Mayur FF: Lost and Found - V Day Spcl. - Pg 94 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
hi!
amazing part. loved it. but who's that girl? is mayank cheating on nupur?
plz continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Oh.My.God.

You cannot do that! You absolutely can't! Poor, poor Nupur! I could literally visualize everything going on in this chapter..who the hell is that %$#^!! I am seriously sooo pissed off with Mayank....idiot. But maybe, he's got a reason...a valid one I hope! :)

Great Chapter...LOVED Mayank and RV interaction....he really needs a punch on the show as well...personally I'd be delighted if Mayank does it...
And Megha totally had me in fits! lol...she behaves exactly like someone I know when drunk...haha....

Please update soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
Great Part!
Its gonna be soem kind of a misuderstanding fromNupur's part and she'll break up wit him?
Continue soon.
Anjali
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
debs plzzz 4give me.i m so sorry yaar.life has been a roller coaster 4 me.huge study pressure just doesnt gimme enough time to become online that frequent.and on the top of that my dc problem in every half n hour irritates me to the core.i feel so helpless yaar.😭😭its been a daily routine 4 me now.😡
but coming back to ur ff......well debs i m really short of words!!!!!how do u manage to narrate any scene with so much depth & intensity?hats off to u yaar.i have been one of the biggest admirers of ur ff.with each and every part i m getting even more anxious and impatient to know whats gonna happen with them...plzzzzzz debs i just cant bear the fact that MAYU ditching her.😭it just cuts me into pieces.....and 4 the rest i have full trust on u...😊🤗🤗
Edited by ghtk1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
aww debby..amazing part..oh pls tell me mayank isnt cheating on nupur..noo yaaar..i feel so bad for nupur...poor thing..what she might be going through...hope things get settled soon...fantastic part...but u left me in suspense..pls update soon....cant wait to read d next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Debby! New FF. OMG! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mayank is cheating on Nupur? Mayank is cheating on Nupur? And he has the galls to scold her for being in a bar, when he's cheating on her? I cannot believe it. It's, omg, such an interesting twist, and that too in the second chapter.

I cannot wait to see how you unfold this story. Gunjan has already been mentioned (she's not Nupur's sister right?), RV as well (so happy Mayank punched him!), Benji'll come right? And Sam? And Uday? All the others?

Update soon Debs! And thank you for the PM, and add me to the list.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
it's really good
pm me also when you update next time 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
ah, plz dmt let mayu cheat nupur.....................but yeah u have a gr8 flair........keep it up, and plz add me to pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
[quote=Nishithini]
hi!
amazing part. loved it. but who's that girl? is mayank cheating on nupur?
plz continue soon.[/quote]
Thank you Nishi :) Well, the truth will come out in the forthcoming chapters. 😃

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Great Part!

Its gonna be soem kind of a misuderstanding fromNupur's part and she'll break up wit him?
Continue soon.
Anjali


Misunderstandings happen all the time don't they... I hope u like what's coming up. :) Thanks a lot Anjali. :)
Edited by debby - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: archieeps

Oh.My.God.

You cannot do that! You absolutely can't! Poor, poor Nupur! I could literally visualize everything going on in this chapter..who the hell is that %$#^!! I am seriously sooo pissed off with Mayank....idiot. But maybe, he's got a reason...a valid one I hope! :)

Great Chapter...LOVED Mayank and RV interaction....he really needs a punch on the show as well...personally I'd be delighted if Mayank does it...
And Megha totally had me in fits! lol...she behaves exactly like someone I know when drunk...haha....

Please update soon!



Kainath. :D
Man, it hurts me to see Mayank insulted... lol.. rest assured, he has a reason for everything.. now the reasons in themselves may be convoluted.
Oh completely - few things on the show would delight me as much now as RV getting a good old punch. Glad u liked that part. :)
Lol, u know someone like Megha too? Entertaining people, aren't they? I was just thinking about sending my Megha a copy of this, under an alias of course.. ha ha.
Will update soon.. thanks a ton for the lovely review. 😃

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