AR *Unexpressed Desires* one shot - Page 5

Omg...I almost cried in the end...I have like tears in my eyes...seriously....the ending was so unexpected...You did a brilliant job, man I really wish this never happens to Armaan and Ridhima...lol, I am wishing now that by some stroke of luck, Armaan comes back..and ...I don't know.......you write beautifully!...I loved this one-shot....superb work! Edited by sweetdamage - 15 years ago

sad story but so beautifullly written................but it made me cry!!!!!!

aw dear dnt worry aise hi shots deti raho hehehe it ws beautifully writtn it made me cry nd still i jst lvd it beautifully  u hvdescribd their emotions lvd tht an unexpressd desire luvly title u hv givn to the story totaly perfct wth it beautifull.......
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

well honey,

Edited by janu1610 - 15 years ago

nooooooooooooooooooooo😲😲😲..........................u cud not make da ending so sad😭😭😭................u made me cry..........😭.....................but da story was very well written😊😊..............it was beautiful😆😆....................loved it totally..........u described evrything so well!......😆😆.......u have great writing skill di.......😆😆😆............u cud continue further but those f**king xams yaar!..........

love ya loads.....😃😃 continue ur ffs plzzzzzzzzzzzz........😆😆 ur peaches!....😳😳...

beautiful.....simply beautiful....

hey awesome one shot

Originally posted by: 268143

dat was soo emotional n heart wrenchn 😭 loved readin it

Originally posted by: cutie_mahima