Falak's Poem Gallery#1:Completed! - Page 97

Originally posted by: falak01

*~MAYUR CONFESSION~*

NUPUR:

Aaj main uske ishq mein fana ho gayi...

👏👏👏 perfect line!! Fanaa ho gayi...Nupur hum bhi fanaa ho gaye uss confession scene par!!😳

Uski aankhon mein ek shararat si dikhayi deti hai...
Uski garam saanaso se dil mein hulchul si hoti hai...
Bhar leta hai jab wo mujhko apni baahon mein...
To ye duniya jannat si dikhayi deti hai...

This part was really very romantic...like she feels every sensation of him so closely!!😳😳

Usne mere dil par likhi baaton ko padh liya..
Uske hothon ne dil se haar kar mohabbat ka izhaar kar diya..
Poori ho gayi saansein aur dhadkane hamari..
Aur maine use apni baahon mein bhar liya..

ufffffffff Ankita!! yaar tu kaise itni super romantic baatein likh leti hai...!! main toh padh ke hi...in mayurland pohunch jaati hoon!!😳😳

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Baarish ki boondon ke saath pyaar ka mausam aaya hai..
Har taraf bas ishq ka khumaar chhaya hai..
Aaj saari duniya lagti hai anjaan..
Humne to bas ek-doosre ke pyaar ko apnaaya hai...

Rain scene...yesss...you even added a rain scene para..!! uss scene mein we could see their awkwardness of first love...aur tune wohi bilkul 2-4 lines mein describe kar diya!! Perfectly!!

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BOTH:
Sochte-sochte raat-din kat rahe the..
Hum ek-doosre ki nazron mein pyaar dhoond rahe the...
Aaj mehsoos ho raha hai...
Ki hum ek-doosre ki mohabbat ka imtihaan le rahe the...

Ab naa koi dard hai,naa koi shikwah hai..
Khush hain hum saath ho kar,naa koi ruswaa hai...
Ab to bas aage badh raha..
Hamari mohabbat ka caravan hai...

Wonderful. Fabulous...lovely!! Jitne shabd likhoon kam hain tere liye aur teri poem ke liye!!! Its unbelieveble how you put every thought of theirs so beautifully in words...👏

Aise hi likhe rahiyo...😉😉 I'm looking forward to reading the next one!😃