seriously ,,,,, u made me speechless "SACCHI"
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seriously ,,,,, u made me speechless "SACCHI"
waiting for ur next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
All the ladies came back to their places happy to continue to watch what was more in store!
Sandhya hurried forward to the curtain just as Dipika also came from behind the curtainā¦. Hugging her she turned back to the audience!
"A wonderful performanceā¦.. (Glancing at Dipika) Can we have another round of applause please for Dipika Gosh!" š
As the claps resounded again Dipika bowed a little thanking for the appreciation! āļø
"Are wah! Kya baat hai? Pyaar ke izhaar ki halat dekhi? Khaana nahiā¦ Peena nahiā¦ Humari dulhan to kaam karna tak bhi bhool gayi thiā¦."
At this everyone looked at Neha smiling who herself was surprised at thisā¦. Of course she was happy, happy never like before the day she and Ajay had gone out for their first official dateā¦. And yes her state of mind, body and soul was just as described in the songā¦. But forgetting work? Wellā¦ That didn't happen anytimeā¦. She smiled at the exaggerationā¦ But reminded herself that the tale may depict her life but somewhere it was depicting the state of all the lovers too!
Just then Dipika asked Sandhya questioninglyā¦.
"Sandhyaā¦ Mujhe ek doubt hai?" ā
"Haan poochoo naa Dipika!"
"Jab ladkiyaan pyaar me padti hain to hume pata hai kya halat hoti haiā¦. Humari dulhan bhi sharma sharma ke chehara laal kar deti thiā¦ Hum ladkiyaan jaante hainā¦ (Winking at Neha) Lekin ladke??? Dulhe raja ko to sab ladkiyon ko pyaar ke phool dene ki aadat thiā¦ Lekin ye alag baat hai ki koi ladki unki taraf dekhti nahi thiā¦." š
"Haan Dipikaā¦ Such haiā¦. Agar koi ladki dekhti bhi to shayad un par taras aake hiā¦. (Laughing as others laughed too) Humare dulhan hi us par zyada hi taras khaayi aur shaadi tak aa hi gayiā¦" š
"Hmmā¦ Lekin mera doubt ye nahi thaā¦.."
"Tchā¦ Phir kya hai?"
Dipika walking over to Nehaā¦.
"Hai bhiā¦. Sab ladkiyon ke peeche bhaagne waale humare sahib zaade ka bhiā¦ (Pausing and smiling) Dil hai hiā¦. Sachcha dil jise unhone humare dulhan ko hi diya haiā¦. (Hugging Neha from behind chin on her head) Phir kya un par bhi aisa koi nasha chaya hoga?" š³
With a surprise in her voice Sandhya carried forward the conversationā¦.
"Are re re reā¦. Dipika! Aise kya pooch diya? Ladke hain naaā¦. Ek kathal jaise hote hainā¦. Bahar jitney kaantein dikhte hain andar se utne hi sweet bhi hote hainā¦.. Phir un par pyaar ka nasha kaise chadta nahi? Aur humare dulhe raja bhi issse alag thodi theā¦. Unka pehla, sachcha pyaar jo thaā¦. (As if deciding) Hmmā¦ To chaloā¦. Dikha hi dete hainā¦. Ki pyaar ka pehla nasha kitna pagal banaya tha use bhi!" āŗļø
At this everyone laughed in the room as the curtains started to move out and Sandhya hurried over to be seated in front of the couch with the othersā¦.
Outsideā¦.
Hearing Sandhya's introduction Ajay got shocked thinking of the prospect of now him been depicted in the songā¦. He wondered how would be his representationā¦. He really hoped it was goodā¦. Already giving an introduction the girls had damaged his reputation him! š Wellā¦ All was fare in love and war! And marriage!
It was actually a surprise that the girls were depicting something good about the guysā¦. Never happened like this in any sangeetā¦. They were used to teasing guys and frying their brains!
Boxer and the others also laughed silently at the Casanova Suri been teased and immediately turned their attention to the next performanceā¦. š
The pots of plants were still there added to by few flowering plants beneath the stairsā¦. The swing and water bolw were also still thereā¦. Before the water bowl however a mattress was laid and someone was sleeping on it, blanket covering from top to bottom making it impossible to say who it wasā¦ Also behind the bowl at the end of the stair case area there was a wooden partition generally used for changing dressesā¦.
And on the other side the motor bike had come on againā¦. And someone was lying on it jacket over his body and a hat over his face! Definitely 'his'ā¦ A guy, the audience easily guessed with the attireā¦. Or atleast a girl dressed as a guy! š
From behind the staircase slowly smoke started covering the floorā¦. Like the ones used during stage performances!
The bedsheet below the stairs started to move.....
Someone got up from it as if waking from sleep and stretched their hands.....
As the blanket slithered down from the person the ladies clapped to see it was Aadhya wearing a night dress, or at least it was easy to guessā¦. Only the night dress coat over some sort of dressā¦!
With a swift movement the guy was off his bike swinging the jacket on his shoulder smiling with the same dreamy expression like the girl.... š³
Since the song was a slow romantic number all the movements were made slow and stretching to give it the true effect of how love was slow and serene and beautiful!
The guy hands stretched out rotated round his space beneath the stairs..... He jumped on the swing catching the top railing for support and swung on it!
The guy jumped down from the swing on his knees and with outstretched arm, dipped back slightly lipsing the lyrics perfectlyā¦. He straightened and winked at the audience! š š
--MUSIC--
The guy then sat on the bike which was facing the audience.... Wearing his jacket he geared up his bike and started to ride.... Air started to blow his hair and the audience turned to see that Purvi was blowing air on the person with a device usually used in cinemas and dramas to blow air on the actor's face! š
The guy riding the bike left the handle bars stretching out his hands enjoying the breeze blowing on his face!
Suddenly the bright lights went on and a dreamy white light came on with the smoke getting thicker!
The guy on the bike smiled wide as he caught a pair of hands that had come up from behind himā¦. Slowly Aadhya peeped from behind the guy and looked at him smiling! She swayed a little as the guy caught the bike's handle bar again riding the bike!
Surprised the audience saw that Aadhya was sitting on the bike?!?!? š²
Seeing her there they wondered how she had got there, but few people could guess that she might have used the way under the staircase to come from that side to thisā¦. Since that area was dimmed they definitely couldn't and hadn't noticed any movement on that side having fully concentrating on the guy! š
The wind stopped blowing suddenly as Aadhya stepped down from the bike with the guy still holding her handā¦.
Indicating the lyrics exactly the guy punched his hand up and brought down on the ground, kneeling down in front of Aadhya, with an extreme feeling showing on his faceā¦. š
He looked up at her smiling as she caught his face and lifted him up and kissed his forehead! š³
The guy caught her hand and rotated her aroundā¦. Rotating behind him Aadhya left his grip and moved under the stairs!
Now everyone knew how Aadhya had come to this side of the stairs! šš¼
The guy then lay down on his back and hugged the jacket which he had been keeping in his hand, smiling looking up, at the wide sky....
Outsideā¦
Ajay, Boxer, Zubin and Shotgun looked at each other grinningā¦. š
Then Ajay, Boxer and Zubin, Shotgun each took each other's hands and started to dance outside! In a slow duet motion! š
Aryan and Vishal looked at them surprised and had tough time controlling their laughtersā¦ā¦ They rolled their eyes heaven wards and turned around to watch the performanceā¦. In and outā¦ They had tough time eyeing both! š
The guy blinked once, looking around just as the white light also faded and the smoke reduced! The bright light came onā¦.
Grinning he ruffled his hair and got back on his bikeā¦. Clearly it was all a dream!
Vishal was watching the sweet performance when he felt someone tap from behindā¦.. Surprised he turned around and saw Ajay, Boxer, Zubin and Shotgun standing thereā¦..
He stood up and questioned themā¦
Vishal: (Whispering) Kya hai? Performance dekhne do naa!
Saying Vishal turned around and started to watch the performanceā¦.
The lights on the guy's side dimmed as the lights came on the other side where Aadhya was!
Attention turned to that side of the stairs nowā¦
Outsideā¦
Vishal winced feeling a crush as Ajay, Boxer, Shotgun and Zubin all came and squeezed beside himā¦.
Irritated Vishal was about retort back sternly when Ajay said.ā¦
Ajay: Aeā¦. Vishal sun naaā¦. Hum kitni der yahan hi rahenge?
Vishal stole a confused glance at Ajay and turned back his attention to the performance and asked....
Vishal: Matlab kya hai? Jab tak inki ye sangeet khatam nahi ho jaati aur hum andar garba ke liye nahi chale jaate!
Boxer: Are yaar! Inki kab khatam hogi aur hum kab yahan se jayenge!
Zubin: (With a serious face) Haan! Aur to aur raat hone jaa rahi haiā¦. (Slapping on his hands) Machar bhi aane lage hainā¦.. Yahan se aur mazaa nahi aa raha hai!
Vishal: (Puzzled still watching the performance) Matlab kya hai ki andar jaana hai hume?
Shotgun: (Smiling) Wahi to! Theek wahi to keh rahe hain!
Stunned Vishal stood up and looked at them as if they had all gone mad! š²
Aadhya was pouring water to the plantā¦. Kneeling down she smelt the sweet fragrance of the pink roseā¦
Smiling she moved over to the bed with the same loveable, shying expression on her face and started folding it! She folded the bed and keeping it aside sat down on it hands on her cheeks supported by her knees, thinking!
Outsideā¦
Vishal: (Incredulouslyš¤Ŗ) Pagal kaise hote hain ye suna tha, ab dekh raha hoonā¦.. Main ye soch raha hoon ki agar un ladkiyon ko pata chala ki hum yahan hain to kya karenge aur tum log andar jaane ki baat kar rahe ho! (Folding his hands) Mujhe baksh do bhai!
Saying Vishal turned around to watch the performance!
The other four guys looked at each other in dismayā¦. Watching from out was funā¦. But from in was the real effectā¦ They thought Vishal would side by their idea and do something, but alas!š
She swayed on the bed and getting up rotated on the spot with her duppatta flowing behind!
She climbed the dimly lit stairs dancing, jumping, flying but still on the groundā¦.
Outsideā¦
Seeing the performances upfolding in the sangeet the guys badly wanted to go in and see from a comfortable positionā¦.. But as Vishal had asked it was like the CBI sealing the doorā¦. No one from outside can open it, unless from insideā¦.
Sighing Ajay just glanced sideways and was about to turn back his attention to the performance when his eyes fell on the event managerā¦. He was mumbling something and coming from the gate, clearly irritated from his face expressionā¦. Ajay glanced towards the gate and saw the watchman there talking to a guyā¦. The guy looked like from the Banjara group who had come to play the dholā¦. š¤
Puzzled he pulled a stunned Boxer with him and went over to the managerā¦.
Boxer who was watching the beautiful performance felt the drag and stumbled a little before straightening back againā¦.. Sensing some disturbance beside him Aryan turned around to see Ajay drag Boxer somewhere.ā¦ Before he could call out to them they were few feet awayā¦. He wondered where they were going in the middle of the show?
Smiling he turned back to watch the performance considering that men had hundred reasons to go anywhere, anytime! š
Aadhya was on the stairs landing holding her duppatta highā¦.
Just then the lights on the stairs brightened white as she put down her hands along with her duppatta a smile lighting her equally bright faceā¦. The smoke thickening againā¦. The air had started blow around strong!
Forget to eat yet you liveā¦ Forget to sleep yet you are freshā¦. Forget the world but you do your regular worksā¦. Forget your name but would respond to an unheard call from somewhere far beneath your heart!
Boxer: (Confusedš) Maamu! Ajay! Kahan le jaa rahe ho? Itna achcha performance chal raha thaā¦.
Ajay : Boxer ! Performance baad me dekh lengeā¦.. Lagta hai gate me kuch problem hai!
Only then did Boxer notice some disturbance towards the gate and decided it did require investigation!
Now the audience noticed the girl dressed as guy standing behind Aadhyaā¦ She turned around blush all over her face and was about to go back down when the guy caught her hands and she moved back to himā¦.
They hugged each other briefly and curling her right hand around his neck she dipped sideways to her left, closing her eyesā¦. Letting her outstretched left hand blow her duppatta!
Ajay and Boxer had reached the manager just as he reached the main door of the house when they heard him mumblingā¦.
Manager: (Upset tone) Sandhya madam to meri shikayat karva dengi....
Boxer: (Stunnedš³) Mr. Natwarlalā¦. Aapko ye marriage contract Ajay ki maa ne di thiā¦. Naa ki Sandhya ne! To phir aap un se kyun dar rahe hain?
Manager: Unhone strictly kaha hai naa, ki sangeet me disturb ki to mere agency se shikayat kar dengiā¦. Ab to vo mere job ko cancel karva dengeā¦. Aur pata nahi kya kya hone waala hai ! Mere agencyā¦.
Ajay: (Smilingš) Mr.Natwarlalā¦. Aisa kuch nahi hogaā¦ Sandhya aisa kuch nahi karegiā¦. Bas mazaak kar rahi hogi, kyunki ladke kuch plan karengeā¦. (Confused) Lekin aapne kaha ki sangeet ko disturb ki to? Matlab kya hai? Aap sangeet ko disturb kyun karna chahate hain?
Manager: (Hesistant) Ji sir... Voā¦
Boxer: Mr.Natwarlalā¦. Agar aap hume bata dein, to shayad hum aapki koi madad kar sakein ?
The manager looked at them for long and then deciding nodded and indicated the man at the gate to them and told them the problem!
The white light went out on the stairsā¦. After a second the other lights came on brightening the stairs again!
Surprised Aadhya opened her eyes and saw that she was in fact holding the railing of the stairs dipping back with her hand outstrechedā¦.. The guy had gone missingā¦. Smiling she straightened hitting her head lightly slid down to sit!
After listening to the managerā¦..
Boxer: Oh to ye problem hai ! Mr.Natwarlalā¦. Aapko fikar karne ki zaroorat hai hi nahiā¦ Waise bhi andar vo dhol bajane waale kuch nahi kar raheā¦. Unka kaam andar ho gaya haiā¦. Andar ladkiyon ka kuch performance chal raha haiā¦.
Manager: Haan sirā¦ Lekin ye theek nahi hai naaā¦ Marriage ke liye book kiya tha unheā¦ Regular hain humare agency meā¦. To poore function tak unhe rukna hai naa!
Boxer: Shayad isi wajah se vo aadmi bhi aapse request kar raha hoā¦. No problem Mr.Natwarlalā¦ Aap Sandhya ki fikar chodiyeā¦. Aap Ajay ke mom ko phone karke bata dijiyeā¦. Vo intezaam kar dengiā¦..
Ajay: (Suddenly) Ek minuteā¦. Mr.Natwarlalā¦ Kya aap us aadmi ko thodi der aur rukne ko keh sakte hainā¦. Hum abhi aaye!
Saying Ajay dragged off Boxer with him to the side of the houseā¦. A confused manager seeing them go went back to deal with the guy at the gateā¦.
Now all around the lights brightened and the audience now noted that the guy was back down beside his stairs but leaning against the stair from the side!
Seeing from front it was clearly visible that Aadhya was sitting on the stairs and the guy standing down, both their heads against the railing but not touching each otherā¦.. Both in their dreamlandā¦ Smiling!
Outsideā¦
Boxer: Kya baat hai Ajay? Vo aadmi bechara pareshaanā¦
Ajay: (Smiling interrupted) Boxer hum Special Squad investigators hainā¦. Har incident me humare faida ka kuch dhoondte hainā¦ Aur is incident me sangeet me andar jaane ka raasta main dhoondh liya!
Boxer: (Puzzled) Tumne kya?!?! Maamuā¦
Ajay: (Interrupting) Tchā¦ Suno naaā¦
Ajay started to explain his planā¦. Just then Shotgun and Zubin who were with Vishal looked back to see them speaking enthusiastically and wondered if they were scheming some plan to get into the house for sangeet!
--MUSIC--
Both Aadhya and the guy had their eyes closed and their expressions clearly reading that they were dreaming about their love!
The music ended with again thunderous claps echoing around the room and the curtain came on again!
Then Ajay, Boxer and Zubin, Shotgun each took each other's hands and started to dance outside! In a slow duet motion!
Oh my God??? did they gone mad.??? Sab to pagal hai. i know.. but Shotgun also??
And ajay ko shadi se pehle marne ka irada hai kya? when girls will come to know , band baj jayegi.then they dont need any other dhol.šš
Wonderful, mindblowimg.
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