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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey guys!

I've been toying around with a story idea for a while now. It's still a little fuzzy on the edges, but I thought I should at least start it,and go from there
In my universe, Vinay will always be Ranbir

-Characters-

Ranbir Singh Maan (Vinay Rohrra)


Rano Singh (Saakshi Talwar)


-Index-

Prologue - Page 1
Part 1 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago

Prologue

Today he was happy. Today had been a good day.

 
Ranbir poured himself another glass of brandy and felt the burning liquid running down his throat has he downed his third, of was it fourth, glass of the alcohol in a row.

He glanced down at the decorated piece of lacy paper, on which was written his destiny. Though the actual words were simple, they spoke volumes. They simply stated, "Rano Singh weds Ranbir Singh Maan."

Now it was set in stone that this would go through, proof that his plan was finally in action. His plans to get avenge his tarnished life would finally be set into motion. He would get revenge from his future wife for destroying his life, and she wouldn't even know what hit her.

Rano Singh, get ready for hell.
 
 
 
 
What do you guys think? Should I continue with this?
Ranbir will be a little evil in this one.
 
Waiting for some feedback!
 
Yuks
Edited by queenyuks - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

sounds very very interesting yuks

lolz evil ranbir that will be damn interesting yaar i love evil guyzh ahahha

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Posted: 15 years ago
You should defintely continue with this FF....
The prologue sounds really interesting, so plz cont....and it's ok that Ranbir is a little evil...
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Posted: 15 years ago
yea go ahead...i want to c him evil too
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Yuks..please contunue.Sounds really interesting.
And we might even like the evil Ranbir....bad boys have their own appeal.😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

yeah. pls continue. it sounds interesting. ..

Ranbir as the Bad boy is different and fresh. :)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sallu_lover

sounds very very interesting yuks

lolz evil ranbir that will be damn interesting yaar i love evil guyzh ahahha

 
Thanks Ima!
 
And yeah, evil guys definitely do have a certain appeal. I loved bad boy Ranbir at the begining of the show
 
Yuks
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Fallen Angel

You should defintely continue with this FF....
The prologue sounds really interesting, so plz cont....and it's ok that Ranbir is a little evil...

 
Thanks so much
 
I hope you find the rest of the story as interesting
 
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: milas6

yea go ahead...i want to c him evil too

 
Thanks milas!
 
Yuks