in that?
and if we see many of our mytho story few things seems unreal ........like that day one lady was saying that all pandvas and karn bor with chanting of soem mantras.....how could it be possible............yup it is not possible.........but i see that thing as modern age's test tube baby...........there are planty examples that force us to connect those mythos some magical things with modern era's some discovery..........any way.....sorry for going on off topic but same thing i am trying to bring out through all those mytho stories.........
and same way you also gave very apt example about mrig marichika........in new world and generation we all are allure by this mrig marichika in some way or other way and in end get trapped by it..........imaginary and fictional world.........beweeching.....things..........
thanks kirti for wonderful comments................
and najuk kamar ....garbaa karke ......haila tumne kaise jana 😆😆😉
kisi ko kahena nahi..........warnaa aur jyaadaa divaali kaa kaam karnaa padegaa😆😆😆
marham to ekdam kaam kargayaa yaar............chalo kaam par lag jaao beena ab😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jibi

[quote=binasingapury]...and payal hubby gave divali and birthday gift like two in one.....kyaa baat hain.......ab tum bhi dinner and lunch two in one main dedo.....😉😉😉........[/quote]

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😆😆 Maloom tha nazuk kamar bal kha hi jaayegi...aur karo garba...😆😆
bechaare 'diwali stuff' ko kyon dosh deti ho...😆😆


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Nahi yaar Birthday ke sath Anniversary ki baat kar rahi hu..next day is my anniversary..
Diwali ki door ki baat hai..😆
Beena and kirti diwali ke liye kya banaya hai..acchi acchi dish khane ke liye me India aa jav..
Beena when are U leaving for India...tab tak do-thin part post kar ke jana...
Garba ne teri kamar Fafda kar diya..mere pair Gathia ho gaya...😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh payal like my situation..........birthday and wedding anniversary in same month...........i think time to serve hubby breakfast, lunch and dinner in one go.............hahhahahah
yaar pura badan papadi ganthia, fafda chakri ho gaya hain.......i have been on medication since last two weeks .....just now i met my doctor and asked him to cure me fast...enough is enough........i have to sing and toruture people but thraot has infaction ...........dont know how i will torture my audiance
and you have to com eto singapore to eat those stuff and to meet kirti you haev to go to india...........
ok girls by tomorrow i will post my new part sorry for dealy but as i said the reason...........and after that i will be busy with divali celebration so bear with me
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Posted: 15 years ago

ya i want to go india..but i don't know when i am going..

my mom leaving in Nov..When i am going to India, i stop by Singapure..you have to take me in the city..
Tum ready ho torture karne ke liye..lekin all Diwali item make again Gale ki kharari kar dega..Kuch leti ho..
i am waiting for next part..
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This was just so beautiful Beena.....Sorry I am really late in my comments but I wanted to read it again to take in the depth of Rudra's confusion. I cud visualise all the turmoil Rudra was going thro' and I really love you for showing this side of Rudra who is actually analyzing things .....looking within himself and trying to fight his inner turmoil and who is trying to undo the damage his mother had done all these years.........

This introspection that Rudra is doing is simply superb....not everyone does it and Rudra doing it is even more commendable....his decision to confess to RS, talk to RB, prevent CR from doing more damage but at the same time support her is simply amazing!
Your story has a lot of depth and you are superb in depicting inner feelings of all the characters.....as a reader it gives me so much satisfaction to know each character's feelings, turmoil, confusion, predicament etc....the reference to Mahabharat where Rudra thinks he can be Bharat is so soothing to read............
I love this Rudra who is finally starting to think independently, trying to move out of mother's influence and wants to do things that he thinks are "right" and also wants to undo some of the damage already done n make peace....
Looking forward to your next update now.....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Anshu_A

This was just so beautiful Beena.....Sorry I am really late in my comments but I wanted to read it again to take in the depth of Rudra's confusion. I cud visualise all the turmoil Rudra was going thro' and I really love you for showing this side of Rudra who is actually analyzing things .....looking within himself and trying to fight his inner turmoil and who is trying to undo the damage his mother had done all these years.........

This introspection that Rudra is doing is simply superb....not everyone does it and Rudra doing it is even more commendable....his decision to confess to RS, talk to RB, prevent CR from doing more damage but at the same time support her is simply amazing!
Your story has a lot of depth and you are superb in depicting inner feelings of all the characters.....as a reader it gives me so much satisfaction to know each character's feelings, turmoil, confusion, predicament etc....the reference to Mahabharat where Rudra thinks he can be Bharat is so soothing to read............
I love this Rudra who is finally starting to think independently, trying to move out of mother's influence and wants to do things that he thinks are "right" and also wants to undo some of the damage already done n make peace....
Looking forward to your next update now.....

thanks anshu for such a lovely comments.......and i am happy you are contented reading all characters.......and welcome to the fan club of my rudra......😳
i know dear we all are busy with life but i am really grateful you are taking out time to encourage we all writers........that's really commandable.........take your time i will always wait for your lovely comments........
once again thanks😳
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Part 92

It was bright sunny morning, RS was getting ready in his room and suddenly CR woke up from her sleep….slowly she opened her eyes and she looked around to accustom herself with her surrounding atmosphere. She felt heaviness and her head was aching. Suddenly her eyes fell on RS who was standing in front large size mirror and getting ready….smile flicker on CR's face but suddenly that smile vanished when last night's memory flooded in her mind and with jerk she sat upon her bed…..and seeing CR through mirror RS came near her and asked about CR's well being.

RS was worried seeing line of distress on CR's face. CR realised that she has to control her emotions and apni didi ke liye chintit hone kaa mukhota pahen na padegaa…

CR: maaf kijiyegaa RS hum kuchh jyaadaa hi so gaye…..

RS: koi baat nahi CR……aap theek to hain naa…..aapke chahere se lagtaa hain aap der tak soyi nahi……didi ki chintaa main lagtaa hain aap ko theek se nind bhi nahi aayi

CR: hum theek hain RS….lekin didi kaisi hain? Ab theek to hain naa?

RS: ji haa who bilkul thik hain aur app aise apni didi ki chintaa main apnaa khyaal anhi rakhengi to aap bimaar ho jaayengi…..

Suddenly, CR felt that RS was ready to go somewhere and she could not hide her curiosity.

CR: RS aap kahi jaa rahe hain? Aap bahut jaldi taiyaar ho gaye hain?????

RS: ji nahi hum kahi nahi jaa rahe hain lekin who doctor aa rahe hain BR ko dekhne ke liye eesi liye hum taiyaar hoke BR ke kamare main jaa rahe hain…thodi der bethenge BR ke saath to oonhe bhi achha lagegaa

Her irritation was growing but she maintained her countenance.

CR: RS hum bhi aap ke saath chalte hain . hum jaldi se taiyaar ho jaate hain aap rukenge humaare liye phir hum saath hi jaate hain..didi ke paas…..

RS shook his head in affirmative though he wanted to reach BR's room as soon as possible but he did not want to hurt CR too.

Yudi was coming out from his room and was going towards Br's room. There was a spring in his step and broad smile was flickering on his face.

Nikki called yudi's name and yudi stopped on his way to look in the direction of nikki's voice.

Yudi: nikki aap ne hume bulaayaa?

Going towards her

Nikki: ji bhaiya hum aap ko hi mil ne aa rahe the……

Yudi: kahi ye kuchchh jaruri kaam thaa?

Nikki was searching her brother's face to understand his mental state. However, she felt that her brother was in very light mood and his contentment was clearly visible on his face. Seeing his brother's calm and composed posture nikki felt heavy burden has been removed from her troubled heart.

Nikki: who bhaiya hum….(she hesitated)

Yudi: kahiye kyaa baat hain

Nikki finally asked : bhaiya aap ki rani se baat huyi?

Yudi with broad grin: ji nikki aur chinta karne ki koi baat nahi hain sab thik hain……….

Nikki still in dilemma: bhaiya aap sach kah rahe hain naa ki kahi humara dil rakhne ke liye to nahi kah rahe hain?

Yudi affectionately patted nikki's head: nikki hum sach kah rahe hain….aur aap bhi khamkhaa ye udvigna hona bandh kijiye aur bas muskurayiye…..rani bahot hi samajdaar hain aap hi kaheti hain naa? Aur who to humare kahe bina sab samaj gayi……..chaliye ab hum maa ko bhi ye khush kabari de dete hain warnaa oonko bhi chintaa ho rahi hogi…..chaliye ab ki bas yahi khade rahenaa hain…………..

Both laughed and felt overjoyed…….and desperate to share this happy news with their mom.

On their way to BR's room yudi told nikki that he was now concerned for their upcoming exams. Because they have hardly one month left and nikki can study in her room but rani was engaged with palace's work and she has to attend BR too and in this busy routine how will rani find time to study? Yudi felt that he had to come up with some arrangement and according to that arrangement rani has been appointed only to look after BR. in that way rani can stay in BR's room and she does not have to run around for palace's chores and in BR's room while BR is resting rani can do her study. However, that arrangement was risky though but had potential that rani could at least study enough to pass this prelim exams…..that was essential to sit for finals……nikki comforted yudi saying that they will do something and she was sure that they will find the solution of this problem also and the way god has always helped them in their time of need HE will definitely solve this difficulty also.

They entered BR's room. BR was sitting on her bed feeling very fresh and healthy. She beamed seeing her children entering her room. she was pleased seeing them blissfully laughing on something.

Yudi: pranaam maa

Nikki: pranaam maa

BR lovingly glanced at them and gave them blessing with shaking her head.

Yudi as usual sat near her mom on her bed and nikki stood near BR's feet.

Yudi informed her mom about rani and her maturity towards entire situation and with that he updated his mom what had happened on that night. he was bit conscious while sharing those information with his mom but taking care of respect towards her mom he shared information those were necessary.

He could see that his mom was proud of him and he took his mom's hand in his strong square hand.

Yudi: maa hum kal puchh hi nahi paaye ki aap humaare aur rani ke rishte se khush to hain naa?

BR nodded her head in affirmative

Yudi: maa hum kuchchh galat to nahi kar rahe hain naa………?

BR shook her head indicating that yudi was not doing anything wrong.

Yudi: aap humaare saath hain naa?

The same moment RS and CR entered room.

And yudi was startled hearing RS's voice asking

RS: kis baat main BR aap ke saath hain……

Yudi faltered : ji who….woh kuchchh khaas nahi bas aise hi

Yudi stood up and pulled chair near bed and offer his dad to sit near BR. He stood next to BR.

RS: are kuchchh khaas nahi hain?…hume lagaa koi bahut jaroori baat main aapkaa saath dene ke liye aap Br ko pataa rahe ho….kahi koi maa bte ki gupt baat to nahi hain naa?

Yudi's voice quavered and he gave hasty glance to his mom: nahi pitaaji aisa kyaa ho saktaa hain……

RS: kahi aisa na ho maa bte mil kar hume koi bahut badaa surprise dene waale ho……..are kunvar aap to kham khaa dar gaye hum to majaak kar rahe the…

After saying that RS laughed heartily. Seeing her dad in light mood yudi was pleasantly surprised but he liked his dad in relax and happy mood.

CR was irritated witnessing everyone in pleasant mood. She was sulking on her place. She was getting restless to find way to give this people some tears. And looking was that golden chance.

Same moment bhanu entered room followed by doctor.

Doctor paid his respect to royals and attended BR. Doctor seemed happy sensing BR's progress. Once doctor finished BR's check up, anxious RS asked about BR's health.

Doctor: RS chinta ki koi vajah nahi hain…….balki aapke liye khushi kaa samachaar hain……ki Br ab jaldi se theek ho sakti hain…..

RS was overjoyed hearing those words because since so many years he was yearning to hear those words.

RS: aap sach kah rahe hain……Cr suniye doctor kyaa kah rahe hain aap ki didi thik ho sakti hain…….BR aap thik ho sakti hain

CR faked happiness hearing that news and BR was delighted.

Doctor: RS eetne saalo main BR ki tandurasti main koi badlaav nahi aayaa thaa lekin kal oonkaa apne haath ko sirf hilana hi nahi lekin haath ko utha kar kunvarji ke haath ko pakadnaa koi chhoti ghatanaa nahi hain……..aur ye baat eesi aur nirdesh kartaa hain ki BR ki tabiyet sudhar rahi hain……

RS: doctor hum ye baat sun kar ati prasanna huve kahiye hume aur kyaa karnaa hogaa hum who sara intzaam karvaa dete hain BR ki dekhbhal main koi kami naa rahi hain naa rahegi

Doctor: RS hum aapki bhavnaa ko samaj sakte hain lekin jo baat humari samaj main nahi aa rahi hain who yah hain ki …..jab se BR kaa ilaaj shuru huvaa hain oonki davaayiyaa wageraah to wahi hain oos main humne koi badlaav nahi kiya to achaanak oonki tabiyet main badlaav kaise aayaa?

RS: matlab

Like RS everyone present there were anxious to hear what doctor has to say. CR was curious to know that reason because that particular reason she can destroy that can improve BR's health…the way she has been doing so far. However, CR was confused how could BR can improve when those deadly medicines were going in her system? Cr had to find out the answer of this puzzle.

Doctor continued: matal ye RS ki agar davaayi ko asar karni hoti to who bahot pahele apnaa asar dikhaanaa shuru kar deti…dhire dhire hi sahi….kuchh to pragati hoti lekin aaj tak aisa nahi huva…lekin aisa kyaa badlaav aayaa hain BR ke ilaaj main…jis se oonki halat sudharne lagi hain aur davaayi bhi asar karne lagi hain……aap BR ko koi aryuvedi davaayi yaa aur kuchh ilaaz to nahi karvaa rahe hain naa????

Suddenly something snapped up in nikki's mind and she could not stop herself.

Nikki: rani………

Everyone gave quizzical glance to nikki. Yudi was also shocked hearing rani's name.

RS: nikki aap kyaa kahenaa chahti hain…….

Nikki : kashmaa kijiye pitaaji hume aise bich main nahi bolnaa chaahiye thaa lekin hume lagaa agar humaari baatmi se maa phir se theek ho sakti hain to hum apne aap ko nahi rok paaye…

RS: nikki.paheliyaa naa bujaayiye kahiye aap jo bhi kahenaa chahti hain

Doctor: ji rajkumariji kahiye ye rani kaun hain aur ooski wajah se BR ko kaise faydaa ho raha hain…..

Yudi was desperate to hear what nikki had to say about rani and CR was also listening intently.

Nikki: doctor sahib rani ko maa ki dekh bhal ke liye abhi kuchchh mahine pahele hi rakha gaya hain aur who maa kaa bahot hi achchha khyaal rakhti hain aur oose aryuved kaa achchha gyaan hain …humara matlab hain who gaanv se hain to jadibutti wageraah kaa achchaa gyaan hain aur who maa ko har roj kuchchh aryuvedi tel se maalish karti hain aur koi lep bhi lagaati hain …shaayaad….

Yudi straiten his back feeling proud for rani…..

Doctor: RS ho saktaa hain shayad ye malish yaa lep bhi kaam kar rahe hain aur BR achchhi ho rahi ho….kyaa hum oos ladki se baat kar sakte hain?

RS: ha haa jaroor kyun nahi……..

Yudi was blushing hearing rani's praise. He could not hide his happiness he gave appreciating glance to nikki.

RS asked bhanu to call rani. bhanu did not like that she has been order to call rani in BR's room and rani was getting all praise. However, bhanu could not disobey RS's order so forcefully she went to inform rani……

Cr who was watching yudi very carefully smirk seeing yudi's happiness and thought that this smile will not last longer on your face just wait and watch what I can do to steal your happiness.

Doctor: kya ye ladki jo aapne rakhi hain who koi nurse hain ya….

CR could not let go this opportunity to give yudi stung.

CR: nahi doctor sahib ye koi nurse nahi hain……bas gaanv ki ek anpadh ganvaar ladki hain….jisko humne taras khaake yaha mahal main kaam karne ke liye rakha hain……hume lagaa who didi ki dekh bhal bhi karengi aur mahal ke kaam main haat bhi bataayengi……..

While speaking those words CR looked at yudi from corner of her eyes. Yudi was disheartened when Cr told those things about rani. He did not like somebody disparaging rani in front of all. Rani was his pride and he did not like that his pride could be insulted in front of him but he gulp that insult forcefully sensing seriousness of the situation and this was not right time to defend rani because right now his focus was to create situation that can give rani enough time to study. He felt that when rani will officially become his wife that time everyone's mouth will shut without being told anything. With great effort he tried to hide his dejection. However, nikki could understand his brother's predicament but she was contented that his brother did not show any rash behaviour.

BR was also concern for yudi but she was proud that yudi was learning to control his emotions, because many times person has to swallow their pain and disappointment and have to smile to salvage situation.

Doctor with disappointing tone: oh to who ek anpadh ladki hain…….

Every time that word has been pronounced it was giving painful stinging sensation to yudi.

Doctor continued: RS…..hum maante hain who ladki Br ki achchhe se dekh bhal karti hogi lekin ek doctor hone ke naate ye mera sujaav hain ki Br ki dekh bhal ke liye hume kisi aisi vyakti ko rakhnaa chaahiye jise prathmik padhnaa likhnaa aataa ho… khaash karke English kaa prathmik gyaan ho jo davaayi kaa naam vagraah padh shake…..taaki Br ke case main kabhi bhi emergency situation ho sakti hain …..aur tab agar oos wyakti ko padh naa likhnaa naa aataa ho to mushkil ho sakti hain…..aur ees ladki ko mahal ke kaam ke liye rakha gaya hain aur Br ki dekh bhaal sompi gayi hain…..lekin hume aisi kisi vyakti ko rakhnaa chaahiye jo sirf Br ki dekhbhal kare aur saaraa waqt BR ke paas rahe jis se Br ki tabiyet main sudhar ho saktaa hain…….

Yudi felt that it was golden opportunity if only he let everyone knows that rani is not uneducated but if he will inform everyone about it then many questions will arise like how he knew about it and ETC ETC….however he felt he could not keep quiet in this moment …..his expression was saying that he was getting on some decision.

Nikki also felt that any moment yudi will blurt out something about rani and Br also felt same way. BR was conscious frantically she looked at nikki and with her eyes she sign her to speak something before yudi react……yudi was still in dilemma what he should do ….but he thought he has ability to save the situation and take care of all the questions.

However, before he speaks nikki interrupted……

Nikki: kashma kijiye hume pitaaji lekin aapki agya ho to hum kuchchh kahenaa chahte hain ees baare main……

RS: kahiye…kyaa kahenaa hain…..

Nikki: pitaaji…. …rani ko jaroor mahel ke kaam kaaj ke liye rakha gaya hain lekin who oos kaam se bhi samay nikaal kar maa ki badi achchhi tarah se dekh bhal karti hain…..woh jis apne pan aur lagaav se maa ki seva karti hain hume nahi lagtaa aur koi kar saktaa hain……aap dekhiye oose aaye kuchchh hi mahine huve hain aur jo kaam baaki ki pichchhli nurse naa kar paayi who ooski seva ne kar dikhaaya…….

Doctor: ye baat se hum sahmat hain kunvariji lekin aap baat ki gambhirtaa ko samaj sakti hain…..agar who ladki padhi likhi hoti to jyaadaa achchha hota….

Nikki was hesitant that whether she should tell everyone about rani'r literacy she gave her mom questioning glance and looked at yudi from corner of her eyes. Yudi was looking at nikki with expectation. And BR also indicate nikki to go ahead….

RS felt that nikki wanted to say something and Cr felt that nikki knew something that is necessary for her to know……curiously Cr was waiting for nikki to speak and she felt that somehow nikki wanted to appoint rani as BR's caretaker. So in short Cr understood there was something that has been cooked behind her back and it was important for her to know and plan her next game according to that.

RS: nikki bejijak kahiye aap ko jo kahenaa hain…..kyunki… hum jaan naa chahte hain aur aap apni maa ke saath jyaada samay vyatit karti hain to jaahir hain aapko jyaadaa pataa hoga eesi liye jo bhi kahenaa hain vistaar se kahiye….BR ke thik hone ke liye jo bhi avshyak hoga hum karenge……

Nikki understanding the demand of situation : pitaaji…rani unpadh nahi hain….woh padhi likhi hain…..

CR's eyes widen, she was surprise hearing that piece of information: kyaa???..

CR's cunning mind started working she felt she must use this golden opportunity and must know more.

CR: nikki aapko kaise maalum ki rani padhi likhi hain.kahi aap aise hi rani ko BR ki sevikaa banaa ne ke liye hi ye baat kah rahi hain…….hum jaante hain aap kitni bhaavuk hain….lekin ye bhavnaa o main bahenaa kaa samay nahi hain….

Somehow CR understood that yudi and nikki wanted to appoint rani full time for BR………she could understand that yudi does not like watching her beloved working as maid but something was telling her that…..more than that some other reason was there too and she has to find out that reason.

Nikki: nahi Cr…..hum bhavnaa o main nahi bah rahe hain …..rani sach main padhi likhi hain…..aur ye baat hume…( nikki remembered yudi shared the incident happened between yura while BR's medicine bottle was broken and rani read medicine's name from BR's medical file. Nikki though she should share this incident changing content so doctor and RS will also realise that rani is educated and responsible too. They will realise that when time of emergency arise rani knows what to do.)

RS: kahiye nikki…….

Yudi was also starring nikki anxiously that what story nikki will craft but he had great trust in his sister that whatever it will be but she will try her level best to support him and rani.

Nikki: ji who baat ye hain ki pichhle mahine jab aap aur chhoti maa do din ke liye bahar gaye the oos waqt kuchchh karte huve maa ki davaayi ki bottle tut gayi…..aur who davaayi bahut hi jaroori hain maa ke liye…..

nikki took bottle from side table and showed to everyone which medicine she was talking about.

Nikki: ye davaayi …..

Doctor: ji haa ye davaayi Br ko har roj subhaa sham denaa bahut hi avshyak hain…..eeskaa ek bhi dose chuknaa nahi chaahiye……to phir kyaa huva ye bottle tut gayi eeske baad….

Nikki: hum wahi the maa ke kamare main ( nikki ask forgiveness for telling lie) hum dar gaye ki ab kyaa hoga…kyunki chhoti maa nahi thee aur rani ne bataayaa ki chhoti maa davaayi kaa bandobast karti hain…..aur maa ki davaayi kaa naam bhi hume maaloom nahi thaa tab………rani ne humaaraa honshlaa bandhayaa who almaari main se maa ki file nikaal kar layi aur hume naam padh kar diyaa ki ye davaayi hain….oos waqt hum bhi dang ho gaye ki rani ko padhnaa aataa hain……aur agar rani ko padhne nahi aataa to jarur oos waqt mushkil ho jaati……who to rani ki samay suchktaa thee…..ki oos waqt jo prashnaa khaddaa huva ooskaa rani ne hal nikalaa . rani ne hume who prescription diya aur kaha hum kisi se ye davaayi mangwaa le aur humne bhaiya se who davayi mangvaayi……..

Nikki looked at yudi for support…..and yudi was overwhelmed the way nikki has praised rani and had brought rani's true quality in front of all. Yudi had no words to thank nikki…he gave nikki praising glance and thanked her silently…

Yudi: ji ye baat hume yaad hain ki hum ne who davaayi kaa bandobast kiyaa thaa……….

Incredulously, Cr heard that. Now picture was getting very clear for her. Since yesterday she was trying to figure out how did BR improved even though she has been given the medicine that can make Br's limbs weak. Cr was mixing that medicine in this medicine and that was the reason after many years Br had not improved. CR was fuming, she thought she brought rani to palace to create calamity in everyone's life and specially yudi's life but because of this girl things were actually improving. However, she controlled her raging emotions because she felt it was not too late and actually god was in her favour and because of that she came to know about this truth. Now she can change everything in her favour. However, first of all she has to know why yudi and nikki want to appoint rani as BR's main caretaker and what is their motive behind it and next plan she will play according to it till than she has to keep eyes on all their activities.

The same moment rani entered BR's room followed by bhanu. She paid her respect to RS and BR and CR. She was clueless why she had been summoned there. she could sense that each and every eyes were stuck on her and that feeling were making her restless. Rani's legs were shaking and carefully she was taking her steps, she was down casted and that was the reason she could not understand what kind of look everyone present in this room were giving her. at least she would have seen into yudi's eyes she would have understand that there was nothing to panic. Each and every person present there was giving different glances to rani. yudi was glancing rani lovingly, nikki with delight, CR was staring her querulously, BR was glancing rani affectionately and doctor had curious look only RS was the only one whose countenance was fixed without any emotions. ……

Doctor broke the silence: are ye to wahi ladki hain naa jisne Br ki jaan bachaayi thee saamp se? aur khud zakhmi ho gayi thee…….

RS: ji haa ye wahi ladki hain…..

Doctor: rani yahi naam hain naa tumhara?

Rani with very low tone: ji

Doctor: tum badi bahadoor ladki ho….

Yudi was ardently looking at rani. his eyes were transfixed on rani.

Rani did not utter anything, she felt dryness in her throat.

Doctor: RS agar aap ki agyaa ho to BR ke doctor hone ke naate hum ees ladki se kuchchh savaal puchchhnaa chahte hain aur eesi ke baad hi hum kuchchh sujaav de sakte hain….

RS: ji doctor aap eense jo chahe who puchh sakte hain…..

Rani was as nervous as mouse and her heart was racing at speed of light.

Doctor: rajkumari nikki kah rahi thee tumhe aryuved kaa gyaan hain…..

Rani was confused she gave hasty glance to nikki to find some support and then looked at doctor in confusion…..

Sensing her confusion doctor continue,

Doctor: humara kahenaa kaa matlab hain tum Br ko kuchchh aryuvedik tel aur lep se maalish karti ho? Kaha se shikha tumne

Rani with trembling voice: who humaare ganv ke vaid ji se…….

Doctor: tumne bakaaydaa taalim li thee?

Rani with very faint voice because she was petrified thinking that something might have went wrong or what : ji nahi…..woh to bas hume shokh hain eesi wajah se jab bhi hume samay miltaa thaa hum vaidji ko madad karne chale jaate the……unkaa haath batate aur who badle main hume kuchchh prathmik tel aur lep ke baare main bataate……

Doctor: rajkumari ji ne yeh bhi batayaa ki tum padhi likhi ho?

Rani shivered with fear and her face was as white as blank white paper….yudi could understand rani's state of mind but he could not help her but secretly he desired that at least once rani look at him and she will understand that there was nothing to worry about. His heart sank seeing rani in miserable state.

However, he did not have any other way then wait patiently.

Rani: ji….

Doctor: kyaa tum jimmedaari se BR ki dekhbhal kar sakti ho….humaaraa matlab hain BR ki dekhbhaal main bahut hi saavdhani barat ne ki jarurat hain kyaa tum who jimmedari nibhaa sakti ho?

Rani controlling her nervousness with determination: ji….hum ji jaan lagaa denge…lekin BR ki seva main koi kami nahi rakhenge…aur aaj tak humne humse ho saka who sab kiyaa hain……..asha hain humse koi galti nahi huyi hogi…….

Rani understood that she might be given huge responsibility and to prove herself and to give yudi happiness she can do anything. She knew that if BR will improve yudi will be the happiest person on earth because many times she had felt that yudi has longed to see her mother fully recover.

Doctor: nahi tumse koi galti nahi huyi hain……lekin ees kuchh mahine main tumne who kar dikhaya hain jo eetne saalo main hum main se koi nahi kar saka…hume lagtaa hain ki shaayaad tumhaare lagaaye lep aur tel ki wajah se yaa tumhaare apne pan se ki gayi BR ki seva ki wajah se BR ki tabiyet sudhar rahi hain…….agar tumhe apne aap par aur apni kartvyadakshtaa par purn rup se vishvaash ho to hum tumhe ek maukaa dena chahte hain….BR ki sevika ke rup main niyukt karke……….kyaa tumhe ye baat svikaaryaa hain…..

Rani: aap ne hume ees laayak samjaa ye humaari khush nasibi hain….agar humaari seva se BR theek ho jaati hain to oose hum apne jivan kaa dhanya pal samjenge…..aur BR ki seva main koi kami nahi rakhenge….aapne hum par jo vishvaas dikhaya hain hum koshish karenge ki hum oos vishvaas ki poorti kare…….aur aap ko shikaayat kaa koi maukaa na de……

Doctor was satisfied hearing rani's determination and witnessing her self-confidence. Yudi was blushing with pride and delight. And nikki was elated sensing the way situation was taking turn in their favour.

Doctor turning towards RS announced his decision: RS ….sab kuchchh ees ladki ke baare main jaan kar aur eeski samaysuchktaa ko dekh kar jo oosne BR ki jaan bachaa ne main dikhayi hain….hume lagtaa hain rani ko BR ki seva ki jimmedaari deni chaahiye…….hume ye nirnay yogyaa lagtaa hain….mauka dene main koi harj nahi hain shayad……eeski seva apnepan and samrpan ki wajah se davaayi bhi apnaa kaam dikhaanaa shuru karde…..ye humaaraa sujaav hain ek doctor hone ke naate baaki akhir feslaa aapkaa hain…..

Yudi was starring at RS expectedly. CR was exasperated but she was trying to keep herself cool. RS looked at BR indicating he was asking her opinion and BR shook her head in affirmation.

RS: Cr aap ko kyaa lagtaa hain….kyaa karnaa chaahiye…..

CR though wanted to refuse this proposal but she felt that if rani will be appointed as BR's caretaker and if something will happen to BR all blame will shift on rani and definitely yudi will not believe that Rani could harm his mom and that can lead to tussle between son and father. Cr was thrilled thinking that new plan.

CR: RS hume lagtaa hain doctor sahib theek kah rahe hain…..waise bhi rani badi nek dil aur sevabhavi ladki hain…..hume yakin hain who didi ki seva main koi kami nahi rakhegi…..agar rani ke jariye hi sahi humari didi thik hoti hain to humaare liye ees se jyaadaa khushi ki koi baat nahi hain…phir aap jaisa thik samje…….

BR was stupefied hearing CR's suggestion. Br was dreading that Cr will try to create some hurdle in this decision because she does not want her to recover and Cr has brought rani for other purpose. BR felt that there was something amiss.

RS: theek hain doctor hume koi aitraz nahi hain……aap BR ke liye jo sabse adhik faydekaarak ho…..wahi kijiye…..rani ko aaj se abhi se BR ki seva main niyukt kar dete hain……

Yudi was jubilant hearing that unexpected news, nikki was also ecstatic hearing that. That was the arrangement his brother was looking for and he was talking about it while coming to this room. it was pleasant surprise that their wish has been granted without doing anything.

BR was contented sensing her son's happiness.

Doctor: lekin….ek aur baat hain…..

RS: kyaa?

Yudi was desperate to hear what else doctor has to say.

Doctor: rani ko BR ki seva main niyukt karne main koi harj nahi hain lekin…..

Yudi was praying that now no more hurdles should come on their way when everything seems happening in their favour.

RS: lekin kyaa doctor aap jo bhi hain who kahiye……hum sab suvidha uplabdh karvaa denge…

Doctor: hum chahte hain ki agar rani ko Br ke seva main niyukt kiyaa jaye to oonhe mahal ke kaamo se chhuti de di jaaye …humaaraa matlab hian rani kaa pura samy Br ki seva ke liye uplabdh kiyaa jaaye taaki who achchhe se Br ki seva kar paaye aur koi samsyaa na khadi ho …..ees waqt BR ko pura dhyaan dena bahut jaruri hain…….

Yudi, nikki and Br heaved a sigh of relief hearing doctor's words. Yudi muttered a prayer of thanks to god for helping them. Broad smile flicker on his face. Crease of worry has been disappeared from rani's face too. She took deep breath and let it out. Tension in her muscles has been relaxed.

RS immediately ordered bhanu regarding rani's appointment only to look after BR and Rani should not be given any palace's chores and if any mishap will happen in this matter RS himself will punish the culprit. Bhanu was fuming from within but she took order from RS controlling her anger. Bhanu was boiling because she felt insulted in front of rani. Bhanu felt rani has been given very important job and now bhanu has lost chance to harass rani. However, bhanu was not such person who keep cool she was like snake the moment she will get chance she will sting.

After doctor left the room everyone disperse from the BR's room and Cr order rani to meet her in her room after breakfast because Cr wanted to give some special instruction regarding BR's medication and all. Delighted and satisfied, yudi and Nikki also left BR's room.

On their way to breakfast table yudi thanked Nikki for helping him. He told Nikki that if nikki would not have inform everyone about rani's qualities and attentive nature this arrangements would not have taken place.

RS was gratified seeing BR's pleasure and satisfaction.

After breakfast, when rani went to meet Cr in her room, CR inquired about the medicine that rani ordered when Cr was not around. Cr rebuked rani for not informing Cr about that, but rani told Cr that kunvarji and nikki was aware of that matter so she did not realised that rani should inform about it to CR. Cr did not create much fuss because that could be dangerous and arouse suspicion. However, CR inform rani that in future anything like this happen CR should be informed immediately, all small matter should be shared with CR regarding BR and BR's health because CR will not tolerate any mistake or carelessness regarding BR's wellbeing. CR further asked rani how much medicine has been left in that other bottle and when rani informed Cr that not much only to last couple of day, Cr gave rani new bottle and ordered her to use that medicine once that other bottle emptied. Rani took that bottle and bowing Cr left that room.

It was around lunch time and rudra woke up because of bright sunrays were filtering through windows and disturbing his eyes…….he woke up suddenly and rubbed his eyes to accustomed himself with day light.

The moment he was fully woken up reality struck him like hammer. Gloomy and lost he sat near his bed's corner. He was completely lost what he should do next. He realised that it was almost lunch time and he was surprised that his mom did not even send any maid to look after him and did not worry that he did not appear for breakfast. Khud pe oose hasi aa gayi…….kyun koi meri chinta karne lagaa? Kyaa wajood hain mera aur kaun saa aisa jaruri kaam hain jo mere bina ruka padaa hain……..mere hone na hone se koi aasmaan nahi ghire jaa raha hain…….main ek aisa andheraa hoo jiske hone kaa ahesaas tab tak nahi hota jab tak roshni ki ek bhi kiran uplabdh naa ho……..roshni ki ek hi kiran kaafi hoti hain chir andhere ko kaat ne ke liye……main to kachchi mitti kaa who ghada (pot) hoo jo kisi kaam kaa nahi………..lekin…lekin ,,,,agar muje aag main jalaya jaaye to main kisi ke kaam aa saktaa hoo…….(avaj oothi ooske jahan se aur sahasaa who ooth khada ho gaya apne bistar se……. ) haa aag main jalayaa jaaye to ye nikkamma ghada(pot) kuchchh to kabil ho saktaa hain…..

Rudra was lost in deep thoughts. he was pacing up and down in his room. he was trying to come on some decision. His face had determination look. Slowly and steadily he was coming on some firm resolution.

Ees gade ko kabil banaa ne ke liye kahi se to shuruaat karni padegi…..kyaa huva agar main andheraa hoo to…..roshni ko pahechan to main deta hoo….main roshni kaa saayaa hoo…jaha jaha roshni rahegi main waha waha rahoongaa…….andhere ko apne main sama kar roshni ko aur tejpunj doongaa….

Thinking something he went to his bathroom to freshen up.

It was almost evening; tamannaa's phone was ringing nonstop. Tamanna came rushing to her room and looked for her phone. She frantically searching for her mobile phone that she kept somewhere. And phone was about to cut off and tamanna found it under her quilt. She grabbed phone immediately and she was surprised seeing name flashing on screen……..

PS:

contest for the diwali bumper prize 😉😉 😆😆😆

Q:kiska number tamanna ke mobile par flash kar raha thaa??????????

jitne waale ko mile gaa shandaar inaam............ab inaam kyaa hain woh bhi surprise hain😆

next part will take time to post because of divali celebration ...........and back to back parties and during parites you know i have habit to get drunk 😲😲😲.....so untill i get sober i cannot write......so wait petiently and enjoy all old epi till than to memories 🥱

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Posted: 15 years ago
Yeh bumper prize to mujhe hi milega.....😆
Rudra ka resolution bata raha hai ki Tamanna ke mobile par uska hi naam flash ho raha hai...😉

So, you are not inviting us in diwali prties? Akele-akele hi mazaa lena hai...😆...humein bhi thoda bahut chakh lene do...desi tharra...😆😆😆

Part achchha laga..curious to know what happens next. Hope Rudra will change the medicine again without letting it known to CR.



Edited by jibi - 15 years ago

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