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Kanika05 Edited by AMMY LUVS RIDZ - 14 years ago

OMGOSH......this is amazingly written....i was tearing up so badly!!! really touching...i loved it! NUPUR is too nice to still want to save her marriage and accept him back so eaasilly....really opens your eyes up!

thanks...you write really well!

Originally posted by: xOxMwahxOx

OMGOSH......this is amazingly written....i was tearing up so badly!!! really touching...i loved it! NUPUR is too nice to still want to save her marriage and accept him back so eaasilly....really opens your eyes up!

thanks...you write really well!

thank u for reading😳

OMG that is soo adorable!

Originally posted by: mimi0295

OMG that is soo adorable!

Wow, it's like one of those sweet chain letters you always get in the mail! Gosh, I think I almost cried. Bless!

thank u mimi😳

😲

This is the best Fan fic I have ever ever ever ever ever ever everread!!!!!!!!!!!!! in like my whole time on IF.

WOW!! ur a genius, I'm not even joking, did u make this whole story by urself??? I was literally rushing down the page wanting to read more and more.

 I could never have imagined such a fab story, great concept and storyline..

omg omg omg...this is honestly , by god the best story EVERRRRRR!!!!

 I'm honestly gonna tell every1 on IF to read this. Really unique and has a sophisticated storyline...and well written! LOVE the storyline!!!

👏👏👏👏

Kanya

Piyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu  yeh kya thaa👏 ........... beautiful ... wonderful .. so touching ,.. excellent ....  ooooooooooo God Piyu ur frnd is a great writer teller her so .... u r a sweetheart  for sharing all this with us ...👏

 piyu it was like a pg from one's dairy .... so well written all the emotions of first love ... lost love regain love ... and Dia😡 should  stay away from this couple.... how can Mayu even think about other girl  than Nups ... I loved the way it was written .....👏

 and Last Line I will carry  u  till v r old 👏

 mind blowing 👏

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Piyu i know it is a story and very beautiful wriiten ...but this story touched avery vulnerable topic for me... so now u just have to hear my stand on it 😆

piyu i have serious issues with betrayal ... a man who see ur crying😭 ....c u at ur most vulnerable stage 😭and that thing making him go for divorce more firmly ... is  a man who should not call himslef a man😡😡...

 Piyu I cannot forgive a man who betrays me like Nup was betrayed... what if i had an a fair ...??? will he forgive me ...?

 I may forgive but i can never ever forget and this will ultimately kill my inner strength and my faith in me .... so if i had been nups i would not have taken anything from him  and would have walked out on him ...

 Let him have dia....bec now i can never ever trust him .......
Edited by SanaSarwar - 15 years ago

this was a fab story i loved it soo much

this was the best!! omg i was so sad with mayu but then happy he realized he still loves nupur!! and that nupur was also giving him a chance..awww