FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 20

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

Rosh ........Wah............Ufffff................Haiiiiiiii.................Thud....Thud..Thud.👏 👏 👏(Kya hua...Kya hua? Yaar aise reactions? Utt jao!😕😳)

Me in dreamland. 😍 😍 😍(Wahaan kyun gayi? Wapas aa jaao!😕)

Rani has accepted his love..... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️(Haan yaar....Meri FF waali kitni achchi hai naa?😳)

Yudi nay sab sach keh dia...WOW....Jo bhi uskay dil main tha...("Dil mei jo baat hai keh doon? Do really feel the way I do...Love you oh sanam...beet jaaye na yeh pal..chahte kahen iss pal ko jee le chal...chal chal chal" gana kaisa tha? Issliye Yudi ne sab keh dia!😳)

Mujhay us scene say pyaar hai jab woh uskay qadmon main baith gaya 😍......Mujhay koi kab aisay bolay ga akay? ☺️ 😳(Achcha tha? I had to think think and think to write that! Bachchu, tera number bhi aayega!)☺️

Aur woh Hug.....Uffffff..............can't explain....mind blowing...Rani nay apnay Dil ki suni aur Usay maaf kardia...❤️(☺️☺️☺️ Haan dil ki baati suni! warna YuRa scenes kaise likhti?😳)
She has realized about his feelings....Wow.....(Kya karen...Ab sab jaldi jaldi ho jaayega!😳)

Aur Fanaa kay lyrics.....kaash main RKAB main Yudi kay mun say sun lun yeh sab ....again Thud .......Wah.....Wah...nothing to say yaar...Very apt..... I love poetic Yudi 😃(Yaar Ideas to very rarely aate hai...toh implement kar dia!😳)

I Can't wait for next part ......plz...plz...plz...plz...plz..plz... Update Soon...(Ok...Ok...Ok...Ab enough of pleading me!😳)
Are you listening....😳(Yes yes....with my ears only!😆)

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Rosh,

That was fantastic. Loved the scene. I am glad that you did it this way. Now what! They have to deal with RS. ouch! (Thank you so much dear...Iam so happy that you liked it! I actually changed the story because you did not want to see Rani being so depressed and sad!😳...RS toh baad mei aayenge...Fikhar not about that!)

But this part was really really good. Who says you don't do good with romantic scenes? You were great!

(Really? Oh! Thank you so much! This is the first time I have written something like this!😳)

Now write some more like this. Loved your dialogues too! (Yup! I shall surely try to live upto your expectation!...Dialogues...yaar jo mann mei aaya woh sab likh diya!😳)

Originally posted by: andromeda_kia

Fantastic,Rosni.It was so cool 😃 (Thank you so much Purva!)

Rani is so very different.One can really associate with her in a trice.The way Yudi said his dil ki baat,the way Rani accepted his love,it was so poignant & romantic. (😳😳😳 Thanks so much for liking it....I myself never knew that I would write like this!)

I really,really like ur Rani, Roshni(wow,this one just rhymed! 😆 ) (Purva...Thats why Yudi is mine as well😉)

Originally posted by: jazzybabes7

the like button doesnt do this part justice rosh.... i LOVED tis..
i just got back from holiday and saw a weeks worth of bad n depressing rkab epis and news of the tim change and needed some yura romance.. and our forums ff's have doen the trick!!well done.. such a beautiful scene!!! xxx

PART 18

Both of them realize that they have been hugging for quite some time break out of their reverie. Rani bids him good-night and is about to leave...Yudi says: Kahaan jaa rahi hai aap? Aapko toh iss samay humara khayal rakhna hai naa?

Rani gives gives him a shocking look for which Yudi just smiles and shows her the couch which was occupied by her few minutes before.

She sits there and all of a sudden they hear a noise. Yudi pretends to sleep while Rani looks at the door.

RB enters her room in western attire; she had forgotten that she had to change! Rani looks at her bewildered; only then RB realizes what she had done!

RB gives her a threatening look and says: Khabardar jo iss ke bare mein kissi ko pata chala! Ab yahaan se dafaa ho jaao! Ab se hum Kuverji ka khayal rakhenge!

Yudi is digusted by RB's behavior....He hates her to the core and promises to take revenge on her behaving too rudely to Rani!

In the meanwhile RB goes to change her clothes, Rani looks at her and then at Yudi....She swiftly goes near him and kisses his forehead and runs out without turning back!

Yudi opens his eyes in a shock and looks at running Rani.....He is amazed by her behaviour....He feels very happy! In the meantime RB comes out....Yudi closes his eyes to register the warmth that he had got few minutes back! The feeling was inexplicable! RB tries to stay awake and was miserably failing; she takes out her cigar and starts smoking! Yudi gets even more irritated and starts coughing to make her stop! RB throws the cigarette out! She sees that Yudi was asleep and goes out to finish her job which she left in half!

Yudi is excited, amazed and ecstatic of the incidents that happened! His love for Rani just increased.....He wants to be with her and share everything....He hugs the pillow tightly and sleeps blissfully!

Rani in her room was also feeling very happy and a felt a little embarrassed but slept happily...After all the pain she had gone through!

Next morning, Yudi becomes normal in front of everyone....Only Rani knew the truth! Seeng him normal, RS and CR praise RB! As planned earlier by RS, he asks Yudi and RB to go out for shopping! Yudi feels strange and looks at Saksham.

Niharika who had seen this exchange comes near Yudi and whispers: Bhaiyya aap fikar mat kijiya, hum sab kuch sambhalenge!

Yudi looks at her shocked but is not able to speak in front of everyone. He tells everyone that he woulg change and come back! Niharika follows him.

She calls out for him and says: Hum sab kuch jaante hai!

Yudi: Par..... kaise?

Niharika: Saksham ji ne hume sab kuch bata diya!

Yudi gives an angry glare to Saksham for which Niharika laughs.

Niharika: Bhaiyya, Humne iss ridhte se mana kab kiya? Aapko gussa hone ki koi zaroorat nahi! Hume Rani....Rani babhi bahut pasand hai!

Yudi looks at her happily and both of them hug....Yudi is very touched! Yudi wonders when his little sister grew so big....But is happy that he got some one to share his happiness!

Niharika: Bhaiyya hum samaj sakte hi ki aap iss waqt kya mehsoos kar rahen hai! Hum jaldi hi kuch upay sochte hai aapko aur Rani Babhi ko milvaane ke liye!

Niharika asks him to wait while she goes and handles RB! She goes to RB's room, sees her getting dressed up. She starts the conversation: Bhabhi, Bhaiyaa aap ke liye intezaar kar rahen hai!

RB: Hum abhi nikalte hai!

Niharika: Wiase bhabhi, Aap bhiyaa ke saah akele jaa rahen hai? Yaani ki aapko saara kaam karna padega jaise saraa samaan aapko utaana padega?

RB understands what Niharika is trying to say.....She would carry all the things?NO WAY..... She thinks to find a solution for this soon!

RB: Achacha hum nikalte hai!

Niharika: Bhabhi....Rukhiye.....

But RB had walked away....Niharika thinks she needed to find another way and goes to meet Saksham! Saksham gets an idea and tampers with the brake wire!

In the main hall Yudi is still thinking what Niharika would have done! Rani is also in the hall watching all these! She doesn't want Yudi to go with RB....But she is helpless!

Yudi sees RB coming and moves near the door when RB says: Hey Ladki, tum bhi humare saath chalo!

Yudi turns to look at who RB is addressing and is surprised to that she were calling Rani!

CR asks why RB needed that girl for which RB replies that she would help them while they shop!

CR grants her the permission! Rani leaves with Yudi and RB.....Rani is sitting in the car adjusting his mirror so that he can get a perfect view of Rani....!

Suddenly the Car stops....All of them wonder what happened...RB is extremely annoyed!

Palace:

Saksham signals Niharika thumbs Up for which she shakes her negatively indicating all their plans failed and Rani too has gone with them!

Niharika gets an idea....She quickly clls CR and tells that Yudi left his wallet and went away.....Niharika asks if she can go and give the wallet and return back?

CR thinks but Bhavyata comes there and seeks permission if she too could go with NiSha!

They drive and meet and YuRa and Rb in short while! Yudi sees that car is filled and suddenly gets an idea!

Yudi: Saksham, aap iss ladki ko le jaiyeye, Hum RB ke saath train mei aate hai! (As the railway station was near by!)

RB gets a shock of her life?A pricess travelling in a train?Impossible! RB suggests the idea of Saksham dropping Niharika and Bhvyata t shopping mall and come once again to pick them up?.Yudi rejects it by telling it would get too late!

RB gets tensed as she had plans to escape to night club?.She says: Kunverji, Hume train se nafrat hai! Hum-

Yudi: Koi baat nahi...Aap car se chaliye hum uss ladki lekar shopping mall pahunchte hai!

Rani understands his plan and smiles! RB gets all the comfort she got and is unware that she made two other people happy too!

Yudi sees the car move and YuRa move towards the station. Yudi is happy that his plan worked out! He goes to ticket counter and buys ticket for both of them! Both of them get in to see it crowded!

Yudi: Rani hume maaf kar dejiye, Aapko humare wajeh se bahut takleef jhelna pad raha hai!

Rani: Arjun....Uff....She realizes she called him Arjun and changes it.....Hume koi takleef nahi hai.....Hume aapke saath chalne mei mazaa aa raha hai!

Yudi: Waise, aap hume Arjun hi kahiyega...Apnapan mehsoos hota hai!

Rani smiles shyly!

Train starts moving and after few minutes Rani gets a seat to sit! She keeps staring at him thinking how she could be so lucky to get him. She is snapped out of her thoughts by some giggling girls around her! She followed their gaze and realized those two girls were gaping at Yudi....his personality....especially with first two buttons open.... and giggling!

The first girl says looking at him:Moi tumak bhal pau!(It means, I love you in Assamese!)

Rani is shocked by their behavior....but decides to play on as the other girl was asking her not to waste time because only few handsome guys are left!

Rani to the first girl: Can I help you? You look too tensed!

Both the girls ask Rani to mind her business and they know how to propose!

The train stops as the station arrives; Yudi gets down first and waits for Rani....But she is delayed by those two girls who were tryng to catch Yudi!

1^st Girl: Humne aako train pe dekha toh hum...hum...hume....Yeh kehna chahte hai ki....

Rani interrupts and says: Inko aapse pyaar ho gaya!

2^nd girl sees this and tries to move Rani out of the way!

Yudi is flabbergasted and wonders what was happening!

1^st girl: Haan...Woh...Hum aapse bahut pyaar karte hai!

Yudi: Dekhiye....Hum abhi mile hai...-

1^st girl: Koi baat nahi, Hum milte rahenge!

Yudi is astonished and tries to get rid if the girl: Dekhiye humari shaadi ho chuki hai!

Both the girls look dejected.....but the 2^nd girl says: Toh kya hua, aap usse divorce kijeye aur isse shaadi kar lijeye!

Yudi is totally bewildered by her statement...he says: Idea toh achcha hai, lekin meri patni se kaun baat karega?

Girls say they would do it....!

Rani who had been witnessing all these thought they crossed their limits....She couldn't stand there and went near Yudi: Aap hume divorce kar denge?

Yui holds Rani Cheeks and kisses her and runs from there! Rani gives and angry and threatening glare and runs behind Yudi who escaped these girls very easily!

Rani manages to catch him?Both of them hold their hands and start walking out of the station!

Yudi: Humne aaj se pehle aise ladkiyaan kabhi nahi dekhe hai!

YuRa laugh out remembering the incident!

Rani: Aap ne unn ladkiyon se kyun kaha ki aapki shaadi ho chuki hai?

Yudi: Hume aur koi raasta nahi tha unse bachne ke liye! Aur waise bhi humare khayal se shaadi do aatmaon ka Milan hai....Aur hum dono ke aatma toh mil gaye.....Aur humari shaadi ho chuki hai, Bas Rasme aur riti riwaaj baaki reh gaye!

Rani is touched by his statement and tightens her hold! Yudi understands her and he too tightens his grip! Both of them are lost in each other eyes.....each others unconditional love....! Rani does not notice a woman walking infront of her and bumps into her!

She turns to apologise but her eyes widens with shock looking at the woman!!