Written Update- March 11th (Complete)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sorry about the delay

Sushma gets up from Brij's arms and apologizes but Brij says that he wants to thank her for showing him such an amazing dance and that she dances really well. They hear clapping and Brij tells her to wait. He gets everyone's attention and tells them that he wants them to meet a very talent dancer who is Jyoti's little sister Sushma. Jyoti and Sushma looked shocked while everyone claps and Brij pulls her forwards saying that Sushma was hiding and dancing and doing it perfectly. He asks Jyoti why she never told them about her and Jyoti is pulled out of her thoughts and asks Sushma why she isn't at home studying like she was told to. Sushma tries to respond but Brij stops her saying that this is the first time Sushma is visiting and to let her join them and dance in front of everyone but Jyoti says no because studying is important and to use her breaks to help her mother. Brij just watches Sushma and she leaves. Brij apologizes to Jyoti and she says it's ok and leaves to dance while brij seems to be thinking of something.

Jyoti at the orphange asks how they had so much donation. The man with her says as long as they give them more it doesn't matter but Jyoti says they have to make sure that there has been no mistake but Dayaal uncle comes in and says that Pankaj increased the amount because it's holi. He asks her about her plans but she says she forgot that holi was tomorrow. He tells her not to get so busy with work that she forgets holi. They decide to get sweets made for the kids.

All the woman are cooking the kitchen and Padma tells dadi to make sure everything is ok with the pooja things and she says she will later. She sees Sudha is working slowly and insults her. She tells Sushma to help saying that if she doesn't they will have to wait until next holi. She sees Sushma's weirdly shaped dough and scolds her but Sushma just laughs it off and Dadi and everyone else laughs as well. Dadi asks to see Sudha's dough. Dadi takes it and then compliments Sudha and everyone smiles. Dadi tells Sushma to learn from Sudha. She tells sushma to get the mewa and padma says to leave it as no one likes almonds. Dadi asks where they will get energy to play holi and Sushma says to just wait and see in the morning.

In the morning Deepu and Sushma peek into Dadi's room holding in laughter. Then they look from behind a pillar and peek around it. Sudha walks by and then walks back to them and asks them what's wrong from behind them making them jump. They gesture for her to be quiet and the three of them watch until Jyoti comes up to them asking what they are doing and they shush her. They all watch Dadi who puts on her glasses and looks in the mirror and screams. Sushma and Deepu laugh and run away while Jyoti and Sudha look shocked.

Dadi has half a moustache and beard drawn on her face and comes out asking who did to Jyoti and Sudha. Sudha just stutters as Jyoti laughs. She scolds Jyoti and then says it's all Sudha's fault but Jyoti says the ones that did it have already run off. Deepu and Sushma watch from the side. Dadi says she will deal with them and Padma comes in and laughs when she sees Dadi along with Jyoti who tells her not to mind them since it's holi and gives her a towel to wipe her face. When she is done a hand comes up and puts colour on her face and she gets angry until she sees that it's Jyoti's dad who puts some on the other side and then gets ashirwaad from her.

Outside everyone celebrates holi and even Sudha laughs a little watching them. Jyoti thinks about Brij and how every holi he calls her to dance class and she always says no and wonders if that's why he didn't call her this time. Just then she hears drums and turns to see Brij. He comes to her and when she asks what the is doing there he says that he knew she would say no if he asked her to come so he came instead and wishes her a happy holi while putting colour in her face. She looks around before putting colour on Brij's face. He sees Sushma and calls her over. He wishes her and she does the same. Jyoti says she has to go to the orphanage and tells Brij and Sushma to play holi.

Everyone is playing Holi at the orphanage and then uncle tells them they have to clean up but they say no because they haven't played with Jyoti. They see her coming and hide. She wonders where everyone is and they come up behind her and surprise her by throwing colour at her until uncle comes with mithai. She asks if they had fun and they say yes. Uncle tells her that they were all waiting for her and tells her to feed them. They kids asked why she didn't come because she had to play holi with her family. They all look sad when they hear about her family so she tells them that their family is really big too because there are so many brothers and sisters to play holi with and all the kids smile. She then plays a game with them. Uncle tells Jyoti that she is their sister and mother and jyoti says everyone who is alive has the right to be happy and then she screams out Happy Holi and throws colour


Preview: Brij tries to convince Jyoti to let Sushma join dance class
Edited by sakuraa - 15 years ago


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Not cool ... now brij is going to try to use Sushma!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks 4 update.....wonder hu brij will go4rm their life's......