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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Aha! This is what creativity is about...

Misti , we all love RaHi but that shouldn't close our minds from considering other pairings...

PanSh is awesome yaar...wish we could see them on the show...not as couple, but friends...

Ranveer in here is a total jerk...

He keeps Panchi as his public girlfriend while he goes around town with other girlfriends😡

Joothe chappal tho usse padni chahiye meri phool si Panchi ko rulaane ke liye...

KD se kehdho ki uski dhulayi kar le...

Warna mein kar dhoongi...

Falling out of love and falling for someone a second time isn't easy...

But here I have doubts whether it's RaHi who are gonna fall for the 2nd time...

Coz KD looks more like protective friend...

Great job sweets...

Do write ahead

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akshara

@--Akshu--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

mishti written beautifully!!!par RaHi😭😭😭😭😭😭break up ranveer ne aisa kyu kiya yaar???? but as pansh it was nice!!!!! u tried sumthing new happy for tht it was awesome!!! do wriote more on pansh as freinds it will be amamzing

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I don't know what to say... It did seem a lot of out of character.

I'm sure RV will never be such a jackass even though he's usually bratty!!

It was sweet and beautiful...

Though not realistically justified.

Sorry for a disappointing comment.

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Sweet-bird

@Sweet-bird

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: FeistySoul
Aha! This is what creativity is about...
Misti , we all love RaHi but that shouldn't close our minds from considering other pairings...
PanSh is awesome yaar...wish we could see them on the show...not as couple, but friends...
Ranveer in here is a total jerk...
He keeps Panchi as his public girlfriend while he goes around town with other girlfriends😡
Joothe chappal tho usse padni chahiye meri phool si Panchi ko rulaane ke liye...
KD se kehdho ki uski dhulayi kar le...
Warna mein kar dhoongi...
Falling out of love and falling for someone a second time isn't easy...
But here I have doubts whether it's RaHi who are gonna fall for the 2nd time...
Coz KD looks more like protective friend...
Great job sweets...
Do write ahead

First let me hug you😆

All comments are like wanna eat me😆..Haahhahahha

I know Ranveer is a jerk here..But life is not that easy..The closest one also can hurt you ..First i thought I should write another character's name instead of Ranveer but my friend told me that it is also good. And I really don't wanna change it..As I really wanted Ranveer to be jerk here😆

When I wrote the song's lines me too thought the same lol..But in this case RaHi are not gonna fall for 2nd time😆

Thanks yaar..Hahhahahah so many comments but so less likes, LOL most of the comments are against this OS🤢

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Sweet-bird

@Sweet-bird

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict
I don't know what to say... It did seem a lot of out of character.

I'm sure RV will never be such a jackass even though he's usually bratty!!

It was sweet and beautiful...

Though not realistically justified.

Sorry for a disappointing comment.

It's ok yaar..I m ready for it 😃.I know it's very hard to accept it..but sometimes the closest one hurts you most...

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

amazing os loved pansh friendship and sure kd and panchi will be really good friends

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Really awesome work. Loved it.

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

hey dear nice one...

sorry like button is not working, but i liked it...

only one this i see and want to see in show , KD-Panchi as gud frnds...

for a change liked it too

Edited by -meet- - 13 years ago

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Hey. I just realized I was very discouraging and mannerless with my comment. I apologize.

So now I'll elaborate on my comment.

It somehow seemed that you negated the emotions of RaHi to bring in KD in the situation. True that we are hurt by the person closest to us, but RV even after being the brat he is, will never be in a relationship with his Moti just to to show. If he's uncomfortable with her, they do share a connection that they can talk it out.

I hope I made sense.

Other than the above mentioned part, your writing was amazing.

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Sweet-bird

@Sweet-bird

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict
Hey. I just realized I was very discouraging and mannerless with my comment. I apologize.

So now I'll elaborate on my comment.

It somehow seemed that you negated the emotions of RaHi to bring in KD in the situation. True that we are hurt by the person closest to us, but RV even after being the brat he is, will never be in a relationship with his Moti just to to show. If he's uncomfortable with her, they do share a connection that they can talk it out.

I hope I made sense.

Other than the above mentioned part, your writing was amazing.

Hey, don't apologize dear..It's ok..I was damn angry when I wrote this and the fact is that I didn't imagine RaHi when I wrote this. it was just a girl, and her trust was broken, and her boyfriend broke her trust, whom she loved most..Yup though it was the most tough OS i have ever written, but ya LOL hahahhaha I can't forget all comments..From now will think thousand times before write something..All readers wanna eat me😆 for this OS..😆

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