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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Amazing!!👏 I hope we'll get to see sumthng lyk dis in da show itslef!!😃

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Hun ..This Is So Mindblowing !!!!!!!!
I loved it to core . I just cant pin-point anything which i felt was magical becoz the entire thingy was a magic tale.
From keshav buying balloons to PanSh shaking hands ..
It was fantabulous !!

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

PanSh sibling bond is a possibility...

Well, I don't think KD was out of character, he spoke pretty much the way he would've...

But I doubt whether these two would've actually minded starting a conversation...

But then this was in the spur of a moment.

She wanted answers and he had a few,

She talked without giving much thought...I think this is possible...

I liked the way he called Kiddo and the new art form Panchi created..

Good job dear...

Do write more on them and also on KiSha...

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Priyanka,

Well first of all this OS doesn't sounds wierd. And definitly no crappy so stop saying that. You know you can't write bad.

Coming to the OS - it is a novel idea. As you mentioned in Panchi's dialogues - Her existence is also beyond Ranveer. But as a viewer we have gotten to used to see her tag along him that Panchi interacting with anyone else comes totally as a surprise.

You began this OS in your signature style to throw the characters in completely unexpected place. But the treatment this time was different. It was good to see a lot of interactions in this. That was a pleasant surprise. And most importantly the dialogues were really good and in complete sync with their character.

It would be interesting to see Panchi's character to grow out of shaddow of Ranveer in the show too. I agree they are best friend but still it wouldn't harm to see new dimension of Panchi's character. I hope this pair becomes good friend.

- Shishir

P.S - BTW Panchi and KD definitely have siblings vibe. If they become friends then they would be like Ranveer and Vrinda from REMIX.

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Pree, this was beautiful. Really beautiful! The "kiddo" part had me a little blinking because I did not expect that from KD :P But overall it was a pleasant read. The meeting, the setting, the talk - it all seemed so real. Man, I want their interaction more now that I've read this! <3

Thanks for the PM :D

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: rocksravya11
i really luved it but Ranveer n panchi plzz let Kd n panchi be friends onlyy

Thanks.

Even I'm not a romantic PanSh fan... I like them only as friends or siblings.

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: kittu_arsha
Loved it 😊

Thanks.

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
It was really cute os
After reading this I wanna see pansh friendship in the show too
Loved it

Thanks. Me too.

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: basket_101
Hey! That was really well written!
Reallly liked it!
Especially in the end when Panchi finally realized ki Ranveer ke bina bhi uska koi existence hai... I reallly loved that line and it felt very heart-warming to read of their new-found friendship! =)
Awesome job!
Thanks for the pm =D
Take care!

Thanks Hinal. And a lot of thanks for mentioning the part you liked the most.

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: 100littledevils
U always write awesome stuff yaar!!
I have no words to praise your work!!!
Your OS are so real that i can't help but read it for atleast 3-4 times before i comment.
Damn that iss par n us par line scene was TOO GOOD!! U r seriously great. Please upload KiSha one too. iam dying to read. Iam also waiting for TBP one hehe..
Btw continue with PanSh os. I really adore them.

ps - aww KD called her Kiddo...so cute...Kiddooo *cries* so DAMN CUTE... my besti also calls me that hahaha <3

Thank you... Thank you... I was worried this one sucked!!

KiSha one will be up soon. Sorry i'm taking time. There has been an issue at home and I just can't bring myself to write.

I might continue with PanSh if I get an idea.

A lot of people had mixed reactions to KD calling her "kiddo". In my defense, there are two references for that kiddo. First it was sarcastic, "careful kiddo/kid." is something I hear everywhere on the beach where kids are playing and do not stay alert. Also, since PanSh give a sibling-ly vibe to me, I always assumed KD treating her like a kid sister.

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