Saathi Re - Part 1 - Pg 2 - 01-13-09

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Are new talents welcome?

I have heard good things about this show and I wanted to share a mini fan-fiction with you guys...if its alright with you guys! 😉

Regarding about the character - they are same from the show, but the difference is Arjun's father isn't dead in my fan-fiction but he will be soon....

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Saathi Re

Concept - Can we predict what destiny has in store for us? More often than not, life takes us through paths we never dreamt of going on, towards the destiny we never thought would be ours.

Saathi Re is the story of two girls Anisa and Sana who fall in love with the same guy Rehaan, but when Anisa finds out that Sana likes Rehaan she agrees to get married to who ever Sana's family pick because she is indebted to them for giving her a place to live and place in their heart. She can do anything for Sana's family by putting her own needs behind her.
Will Anisa find her Saathi? Stay tune for Ejaz-Ki-Deewani's Production.

Take Care,
Vaishali

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Introduction - Page 1

Chapter 1
Part 1 - Page 2






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Posted: 16 years ago
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Saathi Re

Introduction

"So Anu (Anu is Anisa's nickname) how was your first day at your job?" asked by Sana who was sitting beside her father and Rehaan
"Sana, my first day was great and I love working there" Anisa tells everyone with a pleasant voice after Sana's father sends Anisa into her room to freshen up.
Anisa puts her bag aside, walks into the bathroom, takes a nice hot shower, comes out wearing a purple sari for a change, and joins everyone for dinner.
During dinner Sana's mother asked Anisa how her day was… Anisa replied with a pleasant tone by saying "it was a great day, Auntie".
Sana stops eating for awhile and asks Anisa another question similar to her mother's question.
Anisa replies with a smile on her face in details witch was necessary to be said or else Sana wasn't going to stop asking questions about her job and what she wants to know will be said later when its two of them.
After dinner was over Rahul heads into his room and makes plans with his friends while his mother and father (in my fan-fiction, Arjun's father isn't dead but soon will be after Arjun ties the knot) are busy arguing.
Sana dried the dishes while Anisa put them in its right place afterwards they head into Sana's room.
"So now tell me Anu who are the hottest guys in your work area?" Sana asked with a smile on her face
Anisa lies down beside Sana on the bed and begun to say "Well none of my workers are hot but Rahul Sir is kind of cute?"
Sana: Who's Rahul? I thought Shekhar was your boss?
Anisa hits Sana on her head and says "Rahul is Shekhar Sir's younger son but I haven't met his older son? Everyone says that he is full of attitude and an aggressive towards business also for him business comes first priority in life than everything else."
Sana: Oh my god! Anu, did you do some research on Shekhar's older son?
Before Rahul can leave the house… his father stops him and says "we are going to my friend's house as a family right now?"
Rahul looks at his father and says "what about Bhai who hasn't even came home from the airport?"
Shekhar: Arjun will meet us there, but go into your room and change your clothes by putting on something decent.
Rahul nods his head
Shekhar's wife comes out dress in a simple sari because of her husband.
"Sana's mother" shouts by her father
Sana's mother comes running down the stairs and says "what's the matter?"
Sana's father: Sana's mother, do you remember my friend Shekhar?
She nods her head
Sana's father: We he is coming with his family down here to discuss something important at this hour so make sure the girls wear decent clothes when guests are here.
She nods her head and leaves from there
Both girls lies down beside each other after having a pillow fight and Sana asks her another question witch Anisa said "my life partner has to be kind, loving and honest with…"
Handsome guy walks towards his car after shouting at his security guard… sits inside the car and begins to drive…
Sana: what else?
Anisa: with a-lot of caring for his family and mostly me. Also he has to give most of his time to me than anything else… (Anisa images Rehaan)
Arjun comes out of the car...

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If you guys like it than i'll continue?

Take Care,
Vaishali

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wouw.. it was an great fan-fic loved it, plz continue..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow gr8 fic cant wait to read more cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i'm a sucker for ff's..and urs looks nice....plz continue asap and update regularly😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miss 911

Wouw.. it was an great fan-fic loved it, plz continue..



Thank you so much

Vaishali
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow gr8 fic cant wait to read more cont soon



Thank you so much

Vaishali
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: chococrazy

i'm a sucker for ff's..and urs looks nice....plz continue asap and update regularly😊



Thank you so much

Vaishali

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Saathi Re


Chapter One Unforgettable Day in Our lives

Part I

"Dad I don't understand why we are here?" asked by his eldest son Arjun
Shekhar: Arjun my son, I have taken a decision of your life without asking you… I hope you won't mind?
Arjun: Dad whatever you do is the best for us… So I don't have any problem…
Shekhar: Thanks Arjun
Arjun hugs his father afterwards they go to ring the bell… Sana's mother opens the door and invites them inside…
Sana's father greets them with a pleasant tone while two girls come running down the stairs while arguing at them same time….
Sana: Catch me if you can?
Anisa: Sana, you can't ran from me after-all I am Anu the great
Sana: Of Course Anu is the great who isn't scared of a mousse
Anisa: What does a mouse have to do with this?
Sana: Because I asked you a simple question and what did you say…
Anisa: Sana ki bachi
Rahul and his mother are shock to see Anisa in a sari witch is tied around her waist…. Rehaan stares at Anisa and admires her while Sana's father looks at both of them. He even covers his face in shame…
Sana goes to hide behind Rehaan who is living with them until his family doesn't come back from the hill station.
Anisa trips on her sari and Arjun catches her
Both of them look into each others eyes… and Arjun says "are you okay?"
Anisa nods her head than says "thank you" afterwards removes her sari tucked around her waist and says "sorry" to everyone and leaves toward the kitchen to help her auntie.
Sana whispers something into Rehaan's ear and they leave from there by saying "Papa, I need Rehaan's help to set up Bhaijan's room since he is coming tomorrow."
Sana's father nods his head… and the leave from there with Rehaan behind her.
"Auntie, how does uncle know those people who I work with?" Anisa questions her
Sana's mother stops frying the snacks and says "Anu beta, they are your Uncle's friend first than your boss."
Anisa: But Auntie, I don't understand what they are doing here at this hour?
Sana's mother: They are here for some important discuss with your uncle and now take out these snacks. And I'll bring the tea once it's done.
Anisa nods her head and leaves with the tray of snacks toward the living room…
Arjun looks at Anisa and a smile appears on his face… while Anisa places the snack on the table for them.
Sana's father was going to make the moves toward the snack when Anisa stops him by saying "no oily food for you or else Azaan is going to kill me so no oily food for you and plus we just had dinner few minute ago."
Sana's father: Anything else Azaan ki part 2
Anisa: Nothing…! But Uncle where is Sana and Rehaan?
Sana's father: Sana said they are going into Azaan's room to check over the last minutes work before Azaan comes.
Anisa: Uncle… why did you send them into Azaan's room because they will make a mess and I will have to stay to clean his room because Sana says to do things but she doesn't instead makes the double amount of mess and after all Uncle you know that Azaan doesn't like many people going into his room.
Sana's father mumbles something about Anisa being Azaan's carbon copy about his health.
Anisa makes a weird expression than takes the tray from her auntie and serves them all tea by asking how much sugar.
Shekhar: Two teaspoon
Anisa mixed two teaspoon in his tea afterwards ask his wife and from there Rahul Sir and last person with them.
Anisa: how much sugar would you like?
Arjun: just one teaspoon with pinch of lemon
Anisa goes into the kitchen to gets a half of lemon for the person who requested.
Shekhar takes a sip from his tea than says "Yasir, I want your daughter Sana's hand in marriage for my son Arjun?"
Both Sana's parents look at each other with a smile and say "we are thrilled to have Arjun apart of our family for our daughter but before humari Anisa's marriage we can not think about Sana's marriage after all Anisa is our oldest daughter than the younger one. I hope you understand!"
Shekhar looked at his friend with a smile…
Anisa heard the news from the hallway and had tears in her eyes because no one would think about their friend's daughter first than their own daughter.
Anisa came into the living room mixed in the lemon and leaves from there with tears rolling down her face.
"Anu beta, what's wrong?" asked by Sana's mother
Rehaan comes from behind and says "Uncle, Auntie Can I take a leave now?"
They nod their head and Rehaan was about to leave when Anisa stops him…
"What's wrong?" Rehaan asked
Anisa: If you don't mind picking up these items right now from the market before it closes because there is sight of change in plan?
Rehaan: What's the change in plan?
Anisa: Actually, Azaan isn't coming six in the night but six in the morning so I was thinking of making his dishes before I leave for work…
Rehaan: Are you nuts?
Anisa: What do you mean?
Rehaan: What time are you planning to go bed? Because when I bring those items you are going to prepare for it than do the last minute cleaning up for him because he doesn't like anyone going into his room other than you.
Anisa feels shy because two people are observing her but she takes Rehaan's hand toward the kitchen.
Anisa explains Rehaan all the details about what she needs and gives him money but he says "until I am alive you don't need to give me money because whatever is mine is yours".
Anisa blushed by his comment and runs up the stairs into her room leaving everyone shocked…

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Vaishali

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow lovely part vaishali cont soon but whom does rehan love

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