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Kriya_RoKa luvr

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 47...

ohhhhhhhhhh final 4 parts...i'm sooooooooooo happy dii!!! garden scene was just fantastic!!!! ooooo KASTURI KISSED ROBBIE!!!suuperbbb dii!!!! hahahaha....b4 kissing she luked at tikku to confirm dat no one is luking.....hahahahah Hanumaan Joke was sooooooooooo nice...i was dat episode in Ramayan in NDTV..... LOVE U DII!

tiku:'dii...thum aaj yahee sowo gee?...'he asked a very delicate question in a very simple way.

robbie:😛....he was keen to know her answer.

kasturi:'probably....😊'

tiku:'yeah probably kya ho tha hai?😃...'

robbie:'probably mathlab you have to go and sleep with your mummy...'

i just loved dis part dii.....robbie's answer was superb!!!!hahahahahahahahaha....i was laughing wen i read dis!!

Nechu😳

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Kriya_RoKa luvr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#762

awwww!!!!

first of all 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 superrbb part dii.... final robbie got rid of his bandage!!! thank god he was able to see in first itself!!

ohhhhh.......sooooo sweeet of Kasturi....she tatooed Robbie's name in one of her most n most private place!!!!

Love u Kasturi!!!!

Thank God dat blouse string got tacked n dat's da only reason how robbie saw dis today only....

ohhhhhh poor kasturi......struggling to prove her love!!!

Roka bedroom scene was sooooooo nice n emotional dii!!!

soooooooooooo nice part!!!!

Love u dii!!!

Nechu😳

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Kriya_RoKa luvr

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Posted: 16 years ago

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u deserve dis dii!!!u really deserve it dii!!!!👏 wat a suuuuperb part dii!!!!!! diii u've brought out da real life of orphans n blind children!!! doz pics really brought tears in my eyes!! omg...dii we all r really blessed for not having any disabilities!!! poor childrennn.....how do dey see the wrld like us!!!ohhhhh😭 i wnat to thank u for bringing out dis in ur ff!!!! thank u sooooooooo much dii!!!

loved da way how all of dem interfered wid doz children!!!!

Thanks to Kasturi 4 doing all dis!!!!👏

ohhhhhhhhh ur ff ended!!!😭

love u dii!!!

Nechu😭

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Kriya_RoKa luvr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#764

😭ohhhhhhhhhh really sad dat ur ff ended dii!!!

really sad!!!

all doz kids r sooooooooo cute especially raj rati n ramya!!!!

n dat last baby of ajal is sooooooo cute!!!

ohhhh i'm really sad on da ending of ur ff....😭😭

i wud like to give u!!!!

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Will miss ur ff dii!!!!will miss it like sumthing😭😭😭

love u dii!!!

hehe...its time for KMH now!

Nechu😭

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swan20

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Aww Shumi you have ended ur FF.......😭........i'm really going to miss it a lot........but most importantly i'm going to miss interacting with you thru ur FF.......😭😭😭

loved all the concluding parts......robbie is a big badmash......loved how he was making kasturi work hard to prove her love....😆

kasturi got his name tatooed.......heheeee inspired by some bollywood stars eh...😆

OMG the visit to the blind institution literally had me in tears.......😭.......it was heartwrenching to see the pictures of all the kids........Shumi this has been the most touching part u have ever written.......🤗

aww the pictures of robbie's & alana's kids are so cute.......i love how u end ur FF's........all a big happy family....😃

will really miss ur FF........have a wonderful time in India.....wishing you a safe journey......take care dear.....🤗

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swan20

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Posted: 16 years ago

#766

Shumi thanks so much for writing such a beautiful FF......God bless you!!!!!!!!!........🤗 🤗 🤗

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

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u didnt pm me Abt da last part!!!!
uaaaa!!!!!!!

Newasy it was a beautiful FF
i loved it
u r a gr8 writer

WAY TO GO

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#768

amazing ff evry t5hing turned out to be great keep up the great wrk and hope to hear from u soon

by the way i was kinda shocked when u said iv posted the last part it was sudden but i rlly enjoied it

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Posted: 16 years ago

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😆😆😆.moosam bahuth achcha hai.hey yahaan bhi
mai hanumaan ji tho nahi hoon!to literally open my chest and show my loving heart.' 😆good one
robbie :'oh! i see😛...par yeah tho mairay fans kar thay hain...' ya even i m willing to
'dii...how come you do to me like this?.do you think i will not recognize her.she is my love.i can feel her presence from distance....haan tabhi to itna time lag gaya
alaana:'wahee tho ...kusaay mai thu aur bhee romantic lag tha hai..really......😍😍😍
a feeling of proudness filled with in herself.'he is my husband! he is all mine! only mine!!!!'nooooo he is ours.......
a feeling of proudness filled with in herself.'he is my husband! he is all mine! only mine!!!!'awesoommestttt line di😉robbie is really naughty
robbie:'you are a college student.you should be knowing...oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo😉
it was saturday.the day to open his eye bandage.finally thank god
Dr:'now your sight is prefect...na nana na ana na nana na ana
ajay:'don't worry....we will get married soon....😊'he hold his hand and promised him. chaloo inki bhi shadi karo ab bichari alana bhoodi na ho jaaye
robbie:'what ever it is...batha kay tho jaana chahee yeah...😡'he was worried.chooo chweet
kuch na kuch museebath khadee kar thay thee hai..u r absolutely right guy
robbie:'look at her condition!!???...😡'he became wild when looked at her wet dress,disturbed hair,broken sandal. di saaf saaf kehdo that she was looking like a begger.sorry lol

robbie:'look at her! left the sandal here one there one...😡'he went and fall on the sofa.

alaana:'🤣...'🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

robbie:'😲...very much below her left shoulder his name Robbie was tattooed.😉okkk to ab naughty boy ke sath reh reh ke she has also become naughty
asturi: ' aur kaisay prove karoon?' again she became sad.
u know is part ko dekh kar i reminded of the song punchin by nicole schrezinger. do listen to it

robbie:'.... baath mai thayk loonga...😉...'he winked at heroohh he always do so n make others do so too😉😉😉
it was so heart wrenching to see small kids waiting with their plates for their food.along with the catering people even robbie served food to them.for some of the kids he fed them too.soo nice of him. he's too good
blind child:'uncle thum baday rock star ho na...hamai gakay sunaawo na..haan even we are dyeing to watch ur lipsink
kasturi:'raastha saam nay hai..ab yeh bachi badi ho gayi hai
robbie:'kasuri...thum jeeth gayee ho!.today you have proved your love..are hum har roz proove karte ho but u never listen to us lol
robbie:'kush!😃' he moved her front bang aside and caressed her cheed.finally it's the happiest moment
robbie and kasturi had three children ramya , rati and raj.wah teeno ke teeno r se.chalo ab waise teen lockets le kar aao😆😆

diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii i think aaj to i've a list to praise u.actually i found them in the dictionary.😆
u r awesome.the best.you rock.u r sunshine.u r the bestesttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Omg omg omg Shumi di, four super-duper, fabulous, awesome, fantastic, wonderful, amazing parts! 🤗 👏 🤗 👏 🤗

Aw Kasturi kissed Robbie - so cute! 😛

Hehe loved his reaction 😆 and his pretend anger at Alaana and when he said: "i can feel her presence from distance...." 😉

Aw love Tiku! 🤗 He is so cute and innocent and childish and sweet 😛

Yay loved how Kasturi slept next to Robbie 😃, thinking 'he is my husband! he is all mine! only mine!!!!' 😛

Yippee Robbie can see again! 😃

Aw very emotional scene with Alaana and Ajay 😊

Lol Tiku again made me laugh pointing to Alaana 🤣

And Robbie is so concerned for Kasturi - aw 😛

Omg tulips and a tattoo! 😛

Wow that was a surprise 😲

Omg Robbie's still not convinced 😕

Aur kitna karegi bechari?

Aw kasturi sounds like she is looking very elegant and pretty in that blue sari 😊