Hi Jagruti....I read all your parts.........it took me couple of days but believe me couldnt wait to go the next part............all were written beautifully...........some gave numb ness to the eyes.....and at the same time some gave over joy.....happiness and sadness came to our eyes........and the last part really had mixed feeling of sorrow and joy.........above all the love bonding and Shiv ki Gauri was the feel all the time...........really suited the character and First Shiv (Iqbal) and Gauri come to our mind and if you close eyes....could see what you are writting...........your work is appreciable............and I am happy that I completed as I was not able to concentrate on my work....Take care...bye
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