Pablo's Muse [I] -AR- Pt. 25/Pg 143 May 9, 11

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addicted_93

@addicted_93

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Posted: 15 years ago

#341

hey aria!!!!!!!
awesum awesum awesummm part!!!!!!
the way u portrayed every1z emotions was fantabulous!!!
it was a perfect aftermath reaction...!
is armaan padmaz son??!!!!!!!!!!!!!
duz dat mean hez ridz BRO??!!!!!!!!!
m super cofused!!!!! :S
all-in-all a superb part..
pls updt soon!!
luv shai

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 15 years ago

#342

WOW soo much happening! shashank and padma had a son? and it has something to do with armaans dad, who shashank hates! and then armaan and his dad in a cardiac hospital! im really curious to know the details of the past now...this part has sunk its hooks into me and has me craving for more!
im glad riddhima realizing she acted in haste and that she was happy that evening with armaan! his sketchs sounded amazing and very intriguing!
loved how you dscribed riddhimas feelings...very well done!
looking forward to the next one, continue soon please :)

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@ammy-ridz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#343

Nice part.

A lot of suspense here..again!!!...and the a PAST between Shashank and Mr.Mallik.

Loved how you described the whole scene with Riddhima there..I could see her every move, expression, frown..everything.

Hmm..not much worried about the Atul angle..but Shanky-Armaa's dad rivalary..Armaan-dia, Crying Armaan.....Makes me restless to uncover the truth from your 'secret pitara.'

plz update soon.

Thanx.

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction
OMG OMG OGM-- updateeeee-- YAYAYYYY
will brb after i read it...
woahh-- i hope things dont get messed up-- wat with shashank and padma thinking bout shaadi and the misunderstanding between armaan and ridz--
plus wat shanky and padi were sayin bout their son-- hope all that dznt make a mess of things....
newez-- thanx for the update-- and cant wait for the nxt !! =)

thanks for commenting. lets see whether the issues or misunderstanding spirals into something bad or good😳

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@debby_11

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Posted: 15 years ago

#345

both sides there is fire....oh god..
poor riddhima n armaan...
lovely part
plz continue soon

love
debadrita

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#346

heyyyy aria !!!...

that was an awesome update girl !!!... loved it tons...

riddhima thinking abt the events of the day trying to figure out what and why everything went wrong...finally coming to a conclusion... being upset abt it...then her excitement at getting to know what armaan was sketching for the past few days... her mood getting better... alll her emotions were penned really beautifully :) it was amazing to read it !!...

and shashank...hmmmm...armaan...why is shanky guilty abt it...???.. and padma getting pale at the confirmation of armaan's name... another suspence... there is soo much to be unfolded... n also the role of this certain Dia in armaan's life...

riddhima and armaan unable to sleep in different parts of the city...

the story is getting interesting with every part...and has me hooked to it !!..

thanks for the pm...

and continue sooooooooooooon :D

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krazyboutkaran

@krazyboutkaran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#347

nice prt......lukin 4ward 2 more AR scenes.....

cont soon...

urvi

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: missypatel

Much sooner than expected :) will be back!

*edit*

*woppppiieeee* i saw your offliner before i got on IF :D pulled on my pjs and got down to business...!! 😎

I liked the part :)! i think i wasn't expecting this or nothing as such maybe...i wasnt sure where you'd take this..! from all that ive read from you...i've never come to not like anything but nothing that i am famously in love with...but this one i think 👏 got to me the in d most...it stood out from the rest...and i think its only now that ive become conscious of your style....its got an edge (nods at nj) ...

Her thoughts...were so straighfwd yet it seemed like they were wiring out a web..making traps n finding escapes of their own...i really liked all of that....

I didn't like ridz when she was speakin her mind loud...that was like a different person altogether from what i was grasping otherwise...u know...like tey were such opposites..i felt so!

shashank...atul...padma..summit...i am not bothered much about...😆

armaan....wonder what caused him to cry? i am so curious to know...cuz u've left tons of hints...aah! shall wait for its worth....=)

cheers!

~nijaL

you dont seem too bothered about shanky, padma and summit😆 ..sorry but that line brought a smile..so couldnt help starting with it.
glad you caught on the hints, and trust me there are plenty here, that tie back directly to the older parts of this ff...😉
the story needed a push ahead and thats what this part is meant to be...personally not one of my favorite parts of the ff..🥱i have to admit. ridz and armaan both are both meant to grow through this ff and reach a place where they dont feel like they are floating through life, may be more so armaan but ridz has always been confused...
thanks again
😊

Ps i almost forgot, i'm curious about my style as you refer to it.

Edited by olive_green - 15 years ago

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
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will be back soon!

edit:

alright! so you have decided not to allow us to sleep as well...lolzz😆😆!!

this was the part where armaan played the under-role completely from the start till the end. i loved the way she gained her composure by giving a look at the book. again this one scene had an aritsitc tinge :D. shanky-padma.. well that was an elderly talk and i know which will actually take the story forward. but why is that armaan felt so bad and started crying... for what and why is he guilty??😲... there is so much to be un-wrapped yet!

the lady in question here... please do not take much longer time to give us the next part.. already you have planned to give them (us too! 😉) sleepless nights. come back soon with the most-awaited parts!

thanks prasanthi, this part was a lot about taking the ff forward, and i know, the last two parts perhaps feel slightly rushed, blame that on me because i wanted to take it forward...so kind of fast forwarded everything..having read the entire ff this week, i realised i didnt give poor ar a breather to even register their first kiss😆how mean was that..!
about armaan crying, will be revealed in the next part if not next next part..for sure...and riddhima has started her realisation finally..hopefully she won't be running away from armaan again..
thanks again..no promises on the next part soon😳
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Edited by olive_green - 15 years ago

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: dmg_akshu
hey aria!!!!!!!
awesum awesum awesummm part!!!!!!
the way u portrayed every1z emotions was fantabulous!!!
it was a perfect aftermath reaction...!
is armaan padmaz son??!!!!!!!!!!!!!
duz dat mean hez ridz BRO??!!!!!!!!!
m super cofused!!!!! :S
all-in-all a superb part..
pls updt soon!!
luv shai

thanks shai, omg! that would be the biggest tragedy haina😆 if armaan wz padma's son😆
stay tuned to find out!😉

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