naitik akshara suhaag raat!!!oneshot

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Posted: 14 years ago
well this is according to the current story track. our munna (naitik) is doubting akshara and rituraj and the letter wich akshara wrote has not reached him yet!!
so here it goes!!hope u like it.
akshara sat on the edge of the bed dressed in her wedding finery, her insides felt like jelly and yet she was oddly calm.she noticed had noticed naitik's strange behaviour but she felt .she was feeling really tired and it was past midnight already. she was brought to the room by nandini ,reshmi and gayatri mom.


naitik's room was well decorated with red and white roses and with ribbons.she went and sat on the bed waiting for the man n her life to come . naitik arrived after some minutes. reshmi,nandini and rituraj had come to see him off and they closed the door and akshara could  hear them giggling.her bely had done a somersault seeing him enter into the room
naitik came over and he looked at her. she saw the pain in his eyes .she felt her mind tensing.he just stared at her .akshara got up from the bed and naitik moved towards the dresser when akshara called him naitikji
naitik stopped in his path and akshara asked him if something is bothering him and he tuns an looks at her. he culdn't control himself and he blurted out .why do u care???
these words hit akshara like thunder and she said kya??
naitik asked her why is she faking with him and he told her that he is willing to go away from her life and she can live with rituraj.
akshara was shocked hearing all this.tears started streaming out of her eyes and she leaned onto the dresser for support.she cried and cried naitik just went and sat on the sofa when his eyes caught sight of a bundle of letters.he reached for it when a cover fell down and a paper fell out of it.he took it and started reading it.he looked shocked reading the contents since it was the letter wich akshra had sent him telling him how much she loved him etc etc. she had poured her heart into it and naitik felt guilty for giving pain to her.he looked over to her who was still standing by the dresser  crying .he went towards her and she felt a hand on her shoulder.she turned to look up at naitik's face.he dint say anything but loked much releived and she saw the letter that was in his hands. she recognised it withing a second and understanding the path of her thoughts naitik said that he was sorry for thinking wrong about her.he said that he read the letter only now and he was feeling sorry for evrything.he went on to explaing that he had become too posessive of her and culdn't bear it when rr told him that she had consented for  a relation with rr .akshara felt some of the tension draining out of her he wiped her tears and placed a kiss on her forhead for the first time after their marriage.

he asked her if she had forgiven him and she said that she loved him soo much that she annot be angry with him.he hugged her tight.after a few minuted they broke the hug and naitik cupped her face with his hands. he moved closer and then leaned over 
and captured her lips. akshara felt herself going week and was sure that she wuld have slumped to the floor if naitik was not holding her tight.she felt secure in his hands. it seemed like ages when they broke from the kiss and both grasped for breath.she felt his lips on th nape of her neck and she din't want him to stop.his hands left her waist and moved up edging her dupatta.he kissed her again and then he heard a little ouch!! she loked at him with concern and saw that a string from her bangle had poked his hand .he suggested that they should change.she agreed and he went of into his dresser room .he came out wearing an pyjama and kurta.he saw her still standing n fron t of the mirror dazed.he went up to her and hugged her tight around her waist.his hands traised her sleek tummy and he whispered in her ears taht he was willing to help her change.akshara was about to stop him but felt all her power draining from her. he removed her jewellery one by one by placing a kiss here and there.when this was done he lifted her up in his arms and took her to the bed .he placed her on the floor and then bent down to kiss her neck and his hands around her waist .her dupatta was fully out by this time and he pulled it down.
he set off  a chain of kisess and she moaned with pleasure.................................................!!!!!!


 well post ur comments if 😉!!!!well many of u have commented that this wuldn't happen on tv. im also well aware of it!!did i say that this is gonna happen???


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Posted: 14 years ago

it is just great nasco....watever u write it is just awesome

i hope this happens

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice writing but this is TV show I am sure they will not show something like this.  Uncomforatable to watch with the entire family. 
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Posted: 14 years ago
i know... they wont even show a proper kiss... never mind the rest of it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
yup its nice. but they would never show this in tv. cuz its a family  show.
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Posted: 14 years ago

its fabulous and hope this happens..

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Posted: 14 years ago
soo romantic ,....... wat a superb ending of mu ...........love ur writings ...... keep dng ur gr8 work nasco......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: ahana2009

just wow


😊thnku for reading it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: yusra12

it is just great nasco....watever u write it is just awesome

i hope this happens


thnku  .i don't think this is gonna happen in the show😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
mind blowin nasco.....cldnt hv been any betta..waitin 4 more...n ya thinkin wat wil happen in d serial????