love & revenge~part-6 on page-15 - Page 11

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

praty huni....this is mind blowing

i loved the swmileys u used .....the whole thing is an fabulous item bomb

this is sooooo fantastic

i jus prc's anger and our arjun........kitna sona hai...mera arjun

i hope that girl is sanyo

praty please continue

this is so great and siiiiiiiiccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkk

thanx shonu............lov ur comments jaan...

Originally posted by: iqrasweet

wow...........dear

thanx sweetheart

hey frenz...m really sorry.😭😭.mere pc me thodi probs ho gye h..its really slow..i m nt able 2 post d ud..

i ll post d nxt part 2morrow or day after 2morrow

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

~*part-1*~

 

in d park....some kids are playing''😃😃'.
Shreya-reema..pass d ball'
Reema-ye le'jaldi se goal kar'''.
Avi-common shreya..aj in boys ko dikha dege..ki gals bhi football khel sakti h..n in sabse jeet bhi sakti h..
Shreya-yeppe'
Goal!!!
 
Rohit-aww'''.😡😡😡😡.huhh..kya guyz'aj tum sabko kya ho gya h'ache se khelo..hum ladkiyo se haar nhi sakte'
Chetan-kya kre yaar..aj khel me maza nhi arha'
Shreya-hahah.😃😃.haar gye to bahane marr rhe ho..jst accept it..ki ladkiya bhi football khle sakti h..n tum ladko se jeet bhi sakti h'
 
Rohit-huhh..
Rehne do..
Aj prithvi nhi h..tabhi tum sab itna chilla rhe ho'
Ajay-par aj prithvi khel kyu nhi raha'
Itna chupchap kyu betha h

 

 

.Rohit-pata nhi..ise kya ho gya h'
Huh.,..
Chalo'ab ghar chalte  h'
Prithvi..prithvi'.
Chalo ghar chale'
Prithvii..
Ajay-rehne de..vo nhi ayga..chod..chal hum chalte h'
 
In d park'''at one side'prithvi was sitting.lost in his thoughts''''''
Prithvi-uff'
Kya hua hoga'
Sab theek to hoga naa'
5 bje kaha tha aane k liye😭😭'7 baj gye'
Billo kyu nhi ayi''''
Uske ghar jau..nn..nhi'damini aunty phir billo ko gussa karege..
Kya karu..kaisa pata karu ki vo theek h..
'hmm'
Idea!!
 
At singh's house:
 
A lady is standing in front of mirror..admiring her beauty..
Ohh..i m soo beautiful'so gorgeous'😳😳''.agar mere shadi naa hui hoti to aj me miss india hoti'
Par..is sanyogita ki vajah se mere SARE SAPNE MITTI ME MIL GYE'.😡😡😡😡😡😡.
Nhi chodugi is ladki ko'
D lady is sanyogita's tep mom damini singh
 
(sanyogita's real mom and damini were sisters..due 2 sudden death of sanyogita's mom'her father married damini'.tab se hi damini sanyogita se nafrat karti thi'use lagta tha k agar sanyogita nhi hoti to jai use shadi nhi karta..n uske model banne k sapne sach ho jate'vo sanyogita ko bht pareshan karti thi'..usse ghar ka kaam karvati thi')
 
Damini-karamjali..😡kaha marr gye..mera facepack bana ya nhi'''..
In d kitchen..
Sanyogita was cryng & trying 2 make facepack..
Sanyogita-arrey'
Choti ma ne kaha tha ki pehle haldi daalni h'nhi..nhi..pehle dahi''..
Nhi haldi..dahi..uff..me bhul gye ..ab kya karu..choti maa se puchugi to vo muje phir marege'hmm..
Peeche se 1 awaz ayi..
Arey..haldi daal ya dahi daal..kya fark padta h😃😃'
 
Sanyogita-ha..ye baat bhi h..thanx..
Ahh..
k..k..kon''😲😲'kon k khidki pe..
saamne aao'
 
suddenly..
prithvi khidki se upar chadta h..
arre..billo.😃😃.me hu'.
Sanyogita-piku!!!
Tu..tune to muje dara hi diya tha..
Tu aise khidki k peeche kya kar raha h..
Prithvi-me kab se park me tera wait kar raha hu..kyu nhi ayi'
Sanyogita-kya karu piku.😳.choti maa ne bht sara kam de diya tha
Prithvi-tere choti maa ki to😡😡😡
Sanyogita-chup'ab ja.aur muje kaam karne de..choti maa agye to bht maar padege'
Prithvi-acha theek h'par jaldi kaam karke chat pe ana..
Tuje aj bht sari baate batani h'
Sanyogiota-theek h baba..ab tu ja'
Prithvi-theek h..jaldi ana
 
Sanyogita damini k paas jati h..
Sanyogita-choti ma..ye lijiye aapka facepack''''.
Damini-nalaya..kaamchor..😡😡itni der se kya kar reh the kitchen me..
Itni der lagti h kya facepack banana me..
Hah..
Bol..
Hmm..isme dahi itni kam kyu h..
Ab samajhi.😡😡.tu dahi kha reh the na..
Chatakkk!!
She slapped sanyogita..
Sanyogita'cryng'😭😭😭😭maa..maa..mene dahi nhi khayi..sach,'
Damini-jhuti..chal..ja yaha se..raat ke khane ki taiyari kar'
Sanyogita-choti ma..vo terrace se kapde le au..barish ka mausam ho raha h'
Damini-haa ja..jaldi ja..n jaldi ana..samjhi'😡😡😡😡

 

 

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so..this is d first update..

hope u like it!!

vry interesting part i hate damini..she is sooo rude...sanyogita ko kitna scold kar reh h....

hey thanx gunjan............m glad dat u liked d ud...

 

hey frenz..dis is a vry long ud..ab nxt ud me sun ko hi de paugi..

Wow,praty dear, kaya ud hain, mindblowing 👏👏👏👏👏👏.tune mere dil khush kar dia😳😃😆.It's superb update⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.too good jaanu😉😆😃😳😛.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago

Thanks for the update sweetie..gud job...Wow....Sanyo accepted the job....I want PRC running after Sanyo in this...& she not giving him any attention!

thanks so much praty 4 the udd i loved it 😉prithvio running after sanyo and arjun telling  about sanyogita to everyone 😳😳😳i loved it jaldi update karna sweety i will keep visiting 4 all of ur updates😊bye everyone

v. nice yaar keep it up😆😉⭐️👏