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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Sarah_Angel9

Whenever u update ur OS, a smile automatically come to my face bc i know it'd be the best & it is the best! UPDATE SOON! Plss


Awww! 😳

Thank you Sarah!

I thought I am an abysmal writer. But as long as its RaHi I think I can do really good!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 17

RV woke up in his room the next day staring at the ceiling. He smiled to himself. Until yesterday all he wanted was to play the invisible man in the holiday, but all of a sudden, he wished this holiday would never get over.

He was getting to spend time with his fiance, a time which he never got to spend with her as a boyfriend. In spite of being with her for more than 20 years now, he had wasted 16-17 years of it playing the best friend for his own soul mate. When fate united them as inseparables, destiny led them far away from each other.

RV rolled over on his bed. He was happy. He was going to be the boyfriend for the remaining 22 days of his life. Make Panchi realize that his feelings for her were not limited to saying "I love you". It was much beyond that.

Some rapped the door hard.

"Room service" said a voice.

RV smiled, he pushed his blankets away and he tiptoed across the room and unbolted the door soundlessly. He peered through the hole and smiled again and ran towards his bed and turned over on his bed once more so that he was lying flat on his belly.

"Come in" he said in a sleepy voice. He heard the door click open. He heard floaters flap against heels.

"Ahem!" someone coughed "Sir you need to get up for us to clean the bed" the girl said.

Without opening his eyes RV turned over took the girl by her hand and pulled her on his bed. The girl gasped and without RV giving her a warning kissed her. But the kiss was short-lived the girl started hitting him hard on his arms.

"Moti" RV said still with his eyes closed "What on earth? Why are you hitting me?" RV said still clutching her tight in his arms, her wet fragrant hair brushing his face.

"How did you know it was me?" Panchi inquired brushing aside her showering RV with a few droplets of water.

RV raised his index finger "Room service doesn't start until 10.00 am. " Panchi clapped her hand on her forehead. "No room service asks their sleeping guest to wake up for cleaning their beds. No room service wears floaters on duty."

Panchi looked flabbergasted at her own stupidity.

"Last but not the least ... I can recognize your voice even if you try to change it" RV said pushing aside a strand of hair.

Panchi smiled and kissed him on his forehead "I love you!" She said

"Not more than what I love you" he said

"Really!" Panchi said releasing her arms from his and sitting upright "Let's see then" she said looking at the watch "In the next 10 mins you should be ready and reach the 4th floor for breakfast with all the buddies OK!" she said and walking up to the door.

"Wait" RV said "Is every one there?" RV asked sitting up.

"Yes!" said Panchi

"You mean Mom, Piddhi, and Sheeba...Sean" RV said hoping for a no.

Actually not all of them! RV's wanted to say loudly "Yes" Bur restrained himself.

"Mom, Sheeba and Juhi have gone for shopping." Panchi said "That leaves Me, Kiya, KD, Piddi, Samar and Sean" Panchi said ticking the names from her fingers. RV sulked.

"Ok!" RV said. At least he had KD with him he thought. But he couldn't leave Panchi for long with Sean.

"I'll be there in 10 mins hon." RV said as Panchi left.

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After what seemed to RV as 10 mins, he reached the fourth floor where everyone was dining. Sean was sitting beside Panchi. RV came up to the table where everyone chorused Good morning. RV pulled a seat beside Panchi so that she sat in between Sean and RV.

"What's for breakfast" RV asked Panchi quietly "You had anything?"

"No..."

"Actually Pansy" said Sean who was eavesdropping...again "We'll have cereal" he said boring those azure eyes in her chocolate ones "You with cold milk and me with warm as usual?" he winked at Panchi.

"Errr..." Panchi said staring into the ceiling

"Actually" RV said "She likes to have heavy breakfast "he looked at Panchi who had taken the menu card and was now reading it upside down.

"Not right now brother" Sean said smiling at a waitress who RV could see from the corner of his eyes. The waitress dropped the cutlery with a loud clang.

"You see, there's a reason why she lost all this weight." Sean said pointing at Panchi's belly. RV at this point of time wanted to stab Sean with a fork "Cereals and food with fiber overflowing in them."

KD was looking at Sean with the deepest loathing.

"You know Moti..." RV said looking at her who still had put the menu car right "...you can break the rules dear"

"Well then you'd have a plump bride for your wedding then" Sean said laughing at no humor "by the looks of it..." Sean said scanning RV "... you don't want a fat bride walking down the aisle in a jeans and top just because her dress wouldn't fit."

Panchi was blushing so much that RV could feel the heat coming off her body.

"Look Sean..." RV said shifting a little from his seat so that he could face Sean completely "I don't love Panchi because she's fat or thin. I love her for the person she is from within. " RV saw the smugness in Sean's face wearing off "I don't care if she goes fat or she doesn't fit into the dress." He said looking at Panchi who had put the menu card down and was looking at him. "I've taken the vows of marriage much before you called her Pansy. "He said as Panchi smiled "This wedding is just a stamp that would make our bond true and legal to the society and to the law of my country. So I love Panchi the way she is, she doesn't need to change for anyone."

"But because of you she'll be mocked" Sean said Panchi turned to look at him and the she looked at RV as if she demanded an explanation.

"I am the one who'll protect her from everything that's bad and evil" RV said his eyes met KD's who flashed thumbs up which neither Sean or Panchi could see. "If the world mocks her... I'll face them first."

"What if she dies due to heart problems" Sean said. At this Kiya cupped her hands to her mouth in horror. RV was saved of punching Sean when a waiter approached their table with a scribble pad "Sir, may I take your orders?" he said bending low at Sean.

Sean looked at Panchi who was twiddling with her thumb and RV was fuming with anger.

"I'll have scrambled eggs with toast and Tea with cream and a cube of sugar. Thank you" RV said knowing too obviously that this was Panchi's favorite breakfast. Sean pulled a sly smile on his face at RV's order

"Ok! Two bowls of muesli one with warm milk and the other with cold and two glasses of orange juice" Sean said with delight in his voice.

"Actually can you..." Panchi said "make the first order into two and cancel the muesli with cold milk" she said this so quickly that the waiter almost tore the order "and even cancel one orange juice please"

"Sure ma'am" said the waiter who was clearly happy to know that everybody had decided their meal.

RV was looking at Panchi surprised. The waiter left as fast as his legs could carry him hoping that they wouldn't change their mind.

Sean looked at her incredulously. "Pansy??" he said exasperated

"Sorry Sean "Panchi said taking RV's hand and interlocking her fingers with his "not even death could do us apart"

She reached for RV's lips and kissed him very briefly. RV smiled. Panchi looked at him "Thanks!" she said "I never knew you loved me so much" she said playing with his fingers.

"I love you " RV said loud enough for Sean to hear.

"I love you ...more" she said and RV kissed her this time.

RV saw through the slits of his eyes.

Sean's azure eyes were ablaze.

He had pierced his fork in his thumb.

For both RV and Sean "The game had just begun"

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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Omg! I have no words for you!
You always leave me speechless!
It was awesome!
You are a wonderful writer!
Keep writing!
Lota of love
Tinaaa 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
The game has just begun...yea...n a full on one...bring it on.
Loved this chapter...you gave me naughty, cute, romantic n eternal RaHi all at once n e best part was Ranveer spoke all I wanted to hear from him always...m actually elated...I forever wanted to see Ranveer talking about his love for moti n the extent to which he would go to protect her...he did fight everyone for his friend but me wanted to see him doing that for his girlfriend too..Cvs being cvs were too busy with the world so they forgot all about this...thank you for fulfilling this wish of mine.
Sean is sure upto no good..yea that would be exaggerating a little...but could feel the way he wanted to prove that he knows panchi better than anyone else...n he was over confident n smug, me hated that..
Loved the way Ranveer allowed Panchi to make her choice of breakfast known n didn't dominate her choice like Sean did...that's my nonu...

Well this game is sure gonna get Rahi closer...n allow Ranveer to open up abouy his feelings more...until this trip it was more panchi n her selfless love for Nonu that shined in their relationship but with this Ranveer's gonna make his side apparent too..wowww...

Thanks aishwarya...m so loving it all.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Another surprise up your sleeves..???😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: sneha02


Another surprise up your sleeves..???😆



OH! YESSS!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Actually Neha... You got Sean right! 👏
He's definitely up to no good.
Have you ever wondered how RaHi would fight as a couple...?
You will...!
Soon!

Regards
Aishwarya


Edited by aishwarya2905 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Amazing update as always:) loved the bedroom moment<3 hayee & then Rv vs Sean! Haha, i so wanted to see Sean's face! :v Excited for the next part..update soon:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwarya2905


Actually Neha... You got Sean right! 👏
He's definitely up to no good.
Have you ever wondered how RaHi would fight as a couple...?
You will...!
Soon!

Regards
Aishwarya


Aishwarya...with Sean n this game on...I have already braced myself for a Rahi fight...😃

N will tell ya something...Geet n Me always wanted to have a RaHi fight post they got into a relationship n even wondered why will they fight n the best part for us would be the making up... yea we dote on them but fights are signs of a healthy relationship n so we wanted them to fight...not all hell breaks lose types but those that gets them closer...

M waiting for this game to intensify...I dont want it to be a cakewalk for Ranveer cause me knows he's gonna excel at everything so why not make things a little twisted...yep m mad... but koi nahi...😆
Edited by sneha02 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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N yea m loving Kd all through...

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