Kappu-Sarla OS: I Hate You (completed) (last part on pg 2)

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My this os is based on kappu and sarla as they are very cute
OS: i hate you

I HATE YOU were the words ringing in her mind, no matter how much she ignores but his words mattered to her and he saying those words nearly crashed down her heart. She in front of him didnt showed anything but inside her heart broke and now she was sitting in her room crying when she heard her daddy coming so she removed all her tears and smiled and opened the door and went near her daddy.
D: beti kya hua?
He said as he noticed her face
S: kuchh bhi toh nahi
She shrugged off and her dad smiled
D: mana ki mai accha doctor nahi hu lekin meri beti kab kya feel karti hai sab pata hai mujhe
S: nahi daddy aisi koi baat nahi hai
D : jhooth bolna band karo aur batao kya kaha us nalaatak ne
S: mai samjhi nahi
She said still lying her feelings
D: mujhe pata hai tum usse pyaar karti ho lekin woh nahi karta na. Tum use bhul jao
S: aapke liye kehna asaan hai lekin karna mushkil. Maine bachpan se uska bohot intezaar kiya aur ab woh mere saamne hai isse zada mujge kucch nahi chahiye
D: mai tumhe aur tumhaare pyaar ko nahi samajh sakta
she smiled finally and they both heard a knock on the door.

(so should i continue this??)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I was thinking of writing an OS on them but u beat me to it!! Good going...Plz continue..fast and make it longer next time..hope to read more and loving it 😊
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Lovely ! I am writing on kappu sarla tooo and please continue this one.

Lots of love
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Originally posted by: Kiran1994

Very nice plz continue

Thanks i will surely continue
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Originally posted by: Naturegirl99

I was thinking of writing an OS on them but u beat me to it!! Good going...Plz continue..fast and make it longer next time..hope to read more and loving it 😊

you still write a story plz and yes next time big update hoga pakka😊
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Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

Lovely ! I am writing on kappu sarla tooo and please continue this one.

Lots of love

Post your story soon would love to read and thanks for comment
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Originally posted by: Chit15

It's good

Please continue

thankyou 😊
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Thanks. I will surely continue
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PART-2
They both heard the knock and she went to open the door and found Nurse lottery on the door
S: haan bolo
N: woh mareez aayi hai
S: accha ok
And sarla called her daddy and then her daddy went off and she closed the door and then it clicks her mind
S: haan...yeh idea achha hai...
She smiled and went to her friend's house meanwhile in the Shantivan society kappu came out of his house and went to chandan's tea stall
C: kya hai ab kya chahiye
K: biscuit dena
C: free nahi hai Biscuit...pehele paise do phir milenge biscuit.
K: arey yeh kya paise paise laga rakha hai. Mai kahi bhaag toh nahi raha na
C: haaan sab pata hai mujhe.
K: shakal mat bana.. Nahi dena toh bol de
C: nahi dena
K: lekin mai toh lunga
And then chandan's eyes fell on the her that how beautiful she looked in a dark pink till knee dress with matching accessories and matching pencil heels and minimal makeup. Kappu seeing chandan looking at something too looked in the same direction and saw an angel. He couldnt believe his eyes that it was her!! She too smiled at him and then he leaving the convo with chandan went upto her
S: hi
Without saying a single word he held her hand and dragged her to his room. His naani was im her room so didnt heard them. He closed the door after they reached.
S: kappu pagal hogaye ho
She shouted and he just took steps toward her and started talking.
K: paaga mai hu ya tum. Yeh kya huliya bana rakha hai apna??
His voice showed that he was hell angry on her and now only god can save her. She gulped
S: woh mujhe laga ki mai bhi lottery jaise kapde pehnungi toh tum mujhse bhi baat karoge
K: kyu tumse baat nahi karta kya mai??
S: nahi woh i love you na toh isliye
till now her back touched the wall and she wasnt able to move but kappu kept on moving and put both his hands oneither side of wall trapping her in between him and wall
K: You know what i hate you
Tears formed in her eyes and she closed her eyes to stop them from coming out
K: i hate you. I hate you for loving me so selflessly...i hate you for forgiving all my wrong deeds...i hate you for coming in to my life and changing it completely...i hate you because i cant live without you...i hate you because i love you more than my life
She opened her eyes only to be kissed by him but she didnt responded back and he broke away
K: arey mera first kiss kyu barbaad kar rahi ho
S: nahi tum jhooth bol rahe ho you dont love me
K: hey bhagwaan
He sighed and backed off and stood still
K: bolo mai kya karu ki tumhe yakeen ho jaye??
he said smiling
S: kappu plz its serious
K: arey toh mai bhi serious hi hu. Itna lamba choda lecture diya samajh nahi aaya tumhe
S: i still dont believe
K: what ??
S: that you love me
K: let me spend a night with you phir sab samajh aayega
He said shamelessly and her cheeks turned red and then she whacked him
S: i love you
she said finally and he then got hold of her waist and she put her hands around his neck.
K: ab agar confusion clear hai toh...
he was about to say something when she pulled him in a kiss and he got surprised but when he was about to respond she broke away and he frowned
K: arey yaar yeh galat baat hai
S: everything is fair in love and war
K: achha abhi batata hu
He leaned in to kiss her again when they heard his naani shouting kappu's name
K: arey yaar. Bohot buri timing hai naani ki... AAYA NAANI
he shouted and both smiled

THE END

Edited by Ksfandishi - 9 years ago
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Aayeee Haayeee ! I really wish they were such in real life man !
I loved the part when chandan stares at her and Kappu gets angry ; ) He is the same with her in real life too All possessive about her. . But I dont think they kissed ; ))

I Hate You wala dialogue was the highlight!!
Wohooo ! *whistle* whistle* Hotness and cuteness ka perfect combo = )

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