RoKa FF: Kal Ho Naa Ho [Title + Part 1- Page 3] - Page 5

Originally posted by: hmughal1

woah woah woah wat an amazing start yaara!!! 👏

 

i absolutely love ur first part n im really impressed with ur writing style!! wah wah kya baat hai biru! ek dum jhakhaas!

 

well done huni 👍🏼

 

ab jaldi jaldi doosra part do!!

eagerly waiting 4 next part!! 😛

Originally posted by: GAPS

shivz..

update soon jaani!!!

it was a fantastic part, u described kasturi's emotions very nicely..... pls update soon....