one shot- life** MN & SG.. Do read n cmmnt!!!!!! - Page 4

i hope soo toooo.,,,

This is not fair :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(
But nice pieces... Nupur-Mayank's convo.. Samrat's proposal..

hey it was sooooooo well written sindhya, gosh it was sooooooo romantic and i was sooooooo happy to read the mayur parts but what did you do sindhya, why did you kill mayur , oh noooooooooooo man, i am soo upset after reading the part about the plane crash. Very Well written.

thnks sooo muchh sennyyy....

my god sindhya.....it was too good!!!......esp the 1st anniversary....but yaar y did u give such a tragic end.....mayur ko kyon maar dia.....not done yaar....i was literally crying....anyways it was too good!!

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

my god sindhya.....it was too good!!!......esp the 1st anniversary....but yaar y did u give such a tragic end.....mayur ko kyon maar dia.....not done yaar....i was literally crying....anyways it was too good!!

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

 

awww srrryyy prernaa...

agla one shott shall be veryyy happyy haappyy sorts!

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

 

thanx....i'm looking forward to it.....write soon....

omg sindhya!!!

Originally posted by: hgrhr

omg sindhya!!!

itni saaad one shot....😭

I really liked how you interwove the scenes...first sheena...then the sajan scene, mayur...it was very nice!!

I loved that Mayur scene...when they wake up and then when Nupur gives Mayank her gift...that was so sweet!! And he wanted a girl...awwww....!!

Sajan proposal was so cute as well...nothing fancy...just the two of them...it was how it should be!

But they died...all of them...*sob*...aisa kyun kiya yaar...!!

i can't imagine what Gunjan must have gone thorugh....but she was marrying again...?? Really...?

Why didn't gunjan too go with Samrat to see Mayur....Nupur is her sister na...i wanna cry over this...

But it was wonderfully written!! I loved reading it!

Keep it up yaar!! You're one of the best FF writers!