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Jazz Rocks

@JasminBhasinFan

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey guys..

It's me Amita (previously jazz rocks)

I first of all thank all of you who've read my previous FF KAHANI KASTURI KI and who've always added good comments...

Here's the link for those who would like to read it back or those who've not read it:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1069013

As promised that I would come with my new FF by March...so here I am... I just hope that you will all like my new FF and comment.

I won't be able to update daily as I'm quite busy with my studies...but do promise to update as sooner as possible. Thank you all my friends...

Stay tune😛

Edited by amitarocks - 14 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

CHARACTER SKETCH:

Kasturi Chawla: Shubhangi Atre

Kasturi is an adventurous character. She loves adventures but one day she'll find herself entangled in such a nightmare...She is a sensitve person with good values and manners. She is at times humourous.

Robbie Sabbarwal: Karan Patel

Robbie is a spoiled brat who loves to venture out at time. He enjoys thrilling experiences..in short, he's a dare devil.

Shivani: Mouni Roy

Shivani is Kasturi's friend who uses her for her own gain. She will leave Kasturi alone when she's in trouble.

Riiya Chawla: Gurdeep Kohli

She's Kasturi's aunty who is at times too strict when Kasturi goes out at night. She hates Shivani as she knows that she cannot be trusted.

Reva Chawla: Amita Chandekar

Reva is Kasturi's elder sister. She sometimes get over protective towards Kasturi and saves her from trouble each time.

Ashutosh Mittal: Karanvir Bohra

Ashutosh (Ashu) is a businessman and he's engaged to Reva.

Girish: Naman Shaw

Someone who meets with an accident with Kasturi's car and who later becomes a very good friend of hers.

Abhimanyu Chawla: Bharat Arora

Kasturi's brother.

Prityush Chautala: Manav Vij

Kasturi's childhood friend

Kaushalya: Rupa Ganguly

Kasturi's mother.

JP: Sanjay Taneja

Kasturi's father

Raunak Singhaniya: Jatin Shah

Raunak is Robbie's best friend but soon turns to be his rival as he falls in love with Kasturi. He turns bad to gain her.

*to be edited*

Edited by amitarocks - 14 years ago

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Jazz Rocks

@JasminBhasinFan

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 1 (KAB KYUN KEISSE):

It's night and it is heavily raining. The two friends Kasturi and Shivani are seated in the car. Shivani is driving whereas Kasturi is looking outside.

Kasturi: Shivani...thoda jaldi karo na..bahaar dekho kitni...please Shivani!

Shivani: Oh just relax Kasturi. Don't worry!

Suddenly the car breaks down.

Shivani: Oh no!

Kasturi: Kya hua?

Shivani: The car broke down!

Kasturi: Oh God...ab hum kya kareinge?

Shivani: Tum ek kaam karo..tum apni Reva didi ko phone karo aur samjhado ke tum aaj raat ghar nahin aa paaogi!

Kasturi: Lekin mein...

Shivani: C'mon Kasturi..don't be a spoil sport...

Kasturi: Ok

Kasturi calls Reva.

Kasturi: Hello di

Reva: Kasturi tum? Kahan ho tum? Ab tak ghar kyun nahin aayi? C'mon be quick!

Kasturi: Woh actually dii..mein ghar nahin aaoungi! Humara car kharab ho gaya.

Reva: What? Nonsense this is Kasturi! Abhi ke abhi ghar aao!

Kasturi hangs up. Reva is tensed.

Shivani: Kya hua? Kya kaha tumhari didi ne?

Kasturi: Woh naraaz ho gayi.

Shivani: Nevermind..yeh elder sisters hoti hi iss tarah hai!

Kasturi: Lekin Shivani...mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai.

Shivani: C'mon Kasturi...just chill!!!

Kasturi: Hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Shivani: Meine suna ke paas me hi ek cottage hai...toh hum wahin jaa rahe hai.

Kasturi: What? Cottage?

Shivani: Haan baba!

Kasturi is tensed while Shivani pacifies her.

Shivani: Well Kasturi...mein abhi aati hoon...tab tak tum andar jaao na!

Kasturi: Nahin hum dono saath chalte hai.

Shivani: Mein do minute mein hi aaoungi...don't worry.

Shivani leaves Kasturi alone and rushes back to the car. The car was alright and Shivani just pretended that it broke down.

Shivani: Ab bahut mazaa ayega...my dear Kasturi!

Shivani gives an evil look and goes. Meanwhile Kasturi is still waiting for her. She decides to go where the car was parked but doesn't see neither the car nor Shivani. She's terrified.

Kasturi: SHSHSHIVANI! SHIVANI!!!! SHIVANIIIIII!!!!!!!

She starts crying and crying. She finally gets a hold over herself and goes in the cottage. It's all dark inside. She manages to find the switch and switches the lights. She is amazed to see such a beautiful cottage. But it seems like no one came into it for years. Everywhere is so dusty. Suddenly a hand holds her and she screams.....

PROMO:
Kaun hai uss cottage me jisne Kasturi ko itna daraya? Kaun hain woh?

Edited by amitarocks - 15 years ago

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Jazz Rocks

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 2 (KAB KYUN KEISSE)

It was Robbie Sabbarwal who held Kasturi. Kasturi turns round to see and Robbie sees her and starts singing...

Robbie: Ek ladki ko dekha toh aissa laga jeisse khilta gulaab jeisse...shayar ka khwab jeisse...

Kasturi: SHUT UP! Just shut up!

Robbie: Ehh..Mein tumhare liye gaana gaa raha hoon aur tum ho ke..

Kasturi: Aur tumne jo mujhe itna darraya..toh usske baad kya mein tumhara gaana...?

Robbie: Ok ok...sorry sorry! Ab dekho..hum tum iss cottage mein...Toh dosti karein....I'm Robbie Sabbarwal

Kasturi: Hi...Kasturi Chawla.

Robbie: Sweet name..Kasturi!

Kasturi: Thanks!

Robbie: Sirf thanks? Meine tumhari tareef ki hai..toh meri bhi tareef karo na!

Kasturi: Robbie is a sweet name...ok?

Robbie: Thanks! Toh...KC....

Kasturi: KC? Kaun KC?

Robbie: Tum....oh ok...I mean Kasturi Chawla..ho gaya na KC?

Kasturi: Tum bhi na.....!

Robbie: Ok toh Kasturi...tum yahan...iss cottage me?

Kasturi: Woh meri ek friend hai..Shivani...mujhe yahan chodkar bhaag gayi...

Robbie: Oh..That's really sad!

Kasturi: Aur tum...singer ho kya?

Robbie: Kyun?

Kasturi: Nahin woh...accha gate ho!

Robbie: Thanks actually mein singer banna chahta tha..par mere parents chahte hai ke mein business join karoon...issi liye mein ghar se bhaag gaya!

Kasturi: What? Tum ghar se bhaag gaye?

Robbie: Yes...

There at Chawla house, everyone is shouting at Reva.

Kaushalya: Dekha Reva tumne. Hamesha apni behen ka saath diya tumne...aur aaj woh....

Riiya: Haan Reva..tumhein kam se kam usse rokna chahiye tha....

Reva: Kya karoon mein? Unhon ne phone hi disconnect kar diya.

At cottage suddenly Kasturi remembers home and her eyes are filled with tears.

Robbie: Kya hua KC?

Kasturi: Kuch nahin...aur tum mujhe KC bulaana band karo...ok?

Robbie: Ok...as you wish!

Edited by amitarocks - 15 years ago

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273649

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Posted: 15 years ago

so amita u back wid new ff coooooooooool
congrats for ur 2nd ff

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273649

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Posted: 15 years ago

part1

i dint get y shivani leaves her in cottage all alone
must b sum hidden truth haina
oh beechari ka in dark cottage

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273649

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Posted: 15 years ago

part

so our rockstar robbie's entry cool
he looks so lively
he sings for her hahahhaa
flirty type cooooool
he calls her kc funny
update more

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Jazz Rocks

@JasminBhasinFan

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cutykoo20
so amita u back wid new ff coooooooooool
congrats for ur 2nd ff

Thanks dear😛

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Jazz Rocks

@JasminBhasinFan

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cutykoo20
part1

i dint get y shivani leaves her in cottage all alone
must b sum hidden truth haina yes there's is...which will soon be revealed
oh beechari ka in dark cottage 😭

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Jazz Rocks

@JasminBhasinFan

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cutykoo20
part

so our rockstar robbie's entry cool thanks😛
he looks so lively Robbie's too cool
he sings for her hahahhaa cute part yaar!!
flirty type cooooool 😉
he calls her kc funny
update more yeah..very soon!

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