||Season 2 Buddies FF|| I'll b thr 4 U|Part4pg 30|

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Kesha

@Radiance.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

WOW! The start was the best part.

Revealations and realisations.

I so want this to happen, but I guess in the show JJ will find some other way.

KiShaRa, three souls stuck in ego and lack of trust.

Very chotu.

JJ, poor he. He has to give explanations now.

That bad time had come.

Poor PraChi. They're stuck between the two groups.

Really, in the show too, I feel sorry for them.

Over all, chotu but awesome.

P.S- Next, Chap.2

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: --Akshu--
Rads itna chota????kuch jyada hi chota tha!

ot fair amazing loved it,her stoneface cares for her😳

update fast

thank u Akshu. . this is short because of a purpose 😉

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: --Akshu--
Rads itna chota????kuch jyada hi chota tha!

ot fair amazing loved it,her stoneface cares for her😳

update fast

I m glad u liked it Cherru😳 🤗

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Kesha1234
WOW! The start was the best part.
Revealations and realisations.
I so want this to happen, but I guess in the show JJ will find some other way.
KiShaRa, three souls stuck in ego and lack of trust.
Very chotu.
JJ, poor he. He has to give explanations now.
That bad time had come.
Poor PraChi. They're stuck between the two groups.
Really, in the show too, I feel sorry for them.
Over all, chotu but awesome.

P.S- Next, Chap.2

awww... thank u thank u cherru 🤗

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Kesha

@Radiance.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Whew!

Thank you for re-writing the first chapter.

I wanted to see their expressions much better.

JJ, I salute you man.

KiShaRa, it was a real hard confrontation for them.

Their feeling, emotions, y'know "ubhar ke aa rahe the".

I wanted badly a goup hug at that point.

Hey, this is your FF right?

Can't you add HiMa and Bobby too?

Matlab, y'know, real maza aayega.

Please do this!

For me!

Nothing more to say, you know it was just a re-write of Chap.1, right? So it is just the same.

P.S- Next Chap3.

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Kesha

@Radiance.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Reddu, you're getting the heck of this FF.

Loving it to the core.

Kiya "behosh" ho gayi!

The hospital scene was heart-touching.

KD! He was KD? I thought he'd be JJ!

You left on a very bad art, I tell you.

Jaldi update kar!

P.S- Happy now?

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Kesha1234
Whew!
Thank you for re-writing the first chapter.
I wanted to see their expressions much better.
JJ, I salute you man.
KiShaRa, it was a real hard confrontation for them.
Their feeling, emotions, y'know "ubhar ke aa rahe the".
I wanted badly a goup hug at that point.
Hey, this is your FF right?
Can't you add HiMa and Bobby too?
Matlab, y'know, real maza aayega.
Please do this!
For me!
Nothing more to say, you know it was just a re-write of Chap.1, right? So it is just the same.

P.S- Next Chap3.

Cherru 🤗
yup it was a re-write 😳
Hope u liked it! !

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Kesha

@Radiance.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: blue_Orchid

I m glad u liked it Cherru😳 🤗

Par yeh Aksu ka cmmnt hai 😕

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Kesha1234
Reddu, you're getting the heck of this FF.
Loving it to the core.
Kiya "behosh" ho gayi!
The hospital scene was heart-touching.
KD! He was KD? I thought he'd be JJ!
You left on a very bad art, I tell you.
Jaldi update kar!

P.S- Happy now?

haha will update soon 😉