Okay so I've been told that I should write a fanfic. I'm terrible with coming up with names so am open to suggestions.
In my fanfic, I'm not going to focus on just Saalekh or Ragvir, but both. I kind of want to include as many people as I can, but mainly both the couples. I hope you guys like it. And I'm carrying on from the actual Bidaai. My story starts after the Radha-Krishna performance.
Part 1
Saalekh's room
After the disaster play, Aalekh is really upset and is sitting on the bed waiting for his dost to bring him water.
Sadhana: Aalekhji, apka paani.
Aalekh: Thank you dost, thank you. Dost?
Sadhana: Hm?
Aalekh: Pata hai, yeh ba-badi ma jo hai na, bohut buri hai. Tum wrong thi. Woh achi nahin hai. Ab kya hoga, dost? Ranvir ne tho, Ranvir ne tho sh-shaadi karne se mana kardi.
Sadhana: Aalekhji, mujhe bhi kuch samaj nahi aa raha hain lekin Papa ne aaj Mummyji ke saath galat kiya. Mummyji ko kitna dukh mila hoga.
Aalekh: Wrong! Tum har bar wrong bolti ho. Da-Dad ne jo kiya woh sahi kya. Pata nahin yeh Ranvir us badi ma ko kyon roka. I don't like it! I don't like it!
Sadhana: Par Aalekhji..
Aalekh: Chup ho jao. Ab mere sone ka waqt ho gaya aur tumhari wrong baat sunne ke liye mera mood nahin hai.
Sadhana looks on at Aalekh lovingly as he looked very irritated and she thinks to herself how lucky she is to have him with her and how unlucky Ragini jiji and Ranvir ji are.
Aalekh: Dost? Dost?!
Sadhana: Jee?
Aalekh: Kaha kho jaati ho? Ab late ho gaya, na? Mera sone ka waqt niqal ja raha hai!
Sadhana: Haan, aap soh jaayeh.
Aalekh: Dost, tum bhi mere pass soh jao na, please. Mujhe bohut darr lag raha hai.
Sadhana: Kyon Aalekhji, kya hua?
Aalekh: Agar woh woh badi ma tumhe mujhse door karde jaise woh Ranvir aur uski dost ko door kiya hain, tho? Tum tum mujhe chor ke tho nahin jaoge na dost?
Sadhana: Mummyji aisa kabhi nahin karenge. Wahi tho theh jissne mujhe aapke pass le aayi. Aap fikar maat kariye. Main hamesha aapki pass rahongi.
Aalekh: Promise? Paaka wala?
Sadhana: Haan paaka wala promise.
Aalekh: Good good. Lekin ab tum woh sofa pe nahin rahogi. Yahan mere pass rehna, okay dost? Aao, yahan soh jao. Mera bed kitna barah hai. Hum dono yahan, woh kya khete, haan, hum dono yahan aaram se rehe sakhte.
Sadhana smiles. Aalekh grabs her shoulders and makes her lie down on the bed. Then he looks at her smiling up at him and gives her a kiss, wishes her goodnight and holds her hand as he goes to sleep. He holds her hand close to him and slowly dirfts off to sleep. Sadhana thinks that today Aalekh has brought her into his bed and thanks God for the change in Aalekh. She makes a promise to herself to make Aalekh normal again even if it is slowly.
The clock has struck 2AM. Aalekh wakes up and sees Sadhana sleeping. He thinks about the performance and is very agitated. He slowly gets out of bed and walks towards Ranvir's room. Ranvir's door is open and he sees that Ranvir is still awake and is crying. This further angers Aalekh who goes downstairs and is thinking of what to do to make things better when he sees a knife and walks towards it..
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