|| J.T.O.D || Pg.145 {The.End} Feb.23.2010

Hi everyone I am new to IF. I love a lot of the Fanfictions that are on this forum so I decided to write my own.

As you know its "Journey to Our Destiny".

 

Here is the Character Sketch:

The Maans

They are a really rich family they have an hotel business around the world. 2 brothers and 2 sisters live together as a family. They don't have any parents because they died in a plane crash 8 years ago. The family is well respected and lives in Mumbai India. They are really known for their honesty and loyally. This family is a family that is in the perfect place even without parents to tell them what's right and what's not.

Raj Maan

He is 26 years old. Raj is the owner of Maan industries. He is a very good brother to his entire sibling. He likes to tease his brother and loves his sister Heer the most.

Nihaal Maan

He is 25 years old. Nihaal is the manger of his brothers industry. He loves Meher and Raj the most he isn't that close to Heer since she is a bit different from him. He is in love with Veera and imagines of spending his life with her.

Heer Maan

Heer is 23 years old. She is kind hearted and loved by all. Girls are always jealous of her since all the boys in university follow her around. She is studying fashion. She imagines of becoming a famous designer one day. She is loved by all the guys at school and has won a lot of "Most beautiful" award. She is never afraid to stand up for what she believes in and if anybody messes with her she messes back. If somebody insults her she doesn't rest until she gets revenge. She is best friends with Veera and Sapna.  

She is cute adorable and the apple of every ones eye. She is 19 an is collage studying medical. She dreams of being a doctor. She is really close to her sister Heer and tells her everything.

They are a really rich and powerful family. They also have a hotel business but larger then the Maan's. They are living in Canada Vancouver. They have a really nice reputation.

They are loving parents to their kids. Lalit has won "best business man award" 7 years in a row. They adore all of their kids but miss veers who lives in India for her studies.

He is the guy everyone wants. He is 24 years old. He runs away from flirty girls. He is very kind and soft hearted but likes to tease his brother and his friends. He is the hunk of Vancouver Canada. He has been on 6 magazines and also won 3 awards for "Best Business Man". He also won "Best Smile Award" 2 years in a row. He wants to be normal person who doesn't get stared at when he steps on the streets. He is looking forward to going to India to see his little sister Veera. He handles his dads business.

Preet Juneja

He is the joker in the house. Preet is 20 years old and is studying Law. He loves his family and is always their for his Prem Bhai. He is also adored by girls but he only dates girls that his brother think are good (which are 2 out a 1000).

She is 23 years old and very loving. She doesn't live with her family she lives in a hostel. She is deeply in love with nihaal and imagines of being his wife.

Please Tell me if i should continue:)

Hi guys so this is chapt one for my FF " journey to our LOVE" hope you guys enjoy it. Leave comments and suggestions.

Here is Chapter 1

There it is the Maan's Mansion. The light rays going into the house and the diamond Chandeliers reflecting there lights all over the house.

Raj – " Meher you should be host in those football games and the good thing is you wont even need a mike … just scream on top of your lungs…. But you I get a good thing out of it too when you come home after 2 or 3 games you would probably loose your voice and then I can finally have a moment of silence without having a boll horn in my ear." He said giggling. Meher gave him a dirty look. They were all standing in their living room dressed up to go to work or school. All of them waiting for Heer.

Nihaal – "sorry I didn't know you were so sensitive... god give a break" Heer rolled her eyes and all of them headed out side. Raj drove as usual. Heer and Meher sat in the back and Nihaal in the front. They all drove down the city of Mumbai looking a great views and different people. Finally Heer's university arrived. She got out and waved everyone good. And blew Raj a kiss since he was her favorite brother. Heer headed towards her collage when Veera and Sapna came running towards her.

Veera- Sapana- "Heeerrooooo." Both of them yelled at the same time making heer want to slap them across their faces. She hated being called that. Veera and Sapna would call her that all the time which would really annoy her.

Heer – " Yaar tum dono ko hazar martba kaha hai mujhe na Hero bulaya karo… don't you guys get hindi…god if I hear that one more time I'll kill you both" Veera and Sapna laughed a bit trying to catch some breath. Veera hugged Heer tightly leaving Heer confused, because she only hugged her like that when she was really really happy or wanted something. She pulled Back looking like the happiest girl alive.

Veera – "Heer meri Family aa rahi hai Canada say"  She sadi jumping up and down like a child. Heer's lips played into abig smile. She had never seen Veera's family before. Heer never even knew what they were like because Veera didn't wana tell her until she met them her self.

Heer – "OMG kaab or tune phelay kyon nahi bataya mujhe … you stupid when are they coming … god tell me answer me" Veera just smiled

Veera – " your probably more exicted then me… and tomorrow at 4:00pm so you better come to meet them around that time"

Heer – "of course … and should Nihaal Bhai come too I mean if you want your parents to meet your life partner." Sapna giggled and said she had to go get to class

Veera- " life partner my foot… he hasn't even proposed me yet… sometimes I wana kill him but then I like my life out of jail.. you know"

Heer – " ya ya and now lets go to class … before Mr. Rahul blows his taklu top off"

Veera laughed and both of them headed inside that unviresty. When they reached their class Heer took a seat in the back row and veera sat on her left side. They both talked a bit before class started.

Heer – " acha ek baat bata tujhe apni family me sab say acha kon lagta hai"

Veera – "meray favourite hain MERAY PB"

Heer – " PB… oh as "PORA BANDAR" she said giggling. Veera gave her a dirty look. Heer stopped and put on a serious face.

Veera – " For your information PB as in PREM BHAHIA.. he is awesome, nice, funny, kind and most of all loving. In others words he is totally like you"

Heer – " Really like me?? … I don't think of myself as in a Bandar" she giggled

Mr. Rahul – " Ms. Heer Maan we do not call people Bandar in thins class ….. understand or do I have repeat my self again" Everyone giggled around Heer.

Heer – "Agar Bandar nahi to Taklu Bola saktay hain" she whispered loud enough for peole around her to hear. Everyone burst out laughing. Mr.Rahul gave Heer a dirty look. The class began and as usual guys looking at Heer while she was picked to go up to the class and draw a diagram. Heer was used to having every guy look at her but she never gave a dam because she wanted someone special and not a player.

Precap – Prems Entry. Heer helps and old man and Prem watched her.

That's it for Part one. Hope you guys enjoy it and I will update tomorrow. Tell me if you like and if I should continue. Thank you and Enjoy. If someone can tell me how you PM someone that would be great. Thankyou.

Originally posted by: zainab.A

nice part! :)
PM me! 😊