Saawali Si Ek Ladki...Premeer One Shot :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Guys.. its been long I did bakwaas... and today I was again out of work and was chilling listening to this song and I was instantly in my Premeer Lala Land, day dreaming. Well, its not so good and may seem bore, but kya kare, needed to post this one desperately....enjoy!!!!



Prem comes down the stairs whistling and grabbing everyone's attention towards him. The hall was tight was tight filled with guests as they were celebrating Lalit and Gaytri Juneja's 25th marriage anniversary. This seemed the right moment to spill the beans about his likeness towards her, Heer, his Heer'

 

Hey aa ha ha ha, mm hm hm hm, aa ha ha ha

 He hummed as the spotlight fell upon him and winked towards Meher, who gave him a thumbs up. He remembered Meher telling him a while before "Heer di likes someone", and the way she rolled her eyes confirmed who the person is. 

Saanwali si ek ladki
dhadkan jaise dil ki
                                          Dekhe jiske voh sapne, kahin voh main to nahin


Heer blushed as the song reached her ears. She could feel his eyes piercing through her. She was blushing , she felt him walk past her, brushing his arms with her. She closed her eyes as his skin tickled against hers. She opened her eyes and found him wrapping his arms around Meher and asking her is he the one for her, playfully, while she crunched her nose and nodded a no.


 
Uski ghani zulfon mein kisi ki taqdeer hai
Uski haseen aankhon mein kisi ki tasveer hai
            Aata nahin mujhko yakeen par kahin voh main to nahin   

          
  Prem encircled his mother, hugging her from the back but kept his gaze fixed on Heer, who hid herself, behind Preet. Preet being no blind to the actions, spontaneously moved past her, revealing her to Prem. She blushed hard as she realized everyone in the room is aware of what is going on and therefore attempted to run but was stopped by Meher, who pulled her in the center of the hall.


Yahan vahan kahan kahan jaane rukti hai uski nazar
Vaise to main hoon bekhabar, itni hai mujhko khabar

Koi bhi hai, hai voh yahin par kahin voh main to nahin
 

Heer being nervous like anything and decided to look anywhere but to him, while he circled her singing, giving her a warm look which in turn radiated through her cheeks. She looked down and blushed. Prem on the other hand, put his index finger under her chin and made her look straight.


 Saanwali si ek ladki,
                                         dhadkan jaise dil ki
                                         
    Dekhe jiske voh sapne, kahin voh main to nahin
 


He kneeled down in front of her on his right leg and extended his right hand asking for lifetime's commitment .
 Her eyes brimmed with tears at his gesture and she caught hold of his hand in agreement. A lone tear escaped her eyes and Prem got up on his feet, wiping her tear pulled her into a warm hug, while the hall burst into claps witnessing two lives getting together.


So how was it??? I want to know... please comment....๐Ÿ˜ณ

Priyadarshini aka Priyo๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Bul3 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh Priyo I so missed your bakwaas..love your one-shots..I listened to this song yesterday only while watching Mujhse Dosti Karogi..nice song and perfect narration..awesome work..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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TOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   I LOVED IT !!!!!! KEEP IT UP
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bul3

oh Priyo I so missed your bakwaas..love your one-shots..I listened to this song yesterday only while watching Mujhse Dosti Karogi..nice song and perfect narration..awesome work..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ



thanks a lot Bulbul.. evn I love the song... I am glad you liked this one shot.๐Ÿ˜ƒ




awesome too good.



thanks a lot swati๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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TOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   I LOVED IT !!!!!! KEEP IT UP


thanks dear..I am glad you liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hai Priyo,

Very sweet & cute one shot. Do continue with the bakwaas of urs.
 
Vrinda
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ur bakwaas is one of the best ever...LOLz
but on a serious note...yeah, i really loved ur ff...
twas gr888
excellent
superb
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nice piece of work

d song fits so well

n ur narration rockx
thx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrinda16

Hai Priyo,

Very sweet & cute one shot. Do continue with the bakwaas of urs.
 
Vrinda
 



Hey Vrinda..thanks a lot for commenting..Will obviously continue my bakwass๐Ÿ˜ƒ


ur bakwaas is one of the best ever...LOLz

but on a serious note...yeah, i really loved ur ff...
twas gr888
excellent
superb
keep it up



thanks a lot dear... I am glad you liked my shot...thanks again

Originally posted by: DECENT--DIYA


hey nice piece of work

d song fits so well

n ur narration rockx
thx



thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: zaibun


hey very good indeed



Thanks a lot๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow beautiful...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ.and soooo cute..............๐Ÿ˜›

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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was amazing keep up the good work