hey just finished reading both the parts.........love the concept & the premise........took me back to my Uni days....😳........................ thanx for reading u liked concept my pleasure uni days r best So robbie's a brat.......somehow i like that........😉 😆.................it suits him well dunno y Kasturi seems to be very innocent....😳..........good that u made raunak her brother....😆........ in my view he is best bro😆 Promo sounds interesting.........waiting to know what happens....😊...................i m updating
Originally posted by: shanu333
wow!!promo is interesting!!good idea for promo
FF: PYAR KI KAHANI SUNO PART 3
Kasturi walks in the room. She is in doubt its not like department but hell looking.
She hears door locking sound.she ran towards door.
Ka: kholo kaun hai plz kholo mujhe bahar jana hai
She started crying. She is helpless.
She hits door hardly
Ka: kholo plz mera yahan dum ghoot raha hai
Sum guy says from outside ' have fun' she hears sound of guffaw from outside. Suddenly there were no sound around outside.
Ka: koi hai kahan gaye sab daikho buhut mazak ho gaya kholo.
Her voice was shivering. She is of no avail from outside. She turns.
She says 'koi hai' in very next moment she realizes she made big fool all are wid robs gang. She is about to move she hears some noises. A confusion of mix noises make her conscious. She goes ahead she sees sum guys holding cigarette ,sum drinking bear. Its like hell.
Ka: omg! Ye kia hai
Its so weird place. She is now expressionless she couldn't understand for while wats upto. On left side she saw sum boy and girl they were doing kiss session.
Ka: omg! She puts hands on her eyes '''''''''''.ae bhagwan ye kaisi jagah hai
A very fierce stare continuously seeing her. She ascertains whoz this . she is stuck where she was so scared so helpless. His awry makes her uncomfortable. Suddenly he stands up and started to come towards her. He was totally drunken buddy. His stare is abhorring her. He is coming closer to her. She gets wat he wants.
Ka: daikho wahin rok jao
He didn't stop.
Kasturi continuously crying. Tears are rolling down like storm from her eyes.
Ka:plz daikho main tumhare samne hath jorti hoon mujhe jane do yahan se
The guy was not in condition to hear her plea.
Kasturi closed her eyes she leaves her fate on god's sake.
Suddenly the door opened. One hand places on her shoulder. She screams.
Ka: plz muk\jhe chordo main aisi larki nahin hoon mujhe jane do
She is crying like child
Guy: hey u r ok
She notices some mercy in his voice. She turns to see whoz this.
Its our very own 'raj' aka harshad chopda
Raj: calm down main hoon
He can see her scared face.
Raj: maine daikha k tum ghalat diection ki taraf ja rahin thin tumhara is area main kia kaam to maine tumhara peecha kia phir daikha k door wo log bahar se band kar k chale gaye to main samajh gaya k ye kis ne kia hai.
Ka: pl zap mujhe yaahn se le chalain
Raj: ao
Both walks out from this place. Kasturi breathing highly
Raj: calm down ab sab theek hai.
Raj: ap mere saath ain
He makes her sit on bench
Raj: main ap k liye juice lata hoon u r not ok.
Ka: nahin plz is''..
He interrupted
Raj:samne hi hai canteen
She was crying still.
Raj: plz aap ye peejiye
Ka:she feels thirsty she dint deny and drink whole juice.
Now she is ok he sits beside her.
Raj: wo larke to hain hi pagal aap unka bora na manain unki fikar na karein unka aur koi kaam hi nahi hai
Ka: per main hi milin thin unko agar ap na ate to pata
nahin kia ho jata thanx pr wo kia jagah thi
raj: use lovers point kehte hain wo robbie ki sponsered place hai sare usi jaise pagal waahn paye jate hain
Raj: are ye to mera farz tha
Raj: aap I thnk mc ki class dhoond rahi thin na
Ka sees her watch. She worrys
Ka: omg meri class shit meri 1st class nikal gai ab to 2nd bhi shro ho agi hogi
Raj:chaplain main apko rasta dikha doon
Ka: aur aap ka kia harosa ap bhi ullo bana dain
Raj: kia main apko aisa lag raha hoon
The genteelness on his face encourage her to have faith in him
Ka :ok
He shows her class
Its sign board called 'mass communication'
Ka: oh thanks
Raj: its my pleasure''''''
Ka: baad main milte hain abhi main late ho rahi
Raj: ok bye
Ka; bye
Raj goes to his class its free class. All class is empty he saw one guy is busy working on book. He goes to wards him.
Raj: hey! May I sit here
Its raunak: ji
Raj: maine kaha kia main yahan baith sakta hoon
Raunak:haan haaan kon nai
He gives him side. After few mins raj started conversation.
Raj: hey its raj'''.he show him hands for shaking
Raunak shakes hand.
Ra: I m raunak.
Raj: 1st day
Ra: haan
Ra: tumhara nahin kia
Raj: actually mera nahi hai
Ra: kia matlab
Raj: actually main pehle MC main tha its not my preference to main ne 1 saal zaya kia aur chemistry main aya hoon
Thatsy raj knows robs gang very well
Ra: ok so u like science subjects
Raj: yes per saal zaya kerna para mujhko
Ra: parhai k liye kuch bhi
Class bell rings.
Raj: hmmmmmmm sir sachin ki class hai
Ra: hmmmmm
Raj: kia main tumhare saath seat share kar sakta hoon
Ra:y not yaar
Raj: so frenz
Ra: sure.
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Kasturi rushes to her class
Kasturi widout asking for enterance approval from professor just gets into class.
Its professor agnihotri of teacher. Somehow Robbie gang also scares from his anger.
Zaisha whispers: poor girl aaj to iska poora din hi kharab hai late hui bhi to sir agnihotri ki class main poor girl
Sanaya : ye to gai'''.. she makes fun of her
Robbie sees kasturi widout any sympathy in his eyes. Her eyes bedewed wid tears.
Ka: sir wo main
Robbie whispers to zaisha who sits alongwid him everyday.
Ro: miss 'wo' yahan bhi wo nahin bhooli
Both laughed in little bit high pitch.
Sir: ye kis ko yaahn buhut hansi a rahi hai
Ro n zaisha sits straight and disguise as generous buddies.
Sir: no manners to sit in class.
He sees back at her
Sir: ek to tum late ho upper se koi permission vermission nai moon utha k class k under
Ka: sir wo '''''she is so nervous he could not complete her sentence.
Sir: main to yahan pagal hoon
Ro whispers on his sentence: aj sir ne sola ane pate ki baat ki hai
Zaisha pulls his leg
Za: chup ho jao phansao gay kia
Sir: uni k pehle hi din late kia ho ga aj kal k bachchon ka kisi bhi cheez ki value nahin hai
Ka: sir main class hi dhond rahi thin magar
Sir: class dhond miss''''.?????????/
Ka; I m kasturi
Sir: see miss kasturi apko classes ka paat karne k liye subah jaldi ana chahye tha
Ka: sorry sir ainda aisa nahin ho ga
Sir: ok go to ur seat.
Professor turns back to blackboard and started lecture.
Kasturi looks around to see her bench. Her eyes met wid robs eyes he shows her thumbs down gesture. She got nervous. She saw seat just near to robs seat. She ran widout seeing at ro and hav her seat.
Profssor's class ended.
Zaisha to ka: how was ur date baby!! She laughs
Somi: kia who date thi'''..he taunts more
Sanaya: oh daikho bachchi kitna dai hui hai
She points out her sweat.
Zaisah: I think pehli baar tha
A sound of guffow digs her underground wid shame.
Ka started to cry badly.
Ro: chup karo tum log daikho rola dia na daikho kitna dari hui hai
Kasturi take pause from crying may b sum mercy on robs face suddenly
Robs comes near to her and goes slightly close to her.
Zaisha and whole gang and whole class seeing this vision.
Zaisha feels jealous. Wats he upto.
kasturi's hair touches his cheek he was so close to her she gets back his breath makes surroundings around her face.
Ro: na ro babes lagta hai us ne tumko satisfied nahin kia
Ka sees him nervously
Ro: I can make u satified but u know ur not my type ever
Kasturi feels so ashamed he talks just nonsense.
Kasturi just gets back from him and turns her face wid ignorance to him. He smiles wickedly and get back to his seat.
Zaisha: kia bol rahe the use tum
Ro: kuch nai use uski auqat yaad dila raha tha
Zaisha got happy
Za: oh baby! Tum kisi bhi larki k qareeb hote ho to I feel insecure
Ro: zaisha! Not again.
He is not interested in her romance''' his funda everyday new girl'
Zaisha in her heart: jitna chupa lo pyar to tum mujhse hi kerte ho.
THE END
SARI
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