FF: Defeated By Love[AR]~Pt 4 pg18~ *No pm's* 28/4

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cutie_shalzy

@cutie_shalzy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#511

hey rohit wah yaar mahashallah kya mast update tha maza aa gaya their synchronisation ws perfct wht a grt twist u hv brought in this story she cnt marry him lost her memory nd he ws crying seeing her lifeless awwwww but dnt worry armaan ur luv wll bring her back to u hehehe thts wht i imagine lvd it totaly nd specially their kiss wowwwwwwwww wth grt passion thy wre kissing each othr ar to toally fida on her she ws drunk 😆broke up wth rahul grt chalo ar ke liye now rasta saaf hehehe..........thy kissd each othr wahwahwah lvd it soo much nd the way thy wre fighting wth each othr or wo bhi abt kissing each othr lvd it totaly enjoyd it nd specially sheela hahahahahahahaha wowwwwwwwwwwww kya gussa tha poor armaan ws also scard frm her maza aa gaya she kickd him hahahahah😆funny isin'it meendblowing yaar..........cnt wait to read more now lts see wht ar wll do now .......
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

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Rukhsar Ahmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#512

wow i loved it thank u for the pm continue soon

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Piya

@piya2025

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Posted: 16 years ago

#513

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Ahha!Story mein naya more😛
hmmmm..but nice one yaa😉
enjoyed reading..

Thanks 4d pm :)

love
piya.

Edited by piya2025 - 16 years ago

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: priyanka_s
i hope i am not the last....sorry for commenting so late....busy...
about the part loved it totally...ragging stuff and all...armaan kind of jealous...and rahul.. acted like a hero..
well written..
about the present part... .riddhima is now ritika....like in k- serials...hmmmm...😆😆😆
😆
thanks for the pm...

i'll read your other ff soon...

luv priyanka😊

You arent last dear, i am glad that you like it..!! really glad...Yup..not like K-serial..or is it..?? even i hate ekta to core...will try to not make it as K-serial..it will be genuine thing

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: prernawaghray
hey rohit
bro awesome part
gr8 twist
hahah armaan's expression was worth a million
nice happened lolz
but yea why did ridz change her name
n what happened to her
loved it
sorry for late n short comments
update soon

Thanks dear ,for the comment i am glad that you love dit😉
iyeah he was dead jealous...😆
You will know it dear, actually muje bhi abhi pata nahi😆😆
its okies no need to be sorry😉

😆

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: Rashmi_Rashmita
superb story yaar pls cont.............soon😆
i just kuved it yaar😃

& plss so PM me wen u cont.......(if possible)😊

cont.......soon yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃

Thanks for comment dear, i am glad that you love it,yeah i will pm😃

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#517

Nice one Rohit.......
but i hate Armaan here......!!!!!!

it was such a longgggg part....*phew*...

got tired reading....hehe....

anyway......the story started in a diffrent way and now its cum a long way just i four parts...........!!! bit perplexing.....but nice one.......

waiting for it to unfold...

Thanks for the PM...

Love

Steffi

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: Steff_DMG
Nice one Rohit.......
but i hate Armaan here......!!!!!!

it was such a longgggg part....*phew*...

got tired reading....hehe....

anyway......the story started in a diffrent way and now its cum a long way just i four parts...........!!! bit perplexing.....but nice one.......

waiting for it to unfold...

Thanks for the PM...

Love

i was planning to post it in 2 parts yaar, par kya karoon...it got bigger and bigger as i wrote...if i would have done it then part 1 would have been irrelevant...just sheela scene..that would be rubbish..😆😆..isliye bada ho gaya...😉

yeah story is moving fast as it wont be that long.still there are many things abhi toh breakup hua hai😉

Steffi

Edited by Rohit86 - 16 years ago

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Soumya

@lilangel_soumya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#519

hey bro,

kya mast update tha yaar

armaan not being able to control himself😆😆😆

n then riddhima blasting armaan 4 what he had done

mazaa aa gaya

btw y did ridzi get married?????????

plz update d next part asap

luv,

soumya

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#520

awesome!

overwhelming!

amazing!
splendid!
remarkable!!
superb!!
gr8!
lovely!!

marvellous!!
dats it........aur adjectives yaad nahi aa rahe!! 😆

lovely update!!
keep it up!!

loved d kiss part......n d conversation of AR after dat!!
n d sheela part was also too gud!

but y did rahul and riddhima have a break up???

and as far as the present is concerned, its too bad....dat she doesn't remember anything! hope she gets well soon!!
continue asap!!
waiting eagerly for d next part!!

-luv sanjana