Hello friends....this forum in not new for me but i'm surely new for this place.i'm writing a story on prem and Heer.I can't say that my story is different,just the approach is different...plz read and leave yur comments.
In this story my lead characters r not superhumans.They r normal people like us.
Prem Juneja-- He's mature,sensible and responsible human being but not an ideal for anyone.As i said he's normal.
Heer Maan--- she's sweet, homely and idealistic.
Preet Sidhu--- Prem's best friend and supporter.a very lively man.
Other characters will remain the same.
the large sea facing glass window.she inhaled the chilled air that was soothing her senses.....completely lost in her thoughts.
The ring of her cellphone broke the silence in the room...she took a deep breathe n picked up the phone.
"Heer...." a very sober male voice came from the other side.
"How r u?"he asked in a gentle manner.
"Good n yu?"she replied coldly.
"fine"
"If its possible....toh kya hum kal mil sakte hain?" he asked in a desperate tone.
There was a brief silence on the other side then she took a long breath and stated "Fine..tomorrow Four p.m. ."
Without giving him a chance to speak further..she hung up the phone.
On the other side, Prem....who leaned back in the easy chair,one leg crossed over other,realesed a tired breath...his tiredness was not physical but emotional.
he was not expecting her approval so easily..she had become so difficult and complicated But was it her fault????
.His entire personality had become changed in these two years...not just in looks but in everything.In two years,he realised that the reality of life was that perceptions whether right or wrong influence everything we do..
and his perceptions had changed the course of his life.He became stubborn, indifferent and self absorbed..but was it his fault??
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Two years ago
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prem wearing a formal suit was about to leave for office when Gayatri juneja came iin his bedroom.
"prem..mujhe tumse..actually tumhare papa ko tumhari shaadi ke baare mein kuch baat karni hai" she said hesitatedly.
"agar baat unhe karni hai..to aap kyun aayi hain yahan par" he replied coldly.
"prem..main to sirf.." she tried to say.
"plz....mujhe der ho rahi hai aur waise bhi main already naa kar chuka hoon.."finishing his sentence he left for the office.
In Office
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"Hi buddy..Good morning" preet greeted his friend cheerfully.
"what's so good about this morning" he replied in a little irritated manner.
"Kya baat hai prem..aaj subah hi mood off hai...kya phir se aunty se...." he left his sentence incomplete.
"prem..why yu do'nt like her ??"his question was unexpected and sudden.
"i cannot say i hate her for who she is herself..but i can never convince myself to accept her as my mother....she's my father's wife only."he murmured expressionlessly.
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Thankx
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