Written Update- February 24th (Sixth Episode)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ola!! Sorry for the delay!!!

Jyoti keeps knocking on the door and Sudha finally opens it. She asks Sudha why she is sweating so much and says she heard voices. She gives Sudha milk and asks if she wants food. Sudha starts crying and thanks Jyoti for taking so much care of her. She says that she will never be able to repay her. Jyoti then says that Deepu makes fun of eveyone and tells her to just tell Deepu off once since she is older than him and then he'll think twice before talking like that to her again. She tells Sudha to bring in the clothes from outside and to remember to shut the back door and leaves. Sudha walks out and shuts the back door.

Jyoti comes in to the room with her father where her mother is and tells her that he is doing much better. She says that exercising with the new physiotherapist will make him better very soon and Padma hearing this looks up and stares at him. He stares back and then tells Jyoti that a physiotherapist is not needed. Jyoti sees the looks between them and says that she will not budge and in this case the elders have to listen to their children. Padma and Jyoti's father leaves and Sushma comes in scaring Jyoti. She tells Jyoti that all her friends want to see her dance and Jyoti says it must be because she gossiped but Sushma says she just told the truth and asks Jyoti if she can watch her practice. Jyoti tells her she should learn if she likes dance so much and Sushma says that if she does people will just compare her to Jyoti and make fun of her. Jyoti tells her to stop joking and starts showing her steps. Deepu comes in brushing his teeth and Sushma and him watch her dance. Jyoti notices the back door open and she when she wonders why it's open. Deepu makes fun of Sudha and Jyoti scolds him. Just then Sudha walks in and Jyoti asks her why the door is open and to be careful because there have been a lot of robberies recently. Sudha remembers closing it and says so. Deepu jumps in saying she doesnt remember what she eats and is the first to go to bed and the last to get it and so how will she remember closing the door. Jyoti scolds him and he leaves. Jyoti tells Sudha it's ok and not to worry and sends Sushma away to get ready for school and leaves with her. Sudha stares at the back door and looks worried and thoughtful.

Brij and a band are playing as Jyoti dances to a fast song and when she is done Dada says she's like magic and that she was so good that he wanted to dance. He says that her performance brings people to the theatre. He tells Brij he needs to work more if he wants to compete in the city especially since the dance is so good. Dada leaves and Brij asks Jyoti if she talked to her parents about him and she says no because she wanted to talk to them alone but didn't get a chance. Brij says that she has started lying to him and that she doesnt have time to talk. She says she isnt lying and asks why she would lie to him. Just then Dada says that their cheques are ready and Jyoti gets excited and tells Brij to come with her but he says no and that he will get it later. Dada comes to them and tells him to come but he says he will later and so Dada leaves. Brij tells Jyoti to take the cheque because she is going to be late and that he will stay back to practice. She leaves and a man comes up to Brij asking why he wont take the cheque because he was so impatient for it before but Brij says he cant in front of her because he only makes half of what she makes.

At the orphanage the kids pull Jyoti into a room where there is a cake with a candle on it on the table. She asks whose birthday it is and they tell her it's Bunty's. She wishes him and asks who brough the cake. A man walks in and says it was him. In his arms he has a lot of food and Jyoti shakes her head while a girls asks Bunty to cut the cake quickly so that they can eat. He does and they all sing and Jyoti gives the man a look. He looks sheepish but starts singing again. Bunty feeds Jyoti cake and to everyone else and Jyoti tells them to get in a line for food. She tells the man Bhola Ram to meet her outside.

She scolds him saying they cant feed the kid two meals properly and that he was the one who said that they were running out of thigns in the kitchen. Uncle walks in saying not to scold him because he has done something right for once and Jyoti asks him why he is taking her side and he says to let it go. He hands her an envelope and she pull out a cheque with a large donation. He says its from Pankaj his nephew who he mentioned before. He says they dont have to worry anymore. Bhola is happy and leaves to eat. Jyoti cant belive that there are such people in the world that think of other and thanks him but he says Pankaj and they laugh.

Padma picks up the phone and tells the person that Deepu will make it. She puts the phone down shocked and Jyoti's dad looks on asking who it was. She says who else can it be and that someone is coming to their house to stay with them. He just takes off his glasses.

Jyoti brings in a bouquet of flowers and a letter the kids made for Pankaj and gives it to Uncle. He looks at the card but says there is a different letter that he already wrote for Pankaj. Jyoti opens it and sees that it's written in Braille.

It's evening and Jyoti is sitting with Brij. She says that someone said it right that no has everything and there is always something missing like that man who cant even see how many children he has made happy. Brij is caressing her shoulder and asks what she has thought of for them and he when he should go to her house. She tells him to wait until she can talk to everyone at home. She changes the topic saying that she should take the kids to Pankaj's house to thank him. Brij gets annoyed that at her for changing the topic and asks her why she is talking about someone else. He says they have no plan and she wont tell him if she has mentioned him at home. She tells him to calm down and that she tried to talk to them but couldnt. She also says that she doesnt want him to come yet. He asks why and she says because there is a mangal in her kundli and whoever she married could be affected adversely. He laughs and asks her if she believes in all that. She says if it is about her then she doesnt believe in all that but when he is part of it her heart doesnt agree. He says he doesnt believe in all that but she says she doesnt want to take a risk when it comes to him and doesnt even want to see a scratch on him if she can help it. He smiles and holding her hand tells her to take her time. He also says that he wants it so that when they make a decision she takes with a peaceful heart and that he doesnt her to have any doubts when they decide and that he'll wait. She leans her head on his shoulder.

At night Sudha walks into the house and sees Deepu with a book and Padma cutting vegetables. Sushma comes in and she gives Sushma her tiffin. She looks at Padma who looks at Deepu who gives Sudha an evil smile and when Sushma back he looks at her and then smiles at Sudha again. Sudha turns to leave but he stops her and asks her to guess who is coming. He says asking her is useless and asks her who is the more important person in her life. She doesnt answer and he says he cant believe she hasnt guessed yet and asks who was the one who reared her in her lap and Sudha looks up scared. His voice echoes and Padma and Sushma stare at her. Deepu then says the person who gave her good values, Sudha looks worried and he says the person who make her so wise and smart. She looks terrified and he says Stupid Dadi is coming tomorrow. Sudha looks at him with tears in her eyes and he repeats that Dadi is coming tomorrow smiling at her. Sudha looks really scared and Deepu smiles at her until he sees Jyoti standing behind Sudha staring at him.

Preview: Sudha is sitting with her knees up to her chest and has a flash back of being at school where a woman pulls her out of line and tells her to take off her clothes  eventhough she says no and she starts to pull off her dupatta.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fabulous update dear!!
why is sudha so afraid of daadi?
i really hate deepu and the mother!
i adoreeeeee jyoti and sudha