My Savior [AR] One Shot - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: loyal-kashian

that was such a fantabulous one shot. i must tell you. i am head over heels in love with it.. you really write so well...
 
 
the way everything was framed was superb...
 
urghh.. that maya is such a pain.
 
ryan is really so cute and sweet.
 
poor armaan and ryan. they had to go through many obstacles..... felt really bad when read about armaan n ryan spending their night in the restroom... just cant imagine the situation.... really felt sorry for them..
 
aww.. ridzi is such a sweetheart. she paid for ryan's school.. love her. muhwaaz..
 
super fabulous di...
 
please please and please write more and more one shots whenever you find the time...
 
looking forward for more works of yours...
 
loads of love
deepu 😃
 

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey
nice ff
loved it
nice concept