Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Hey,😃

I made it here too and I am so glad.😃 I haved loved the movie The Game Plan and when I read the intro I kinda guessed it too. WOW...what a great romantic comedy.👏👏 This part was hilariouus. 😆😆Great...Great job and as i always i wish i could write romance like you. You do wonders when you write.👏👏👏

Good god!!! Angad is so full of himself. I mean its just him and his little world. Simone was dreaming about marrying him and he was showing her his man of the series vedio...I thought poor girl where she has stuck herself. 😆No doubt why Angad is still the vice captain of the team.He is a self centred, arrogant man.😡But I still love him.😳 Atleast his agent have more sense than him. I hope Kanan is not as rude as the agent was in The Game Plan. Well he have found his match now. Kripa. I hated him when he thought Reha as a scoundrel...Well guess what buddy...gotta news for you... she is your scoundrel. Like father like daughter remember she has your genes.😡

Lord Kripa was something. In angad's language she hit a sixer on first ball...👏i loved the scene where she said,"I am the captain of indian Gilli Danda team." And angad started wondering...it was hilarious. 😆😆😆And the way she blasted angad with insults was something. Angad you can beat Bret Lee what how will you face the ball Kripa will throw???😉 He was trying to buy her with money and she broght him back to earth in one sentence. Angad get ready to dance on the tunes of Kripa and if you haven't noticed you already have started. And he was clean bowled when he saw her without glasses...jab dance karte huye dekhega toh kya hoga.😉

I am already in love with Reha😳. God loved when she said,"Kripa aunty ne pehle hi kaha tha ki waise bhi aap papa kehlaane ke laayak nahin ho." That was a good one...A very good one. 👏Angad has a teacher and her student to watchout from. Lets see who wins this match.

PS: I loved the nick names Miss Cotton Kurti and Mr. Armaani Trousers....lol🤣🤣

Looking forward for next update

Asever😳

Amneet 😉

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

wow bheegi, another sixer 👏. for the first time i'm actually interested in something related to cricket and all because of u. loved kripa's confident, principled stance and angad's arrogance. Miss cotton kurti and Mr. Armani? ouch!!😆

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Yamini

@yamnovbloom

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Mindblowing really ,

di had u any big grudge aginst angad's character or what u made him seem the most ugliest man on earth and then what a starting

performance by Kripa whoo, hope it doesn't get any worse thanks all again for Pm .

Continue son and inform me for next updt

Love Yamini😳

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nimrah

@nimrah

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Thanks for the PM Sangeeta Di! Oooh Angad and vice captain.. he must be the hottest player in the team! 😍 no wonder he's a flirt.. He's so full of himself..gosh.. poor Rosie.. 😆 she's sucking upto him! uff conceited Anagd! His daughter..thats funny! 😆 haha nice sketch of Kripa! 😆 Wow Kripa came all prepared..go Kripa! 😆 Haha I liked the way she answered him back.. m already loving her.. 😆 Dance practice? Papa!?! 🤣 omg thats awesome! Oooh Angad noticed how beautiful Kripa is.. thats good! Serves Angad right..
Nice part Sangeeta Di! Enjoyed it a lot! Update soon! 😃

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Vijaya

@vallanki

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

👏 LOVED IT

wonderful characterisation...simone...kana..kripa sharma!!!!!

wow you should have introduced "dilli-Dhanda" team!!!!!🤣🤣

it would be more lovely and interesting. And would have made Angad kabbadddi champion🤣

Wanna see AK in both games in opposite teams🤣

Mr.Armani Trousers!!!Misswhite kurti!! how insulting🤣

wah first part is so awesome..hmm what can I say about following parts...must be marvalous

So this time for achange Angad has past with some other woman instead of our renowned Kripa Sharma!!!!

wow..wanna know if Simone is truely had child with Angad...hope it's ot a conspiracy by kripa for some reason😉

So, Angad has to swallow his pride now to handle his Ms.White-Kurti and captain of Dilli Dhanda team🤣

loved when 8yr old kid said "you are not eligible to be called 'papa' poor Angad..itna bad banadiya!!!🤣

ohhh I want to comment pages on this single part..but no time ...too busy...keep posting regulary..

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Vijaya

@vallanki

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

👏 LOVED IT

simply superb....awesome!!!!!

Nice characterisation Kanan-Simone-Kripa Sharma.

you should have introduced 'Dilli-Danda' game for a change..and made Angad 'kabbaddi champion...would love to see AK in opposite teams🤣

Ms white kurti and Mr.Armani Trousers...wahh kya insulting address hai!!!!

loved when 8yr old said "tum papa kehney ki layak nahin hoga"🤣 poor Angad itna bad banadiya!!

For a change Angad has past with Simone instead of Kripa..kewl..

hope Simone is genuinly had a child with Angad.

Now Angad has to swallow his pride to handle his Dilli Danda captain🤣

AHH..it would be so awesome if you have introduced kabaddi-dilli danda here🤣

Wanna know if this past is true and Kripa genuinly brought his child and not any conspiracy!!!

eager to read next part...don't delay....be regular updates.

hope we get another today😉chutti hai na??

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Vijaya

@vallanki

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

wow double posts!!! I thought my message is not posted b4 as I got a msg'not posted'!! read both and reply😉

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Roshni

@lilindiangurl13

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Awesome Bheegi Di

the story kinda sounds like Game Plan. i loved that movie it was so fuuny.

i loved the first part. it was really good

i can imagine kripa yelling at angad like that

cant wait to see what happens next

cont....soon

Luv

Roshni

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

i love your part plzzzzzzzz contuied soon

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Saba

@stars_shine*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#70

loved the part

thnx for the PM

continue soon

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