I love u too much to lose u(Rajeev-FF)LINK Pg-147 - Page 75

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

HeY Sumi !!!😃 Hi Mana....😃

Very Yummy update !!!

Arey itne saare ice-cream flavours saamne hone ke baad aur kya ho sakta hai...😛 Hehe....ice-creams can nothing but be yummy!!! Pata hai kal hi khaya tha....😆...its actually soooooooooooo yummy!!!

mera mann toh kar raha tha, uske haath se kheench ke ice-cream lu and usse bolu ki u please concentrate on Asmi, I'll take care of all the ice-cream...😆 😆 😆 Hmm.....that was a nice thought....but I dont think neither Ayaan nor Asmi wud be delighted to share their ice-cream wid u....😆😆....aur Asmi pe concentration....hmm...wo main Ayaan ko karne kaha deti hu...😆😆😆

Khair....coming to UD....

It was Fantastic and Hatke !!!👏 Haha....u also felt it to be hatke...like Suhana Dii...😆😆

I loved this date....And I'm more than happy to knw dat...😆....coz I didnt think it was that much romantic....only slight romance u c...😉

I was shocked 😲 to see Ayaan on time !!! 😆 But then he said he wanted to spend more time with her..😛 Bechare ki kismat to dekho....tym pe aya....issipe sab shocked hai...😆....and yes...Asmi k saath zyada waqt usse bitana to chahiye na....though maine jaldi date pack up karke ghar bhej diya....ab kitni der sahu....tum hi batao?😆😆

Both are looking awesome...but ye kya? Yeh Ayaan bhi na ! Ek bhi compliment nahi diya Asmi ko ! 😛 Ab tunhine keh diya na....wo Ayaan hai....thoda hatke to hoga hi...lets c how he makes up fir this later on...😉😉

Aur yeh dono kya bachcho ki tarah ladd rahe hai...Yeh Ayaan khud kitni baatein Suna raha hai, aur uparse saara ka saara Asmi pe daal raha hai! 😆

Today, could see the Arnav back ! 😊 Hmm....aaj Ayaan me Arnav wali baat to thi....and I'm sure....finally aap log iss baat ko lekar thoda khush honge....kyunki mujhe pata hai....tum zyada seriousness sahen nahi kar sakte na....😆😆😆

Was laughing when he said ....

"Par December me kaisa baarish??? Aisa kabhi hota hai kya? Mujhe waha baithna tha'.aur iss baarish ko abhi nahi ana tha'.phir bhi kyun aa gayi ye?? Isse jana hoga'..huh!!"

It was soooooo cute !!! 😊 He's always tooooooo cute 😳....anyways....am glad u like this one....😃😃😃

And the kiss on her forehead....ammmm....very sweet!😊 Awe....am glad u liked that....isse zyada main afford nahi kar paa rahi thi...😆😆😆

Chal....ab jaldi UD karde....😃 Hmm...guess this tym its not tooo late...😉😉

Originally posted by: sania_58

wonderful part Thanks dear...😛

awsome

so Ayaan & Asmi's first date

very nice & cute

& slightly romantic Yup just slightly....I knw dat...😆😳

December to baarish,hmmm hota hai kabhi kabhi,but in 1st week,uske baad thand padhta hai Bengal main Yeah...I knw dat too....isiliye mention kar diya....its fictious....but actually Jan ki 1st week me yaha thodi thodi baarish hui thi....donno how 😕😕....so finally maine apne fiction ko iss fic me daal hi diya...😆😆

aur ice cream, thats cool, har mausom main chalta hai

mera bhi favourite chocolate flavour hai Yeah....its a rocking flavour...and ice-cream surely doesnt need any season...its eternal...😉

so partially Ayaan confessed Yup...partial confession....😳😳...but ya...jald hi full confession ho jayega...😆😆

superb part

too good

u rocked dear

very well written

great going Thanks again dear....😃

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

Hieeeeeeeeeeeeeee..!! 😊😊.. see me soo agyaa karri dat ab se me on time but u getting late..!! 😆Hiiiii Neha.....sach me this ym me is veryyyy late...😆😆...par kpoi baat nahi...at least koi to punctual hai....😆😆 n me ki aisi state dat me u ko punishment bhi ni de sakti for posting late as agar tumne post karna he band kar diya tohhh... 😉 Hehe....thats an intelligent thought Nehu....par u knw wat....iss fic ko post karne meri majburi hai...I cant help it...😆😆....so u can give me as much 'dhamkis' as u want....😉😉...par haan....main itni satyabaadi hu....isiliye I'll hope tum mujhe baksh dogi yaar...😆😆

Now tell me konse points btaun..?? good points or bad points..!!??? 😉 😉 Hmm...so this tym its Master Terrence....😕....very tough to please...😆
Let me start wid gud points : "Ayaan: (still irritated) Par December me kaisa baarish??? Aisa kabhi hota hai kya? Mujhe waha baithna tha'.aur iss baarish ko abhi nahi ana tha'.phir bhi kyun aa gayi ye?? Isse jana hoga'..huh!!: dis was a "WOWW MOMent" 😆 😆 😆 Kya karoon DID ka bhoooot chadha hua hai mujhpar.!! heheh No probs dear....show to kaafi achhi hai....and it was a 'wow' moment.....for u....now this is a 'wow' moment for me....to hear this from u...😃😃😃

😆 😆 really part was tooooooooo CUTE..!! 😉 😛 n IF dis part goes on air den i can tell ayaan expression will b HEART KILLING 😳 😃 So true......pata hai jab main soch rahi thi Ayaan ko iss expression me....it was simply terrific....though mujhe pata hai wo to meri soch se bhi badhkar hoga...😳😳😳...and yeah....he'd be more than cute....if only I had the words to describe....*sigh*....😳😳😳

GReat job..!! 👏 Thanks dear....i'm glad u liked it...😃😃😃

: now bad points .: hmmm ek jagah comma ni dala tha u ne n yaa fulstop bhi 😆 😆 😆 hehe but yaa issbar bhi part bahut jaldi khum ho gya..!! pleeej jaldi jaldi post kiya karo na.!! 😳 😃 😛 Oh ya....comas aur fullstops to main free me dalti rehti hu....u c paise nahi lagte na...😆😆....and I knw ye part bhi utna bada nahi tha....but kya kare...there r sum huge parts in the cuming tym...😉😉😉

👏 Waiting g..!! 😛 😛 Oops....am already late...😆

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

hey.Hi Nisha...😃😃

Update was very 'Hatke' Ayaan ki date bahut different aut suprising thi. Wow....even u found it 'hatke'...hehe....am glad abt that....and yeah...its definitely a different sort of date....jaha ladkasabse zyada apne aap ko hi compliment karta hai...😆😆

You are right....raj apne party formals mein bahut hi handsome lag raha tha.😳I think ye pic kuch zyada hi hot tha...😳😳😳 And Asmi was looking gorgeous in her sari. Toh Ayaanji ko sari pasand hai...Agar who ek baar Asmi ki tarif kar ke use yeh keh de toh who hamesha hi sari pahene gi.😉Yeah....thats for sure...the girl can do anything for him....but pata nahi apne Ayaanji kis baat ka intezaar kar rahe hai...😉😉

The choice of the restaurant and all the decorations were superb...very romantic.I'm glad u liked that Nisha...😃 Seeing all this Asmi feels that aaj Aayan apne feelings confess kar hi denga. Par Aayaan toh sirf apni hi tarif kar rah tha. Who janta tha ki asmi uski compliment ka wait kar rahi thi...phir bhi who kuch nahi kehta...janab ko masti jo suji thi.😆Yup...thats the result of Ayaan being 'hatke'....but I think we luv him anyway....😳😳😳...and even Asmi does...😃😃😃

Ayaan was so hungry...ab koi pure dim kkuch khayega nahi to yahi hoga. Aur who janta hai ki yeh sun kar asmi upset ho jayegi. Par uske charm ke aage asmi has to give in.😒 Yes...he is very much engrossed in work...but knws Asmi will be upset....at least itna to sense hai janab me...😆...aur haan....apne charm ko kaise utilize karte hai...ye shayad Ayaan se behtar koi nahi janta...hai na?😳

The barish wala scene was good surprise. ayaan kitna sulk karta hai. And his childishness brings a smile on Asmi's face😊 Yupp...Ayaan always brings a smile on her face...even if he can irritate her to the most...😆😆

The Ice-creame idea was hatke...but i loved it. Thandi mein ice-creame khane ka maza hi alag hota hai. Yup...aur maine kuch din pehle khake iska maza bhi loota...😆😆...waise ice-creams r eternal...there r no seasons for them...😉😉😉

Yeh date toh bahut hi choti rahi. Even like Asmi i had thought that Aayan would have some more planned. And finally confess his love.😒I knw u guys expected this...but...meri shaitani dimag kuch alag hi soch rahi thi...sorry!😆😆😕 Asmi is a little disappointed but happy to just have Aayan by her side. She has decided that she will give Aayan all the time he needs.Actually I hav made Asmi fall for Ayaan too much...this girl actually never finds anything wrong abt him...just like me...😆😆😆

But Aayan had different plans. I think he will wait till his mission is over.Hmm...nice thought dear....u'll cum to knw in the next part.😃😃

Please continue soon

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Sumi dear....Hi Yogitha...😃😃

Fabulous 👏 👏 👏 ....superb n beautiful part yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks dear...I'm glad u liked it...😆😆

whole update main sirf ayaan n asmi hain....i loved it ...Yeah...I didnt want any other bit of any other character...par kya karu...waiters ko entry deni hi padhi...😆😆...didnt want Ayaan to do all by himself...😆😆😆utna hi nahi ayaan to pehli baar he is on time to pick up asmi..Yeah...that has to be the most surprising thing na....😆😆One more thing raj i mean ayaan is looking really cool in this picture...thank u for posting ...My pleasure dear....waise even I think...he is looking extra-killing in the pic...😳😳☺️asmis saree is also nice..n ayaan asmi ko dekha smile karna ....oh i love his smile so much...n its true that his smile to bahut bahut bahut pyari hain Yeah....bilkul sahi kaha....mujhe to lagta hai...jab tak wo smile karta rahega....tab tak mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye...😆😆...not even any compliment...😆😆...but thats only on my part.....dont worry...😆😆

why ayaan didnt complimented asmi... dekha bechari asmi thoda upset hogayi....asmi is right koi sensible insaan uska smile dekhke sensless hojate hain Hehe.....meri iss line ka waise to koi sense nahi hai...lekin kya karu...uski smile sochke hi ye sensible ladki (thats me) bhi senseless ho gayi hai...😆😆

Wow!!!!! Ayaan asmi ke saath jyada waqt spend karnkeliye jaldi aagaya....he is sooo shweet Thats for sure...no doubts...😳😳😳

Ayaan to asmi ke liye whole restuarant book kiya.....haiiii.....tume bahut acchi tarah describe kiya wo place ko ....main imagine kar rahi hu na...Oh...am glad to knw dat dear....actually I'm not that gud in descriptions of my imaginary places...😆😆...but am glad u understood that...😃😃ye dono kitna ladthe hain...but i really enjoy their sweet n cute little fights...Am happy to knw dat...😃😃mujhe bahut accha laga wo scene how asmi carefully stepped on the flower petals Thats to show her characteristic...which is soft n gentle...😃😃😃....am glad u liked it...😛😛

when ayaan said ek surprise bas thoda wait karo ...to i was thinking kya plan kiya hoga ayaan ne...n asmi to mujhse bhi jyada clever hain soch rahi hain ye ayaan kaise baarish ko plan kar saktha hain....Hehe...I'm glad u liked this line...😆😆...and surprise...well maine tab to kuch plan nahi kiya tha....but yeah....u'll soon knw wat that was...😉😉😉

Ayaan to bilkul baccha hain....kitna irritate horaha hain barish ki wajah seYeah...I always find a lil kid in Rajeev...donno y...😳

Ayaan is right thand main ice cream khane ka mazza hi kuch aur hain...Yes...ice-cream hamesha loveable hai...😃😃i loved ayaan n asmis icecream scene...Hmm...though there wasnt much of it...I'm glad u liked it...😛😛are main bhul gayi mujhe wo bhi bahut accha laga when ayaan adjusted asmis shawl saying thand lagjayegi Awe...u liked that too...am so happy to knw dat...😃😃

The last scene is superb ...especially the way u described how ayaan kissed asmis fore head n after that ayaan saying to asmi apna khayal takhna ...n remember i am always with u...its a lovely scene Again U;m glad that u loved it dear....just tried to show a softness of their relation....😃😃

I so much enjoyed reading this part sumi And I hav never been so glad Yogitha....literally yaar...see...maine har line pe yehi likha that I'm GLAD!!!!😆😆

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: spvd

hello achhi bacchi.............Hi Deepa...😳😳.......yaar the part was cute n also twas full and full ayaan and asmi.........Yeah....maine socha date pe main kuch zyada hone to nahi dungi...at least part me bas Ayaan-Asmi ko rakhti hu....may be u guys will spare me for that...😆😆.........every scene was cute....................the date was very sweet cute lovely and can keep on adding............Awe...ye to achhe wale comments hai....iska matlab main bach gayi...😆😃😃....waise thank u dear...for all the appreciation...😆😆........i loved the scene when asmi asked for what the surprise was and his reply baarish.....................ha ha ha.................and his next dialogues about the baarish was very funny....................i felt like pulling his cheeks...............hes really cute..........Sach kahu to Deepa....main chahti thi ki tab Asmi uske cheeks pull kare....but then that wud hav taken away the lightness of the situation which i didnt want at that tym....so just let it be.....lekin tumne bilkul sahi kaha....in my imagination HE WAS THAT CUTE!!!😳😳😳...........and i feel ayaan is solving his problem well and his lines where he said from hereon everything will be fine and he will always be with her......................liked it...............and also liked the simple gesture he kissed on her forhead.................lovely...........Hmm....Ayaan is trying to get things on track....and am glad u liked the small sweet gestures of him....😃😃.......cont soon dear dont make us wait much longer...........I'm trying my best dear....hope not to disappoint u guys!!😃..................

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
update was superb
i loved it
waiting for next part
update soon

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Good update.👏 👏 👏
But i was a bit disappointed that whatever i thought didn't happen of that sort.
I mean going on a date with Asmi was a nice thought but it was all very normal.
Though he promised her to be with him always and i know he would be.
update soon.

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Sumi...Hi Guglu...😃

Ab mai kya kahun... jo kuch bhi bhala bura kehna chahti thi wo sab Preet, Sur, Dhara, Mana, Nisha ne hi keh diya. Mere liye kuch nahi bacha... bhala kahun ki bura kahun??? Tum hi batao...Hehe...achhi baat hai....saara kaha dusro ki ho gayi....😆😆...waise tum zara bura hi bata do....u c...sab itne achhe hai...hamesha achha hi batate hai...😃😃😃

Well, sabse pehle to mai shocked hun ki Ayaan time pe aaya hai... 😲ye toh aisi baat hui ki Taj Mahal aur Kutub Minar gale mil rahe hon.Whoa....thats a huge one...😆😆....mujhe nahi pata tha...Ayaan ka tym pe ana itna shocking ho jayega...😆😆....but then ye pura part hi thoda shocking aur surprising tha na...😆😆 Aur fir wo muskura bhi raha tha. Aur to aur Asmi ke dialogue bhi wapas kar raha hai. Hmm...seems like Ayaan is regaining himself...ryt?😉😉

Ice cream - aur wo bhi chocolate!!! Yummy!!! Yup it definitely is toooomuch yummy!!!😳Asmi hugged Ayaan!!!Kya kare....Ayaan to hug karta nahi...😆 Aur Ayaan ne kaha ki wo humesha uske saath rahega!!!Yupp....janab ne thoda kuch to kaha...😉 Aur Ayaan ka baarish ke hone se chidna was just like a child.Hmm...I luv to hav a glimpse of kids in Rajeev...😃 It was romantic where Ayaan is concerned and after a long time we could see a glimpse or Arnav. Yup....I wanted that...😃😃And the decoration with rose petals... oh wow!!! Well...petals ka idea meri Dii ka tha...😆

Mai kya kahun... sab kuch kaha jaa chuka hai. I love repeats anyways....😆😆😆

And I know Sumi ki tum saraswati puja nahi celebrate karti. I meant I suppose u had a holiday that day and enjoyed your holiday. Oh...tabhi main kahu...kya Guglu ne sach me wahi mean kiya...isiliye maine holiday wali baat keh dii😆...and yeah....the day went nice...actually uss din meri jo tution hoti hai wo Sir Hindu hain...so unhone puja celebrate kiya na....isiliye humein chhutti mili...😃

Anyways... continue soon. I'm waiting eagerly for the next update. I'm updating very soon dear!!😃

Love
Guglu