True Love Lasts Forever!! - (RM) ONE SHOT!!

-Tina- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#1
Here's my one-shot on one of my fav couples RAHUL MUSKAAN!!...had written this for a contest on IF ...here it is...please feel free to comment/criticize
The part in italics(BLUE) is what is written in Rahul's Diary .....It is a partially sad story...but who says all love stories have a happy ending.....not all love stories have a happy ending!!
************************
12th April 2005..
Kehtein hain pehla pyaar kisi ko nahi milta....galat kehte hain...mujhe mera pehle pyaar mil gaya hain....aaj usne haan kardi...meri muskaan ne haan kardi..Can you believe it...."MUSKAAN THE DETECTIVE" ne mujhe haan kar di....She is officiallly my girlfriend ...My first love- My Muskaan!!

Rahul..

4 YEARS Later
12th April 2009
Aaj maine aur muskaan ne 4 saal pure kiye hain....4 years of togetherness.....4 years of pure love!!..I love you Muskaan!!..Main usee aaj bahar lekar jaa raha hoon....aur usse woh baat bhi bata donga...jo usse ab tak chupayi hain.....woh tutth jayegi lekin mere pass aur koi rasta nahi hain...she ought to know!!..

Rahul..
____________
That very day Rahul told Muskaan about his heart problem....He had a family history and he was prone...the doctors had advised him an immediate heart transplant....but they were unable to get a donor!!..

Muskaan was shattered.....it was a very big shock!!..

Rahul took Muskaan for dinner also..A very romantic dinner!!..And then a walk by the beach...they had decided to enjoy all the moments they had!!..

Rahul-Muskaan uss murder case ka kya hua?

Muskaan-No clues at all Rahul....humein shak toh hain...but we dont have proof....minister ka beta jo hain...we cant do anything!!..
_______

A few days later..Muskaan callled rahul to pick her up immediately from her house in his car....

When Rahul picked up Muskaan from her house...there was somehting different...different about her behaviour

Rahul-Sab theekh?..Aise kyun bulaya?

Muskaan-Batati hoon..

In the car a while later...

Muskaan-Rahul mujhe bahut pyaas lag rahi hain...please thoda pani aogey kisi dukan se..

Rahul nodded..

He got out of the car and went..

When he got a bottle and turned around....His car wasnt there....

Rahul-Muskaan!!!!..

He dropped the botlle and hurriedly ran looking for her...

His phone rang..It was Their friend nikita..

Niki-Thank god tumne phone uthaya....tum please apni gaadii main kahain mat jao....muskaan ko threat calls miley hain....ki tumharey car main bomb hain....do u hear me?...apne car se durr raho...

He cut the call..

Rahul-Tumne aisa kyun kiya muskaan?????

He knew where she would have gone..he caught an auto and went!!

There was this empty place in the outskirts of their city ....it was an empty land with lots of tress and all.....a very scenic place.....it was muskaans fav..

He saw his crumpeled car...

Something died within him..

He ran towards his car....hoping against hope!!..

He saw her bleeding.

He saw her smiling at him..

He was in tears....he was supposed to die in her place..

The car was completely crumpeled....it was a major accident..

Rahul pulled muskaan out..

Muskaan-I love you!!

Rahul-Kyun kiya tumne aisa?...why?....muskaan ek baar kaha hota.

Muskaan only smiled..

They told her bomb to distract her..They had planned an accident...
Muskaan-Meri diary padh lena...bahut kuch

she took a deep breath..

Muskaan-Bahut kuch kehna tha.........diary main ...ek letter..

She was struggling..

Muskaan-Likha..immediately padho

Rahul-Muskaan..

He was completely in tears..

Muskaan-I love you Rahul..

And she breathed her last in his lap..

He stopped...he realized she wasnt breathing any more....a lone tear rolled out of his eyes..

There was pin drop silence...he could hear the birds chirping the air blowing...but he couldnt hear his muskaan's voice..

Rahul- Muuuuuusssskaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!

His scream filled the air...he lay himself over her....crying for her.....how could she have done this to him!!..

____
When Rahul opened her diary and went through her pages...tears filled his eyes...he found the letter she was talking about..

Rahul,
Aggar tum yeh letter padh rahe hoon which means probabaly i am dead by now.....I got a threat call jana.....woh bhi tumhari life ko....you know i dont care for the ones i get for myself..but this one was for you and i couldnt take any chance...and so i just had to do it for you.....sorry about it..and sweety there is one last wish.....promise me you'l fulfil it...rahul....after my death i want my heart to beat in you.....i am sure humarey dill match hongey....kyunki tum aur main alag toh nahi hain...we are same ...we are one......aur humarey dil bhi same!!...Please do the needy....i'l be happy!!

Love you too much!!

Muskaan!!

______


Scene shifts to 12th April 2010...(NOT Rahul's diary)

Rahul -Today Me and Muskaan complete 5 years....5 years of togetherness....5 years of pure love!!...To the world Muskaan is dead...But to me My Muskaan lives forever within me....In my heart...Ooops her own heart which beats within me...I can see her even today....I can feel her even today....Just that i cant touch her.....As i stand here in the place she breathed her last..I am waiting for her to come...I am calling her...She has to come....coz practically her heart is here....

"Rahul"

Rahul turns around and finds his muskaan smiling at him...

Muskaan-Love you too much!!

He smiles at her......

He can always see his Muskaan...Even thought she may be termed "dead" as people say......but she comes n his dreams in his imagination for him....nobody can kill true love!!.....It lives forever!!
12th April 2010 (DAIRY)
Kehte hain Pehla pyaar kisi ko nahi milta!!..Shayad sahi kehte hain!!..Mujhse meri Muskaan durr ho gayyi.....main usse shaadi nahi kar sakta...par woh aati hain..mere sapnoo main....meri hakikat main..mere passs...mere liye...sacha pyaar zindagi ya mauth ka gulam nahi.....sacha pyar sadiyoon tak chala jata hain....It lives forever!!..True LOVE lives Forever!!
Rahul

____________________

Do comment!!..
Luv
Tina!!

Created

Last reply

Replies

19

Views

2.4k

Users

12

Likes

6

Frequent Posters

dmg_fanatic thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#2
HEY AWESOME
LOVED IT FROM THE CORE OF MY HEART
LOVED RAHUL'S DIARY ENTRIES
AND I WAS LITERALLY INTO TEARS WHILE READING THIS
SO SWEET
SAD BUT TRUE.... PEHLA PYAAR KISI KO NAHI MILTA
PLS WRITE ONE ON AR TOO
LOTS OF LOVE
KAVYA
Edited by dmg_fanatic - 16 years ago
-Tina- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#3
@kavya
thnx a lot....will defo ryt one on AR smeday!!...
Make-It-Pop thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 16 years ago
#4
OMG this was amazing...
bah it was reli sad yaar...
really loved Rahulz journal....
too good.!
awsome job man.!!!!!
Luv saz!
DMG4EVER thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 16 years ago
#5

Tina u won't belive hw much ii cried reading this... Thank You so much for this. It was absolutely amazing sweety.

accountband thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#6
OMG....ju left me speechless...iam still in tears....
AMAZING storyline....."love it too much"...
Rahul Muskaan are portrayed in best way possible...
THANKS....
Radhi12 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 16 years ago
#7
Awesome Shot!!!!!
you made me cry...
it was really good.
-Tina- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: SaziArmaan

OMG this was amazing...

bah it was reli sad yaar...
really loved Rahulz journal....
too good.!
awsome job man.!!!!!
Luv saz!

thnx a lot !!....glad u lykd it!!..
-Tina- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

Tina u won't belive hw much ii cried reading this... Thank You so much for this. It was absolutely amazing sweety.

thnx a lot..i noe its kinda senti...love isnt easy always!!
-Tina- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: imane568

OMG....ju left me speechless...iam still in tears....
AMAZING storyline....."love it too much"...
Rahul Muskaan are portrayed in best way possible...
THANKS....

thnx a lot..i m so glad u lykd it....i rote this days bck...wen RM track was gng nower....glad that they r gttn bck on track!!....

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

More Than Enough ~ A Rumya Three-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @oh_nakhrewaali in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: Character A has body image...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

Deewaniyat ~ A Jeenat Five-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @Indulekha00 in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: A prompt for the mysterious lovers...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

Mere Brother Ki Dulhan ~ A Jeenat Five-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @heavenlybliss in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: Person A's gets alliance of...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

The Secret Poet ~ A Rumya Three-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @oh_nakhrewaali in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: A college romance where someone...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

The Magical Kiss ~ Romione Three-Shot #PyaarKaTropeFest [Completed] The Magical Kiss ~ Romione Three-Shot #PyaarKaTropeFest [Completed]

Cover by @Moonstique (Roseline) Introduction : As the years passed, Ron realized that what he felt for Hermione is something more than...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".