FF:Kashmokash, 1- 34 Parts

HI GUys
My name is Neha i am thinking to wtite an FF after reading so beautiful FF like OLD PREM BACK and HUMARA PYAAR .i decide because i cant see Premeer to suffer alot as they show they r showing to us in TV so i write this FF to reunite premeer soon so u guys tell me i continue or not i am thinking to start the story from where it is after 28 jan episode and i will not give u the character sketch and waste time on that as the characters remains the same i will conitinue it from todays episode if u want so tell me. MY FF NAME WILL BE called' KASHMOKASH

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                                                                          Momana Edited by Additi... - 14 years ago

will be waitinggggggggg asap plzzzzzzzzzz do update soon.

ih  ill read it for defo

start ur ff soon.we are waiting

go ahed Neha!!!

HERE is the first part hope u guys like it because it is my first time

hey
nice start. great 1st part. cant wait to read more. update soon 😃

 thamkk u guys for ur reply and appreciation i will try to improve it more here is the second part

                                          PART ===2

this starts from  lallu is sitting in the hall very upset that he have to remove all prem photos and other things that  reminds Gayatri of prem when preet comes to him

PREET+PT; bauji app duhki nat huwiyi PB ki tasweeri humari ghar ki deewaron main nahii reh sakti hai to kiya huwa woh hamisha humari dil main rahengi aur PB kabhi nahii chahti thi ki  kisse ko bhi in ki wajah si

takleef ho woh to hamisha hamari kushi chahti the maa si bohut piyaar karti thi aur unki hamisha fikir karti the app mat ro aiyi (a teary PT says in a very sad tone)

  lallu  realises that his younger son kitna samajdhar hogaya hai he wipes his tear and apna haat preet ki sar par piyar si phirta hai  then he sees Heer standing at the door  meanwhile DJ enters the hall and sees heer she gives a wicked smile and start saying

DJ:Arri heer puttar agayi to (in a very concerned  tone )Party kaise the bohut mazza aya hoga na bari party bari bari log

  after what had happened in the party  and remembering the convo between prem and him she is not in themood to explain anything she tries hard to give only a fake smile to DJ

DJ; main bhi kitni pagal ho na tu itna thak gayi hai ja,ao araam karlo tum ja,ao araam karlo puttar

 EVERY ONE IS STARING AT HEER WITH BIG EYES EEYES FULL OF QUESTIONS FULL OF ANGER BUT HEER LOOKS DOWN AND GOES TO  HER ROOM

  HEER IS sTANDING INFRONT OF HER WINDOW IN HER ROOM ANND STARTS CRYING

HEER:KIYON  kiyon har bar mere saath he aisa hojata ha main jab bhi kisse si piyaar karti hoo bhagwan usse mujh se kiyon cheen lita hai  pehli mera bhai jissi lauta ya bhi to aise ki main kisse si kuch na keh pa.ai phir  ma bauji jinho ne mujhe zindagi ki har seek de har baat samjhaai  har mushkil ka saamna karana sikhai ussi bhi cheen liya ,mere bihin jo mere maa bauji ki jaani ki baad mera ik he sahara thi ajj woh mujh se nafrat karti hai mera chehra bhi nahii dehkna chahti AUR PREM ussi bhi to cheen liya na app ni jis prem ni mere  mujhe se pihchaan karwaya jis ni mujhe piaar karna sikhaya jis si main ppiyaar karni lagi us had thak ki zindagi ka ek lamha bhi us ki bagair  soch bhi nahii sakti thi main us ki bina mujhe itna agi aanna pari ga woh prem jisse heer ki saanse bandhi huwi hai WOH PREM AJJ KEHTAA HAI KI WOH APNI  HEER KO NAHII PEHCHANTA KEHTA HAI KI WOH MERA PREM NAHII HAI BHAGWAN APP NI TU MUJHE MERA PREM LAUTA KAR BHI NAHII LAUTA YA she is crying bitterly.(preet  was passing by her room when he heard her crying and saying all this  preet  was in a shock what his bhabhi had said and suddenly when heer realizes  that someone is in her room she wipes her tear  and turn she is shocked to see preet is standing behind her)

PT:BHABHI (shocked and eager preet wants to know everything he asks heer in a very loud tone)Bhabhi app yeh kiya kehrahi hai app janti bhi hai ,prem bhaiya woh to hamari beech nahii (tears are rolling from preet eyes because it is very tough to say for him that his broter is no longer between them)(heer places a hand on preets mouth by shaking her head in disagreement and tears are rolling from her eyes)

HEER:Nahii preet nahii tumhari PB zinda hai ZINDA HAI WOH (preet is staring at heer that what has she said )HAA tumhari baiya zinda hai woh likin likin...

PT:likin kiya bhabhi  batayi na bhabhi kiya

HEER woh shayad apni yaad dasht koh chukki hai

PT:likin issa kaise hosakta hai ki PB ...unki aarti  apni kandoh pi(its really hard for preet so that and tears are storming from his eyes)

 HEER:AISA huwa hai preet yaad hai us din maa jab kahii challi gayi thi toh maa se pochni par unho ni batay ki unhi unka beta ghar laya hai yaad hai na unhi us din ghar GAURAV SHARMA ghar likkar aya tha

mere ussi phone par baat huwi the likin usse kabhi dekha nahii tha prem ki samman samaro ki CD  jab bauji linne gayi the toh  gaurav sharma ni unhi manna kardiya tha maine jis ki khilaf complain kiya tha woh gaurav tha mere jis se larrai huwi the phone pi woh gaurav tha

PT:likin prem bhaiya ka gaurav sharma si kiya wassta bhabhi

HEER:waasta hai preet  waasta hai GAURAV SHARMA HI HUMARI PREM HAI aj jab maine usse party main deka to  mere khushi ka koi thekana na tha(and heer tells preet what had happened in the party between prem and her)😭

                         END OF PART 2   ok ab jaldi jaldi dsi batao ki kaisa lagga and yeah yeh bhi batao na ki u want a long update or short or this much is fine ok tell me

                                                                                                 NEHA

 

 

Edited by NNOOO - 15 years ago

JALDI JALDI BATO NA KI KAISA LAGGA

hi neha =)
i guess im a little late but better late than never right??
so u picked up from after the lodi party huh??
thank god
its a relief to read ur ff rather than watching the show
i like the way the story is going
sam and PD  are eveil..but y??
wats up with them?? y are the over medicating prem??
ugg.....evil women!!!
actually when i was reading heers monolugue i figured someone would be hearing
and theres no one better than preet to eavesdrop
i wanna see how heer and preet are gonna get prem back
gr8 job
also thanks for mentioning ,my ff.... thats really nice of u
frankly i was on cloud nine when i saw my ffs name there......hehe
keep up the good work
Amana